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Today, I made first baby meal for Ha-min. It's a shame to say, but until this time, my mom-in-law had been making Ha-min's meal instead of me since I was not confident in cooking at all (especially, for a baby..) I had been quite afraid of feeding what I made to my too-young baby. However, I think I've been taking mom-in-law's efforts for granted. When she told me to try making it by myself this time, I was a little embarrassed but I knew I already should have done it before she said so. It took hours making it and fortunately, Ha-min ate it well. I think I should appreciate my mom-in-law more.

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Today, I made first baby meal for Ha-min.


Today, I made first made a baby meal for Ha-min. Today, I first made a baby meal for Ha-min.

It's a shame to say, but until this time, my mom-in-law had been making Ha-min's meal instead of me since I was not confident in cooking at all (especially, for a baby..) I had been quite afraid of feeding what I made to my too-young baby.


It's a shame to say, but until this time, my mom-in-law had been making Ha-min's meal instead of me since I was not confident in cooking at all (especially, for a baby..) I had been quite afraid of feeding what I made to my too-very young baby. It's a shame to say, but until this time, my mom-in-law had been making Ha-min's meal instead of me since I was not confident in cooking at all (especially, for a baby..) I had been quite afraid of feeding what I made to my very young baby.

It's a shame to say, but until this time, my momther-in-law had been making Ha-min's meal instead of me since I was not confident in cooking at all (especially, for a baby...) I had been quite afraid of feeding what I made to my too-young baby. It's a shame to say, but until this time, my mother-in-law had been making Ha-min's meal instead of me since I was not confident in cooking at all (especially, for a baby...) I had been quite afraid of feeding what I made to my too-young baby.

“Mom-in-law” isn’t in usage so far as I know. “Mother-in-law” is the accepted expression.

However, I think I've been taking mom-in-law's efforts for granted.


When she told me to try making it by myself this time, I was a little embarrassed but I knew I already should have done it before she said so.


When she told me to try making it by myself this time, I was a little embarrassed, but I knew I already should have done it before she said so. When she told me to try making it by myself this time, I was a little embarrassed, but I knew I already should have done it before.

I think “before she said so” is implied in “before” here, so no need to spell it out.

It took hours making it and fortunately, Ha-min ate it well.


It took hours making it and fortunately, Ha-min ate it wellenjoyed it. It took hours making it and fortunately, Ha-min enjoyed it.

“Ate it well” isn’t an expression. I wasn’t sure quite what you meant, but I’m guessing “enjoyed it” comes close.

I think I should appreciate my mom-in-law more.


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