Jan. 18, 2021
January 18
My school is located on the top of the hill, so the temperature is lower than the city. I’m writing an English diary entry at school right now and I’m really cold.
自分の学校は丘の上の高いところにあるから、街と比べて気温が低い。だから今学校で日記を書いているが、ものすごく寒い。
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My school is located on the top of thea hill, so the temperature is lower than the city.
My school is located on the top of a hill, so the temperature is lower than the city.
We'd use the article "a" here instead of "the" because there are probably many hills as opposed to just one.
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Very good work! I hope it gets warmer.
Jan. 19, 2021
Thank you for correcting!
It's still cold here haha
January 18th January 18th
My school is located on the top of tha large hill, so the temperature is lower than the city.
My school is located on top of a large hill, so the temperature is lower than the city.
丘の上の<<高い>>ところ I'm basically emphasizing the 高い
I’m writing an English diary entry at school right now and I’m really cold.
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Nice work! Go buy 2 of those hot corn drinks! Those kept me warm when I was studying in Japan haha
Jan. 18, 2021
Thank you for correcting!
I should have brought a hot water :)
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My school is located on the top of the hill, so the temperature is lower than the city.
My school is located on 丘の上の<<高い>>ところ I'm basically emphasizing the 高い
My school is located on the top of We'd use the article "a" here instead of "the" because there are probably many hills as opposed to just one. |
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