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trashbuged

Sept. 6, 2020

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I don't know much about rap

This is a confession: I don't know much about rap. But like everyone who grew up in the 90s, I did listen to Eminem, 2Pac, and the rest. But i never looked up the lyrics nor did I read the artists Wikipedia page. I just repeated some catchphrases in very bad English, just to be cool. Talk about uncultured.

Today I started a new series on Netflix called "Unsolved", which is a dramatization of the 2Pac and Notorious BIG murder investigation. I liked the first episodes because it goes back in time and shows us the rap scene of the 90s. But there's also a ton of conflict: white people vs black people, cops vs gangsters and East coast vs West coast.

I will likely watch the rest of the season 1 because I feel I can learn a lot about history, music and how the society was back then. Maybe I can even learn some slang and finally understand what they rapped about in the rap songs of my teenage years.

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Sept. 7, 2020

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But, like everyone who grew up in the 90s, I did listen to Eminem, 2Pac, and the rest.

An extra comma allows for better flow.

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Sept. 7, 2020

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But lLike everyone who grew up in the 90s, I did listened to Eminem, 2Pac, and the rest.

"But" needs something to contrast, like "I don't know much about rap, but I still like it."

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Sept. 9, 2020

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There *is* contrast. "I don't know much about rap, but I *did* listen to some when I was young."

I don't know much about rap


This is a confession: I don't know much about rap.


This is aI'll confession: I don't know much about rap. I'll confess: I don't know much about rap.

But like everyone who grew up in the 90s, I did listen to Eminem, 2Pac, and the rest.


But lLike everyone who grew up in the 90s, I did listened to Eminem, 2Pac, and the rest. Like everyone who grew up in the 90s, I listened to Eminem, 2Pac, and the rest.

"But" needs something to contrast, like "I don't know much about rap, but I still like it."

But, like everyone who grew up in the 90s, I did listen to Eminem, 2Pac, and the rest. But, like everyone who grew up in the 90s, I did listen to Eminem, 2Pac, and the rest.

An extra comma allows for better flow.

But i never looked up the lyrics nor did I read the artists Wikipedia page.


But iI never looked up theany lyrics nor did I read any of the artists' Wikipedia pages. But I never looked up any lyrics nor did I read any of the artists' Wikipedia pages.

But iHowever, I never looked up theany lyrics, nor did I read the artists' Wikipedia pages. However, I never looked up any lyrics, nor did I read the artists' Wikipedia pages.

Repeating but is weird.

I just repeated some catchphrases in very bad English, just to be cool.


I just repeated some catchphrases in verreally bad English, just to besound cool. I just repeated some catchphrases in really bad English, just to sound cool.

Talk about uncultured.


Talk about being uncultured. Talk about being uncultured.

"Talk about uncultured" sounds fine too, but I think this is better.

Today I started a new series on Netflix called "Unsolved", which is a dramatization of the 2Pac and Notorious BIG murder investigation.


Today I started a new series on Netflix called "Unsolved", which is a dramatization of the investigation of the murders of 2Pac and Notorious BIG murder investigation. Today I started a new series on Netflix called "Unsolved", which is a dramatization of the investigation of the murders of 2Pac and Notorious BIG.

"the 2Pac murder investigation" or "the Notorious BIG murder investigation" both sound OK, but "the 2Pac and Notorious BIG murder investigation" is confusing because "and" is ambiguous.

Today I started watching a new series on Netflix called "Unsolved", which is a dramatization of the investigation of the murders of 2Pac and Notorious BIG murder investigation. Today I started watching a new series on Netflix called "Unsolved", which is a dramatization of the investigation of the murders of 2Pac and Notorious BIG.

I liked the first episodes because it goes back in time and shows us the rap scene of the 90s.


I liked the first episodes because it goesthey went back in time andto shows us the rap scene of the 90s. I liked the first episodes because they went back in time to show us the rap scene of the 90s.

I liked the first episodes because it goesthey went back in time and showsed us the rap scene of the 90s. I liked the first episodes because they went back in time and showed us the rap scene of the 90s.

But there's also a ton of conflict: white people vs black people, cops vs gangsters and East coast vs West coast.


But there's alsoThere was a ton of conflict: white people vs. black people, cops vs. gangsters and East cCoast vs. West cCoast. There was a ton of conflict: white people vs. black people, cops vs. gangsters and East Coast vs. West Coast.

"But" needs something to contrast, e.g. "It was a wild and romantic era, but there was also a ton of conflict."

But tThere' was also a ton of conflict: white people vs. black people, cops vs. gangsters, and the East cCoast vs the West cCoast. There was also a ton of conflict: white people vs. black people, cops vs. gangsters, and the East Coast vs the West Coast.

I will likely watch the rest of the season 1 because I feel I can learn a lot about history, music and how the society was back then.


I will most likely watch the rest of the season 1 because I feel I can learn a lot about history, music, and how the society was back then. I will most likely watch the rest of season 1 because I feel I can learn a lot about history, music, and how society was back then.

I will likeprobably watch the rest of the season 1 because I feel I canlike I'll be able to learn a lot about history, music, and how the society was back then. I will probably watch the rest of season 1 because I feel like I'll be able to learn a lot about history, music, and how society was back then.

Maybe I can even learn some slang and finally understand what they rapped about in the rap songs of my teenage years.


Maybe I can even learn some slang and finally understand what they rapped about in the rap songs of my teenage years. Maybe I can even learn some slang and finally understand what they rapped about in the songs of my teenage years.

Maybe I can'll even be able to learn some slang and finally understand what they rappedall those rappers were rapping about in the rap songs of my teenage years. Maybe I'll even be able to learn some slang and finally understand what all those rappers were rapping about in the rap songs of my teenage years.

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