There are lots of places where you should tgo gto. There are lots of places you should go to.

"Where" is not exactly incorrect, but leaving it out sounds a bit more fluent.

There are a lots of places where you should to go. There are a lot of places where you should go.

OR There are a lot of places where you should visit. Personally I prefer “visit”. It's just slightly more specific

There are lots of places where you should to go. There are lots of places where you should go.

"should" never has "to" follow it. 懐かし〜い！

☑︎These are onsome of the most famous food and places so please check it out! ☑︎These are some of the most famous food and places so please check it out!

Because "These" is plural, you need "some" here instead of "one." (Compare: "This is one of the most famous...")

☑︎These are onsome of the most famous foods and places so please check ithem out! ☑︎These are some of the most famous foods and places so please check them out!

Foods and places are plural so you must make sure all references to those words (ie. These, them) are plural

☑︎These are onsome of the most famous food and places and sightseeing spots so please check ithem out! ☑︎These are some of the most famous food places and sightseeing spots so please check them out!

these, some, them → plural this, one, it → singular

1:. 551 Horai 1. 551 Horai

This is thea Butaman shop. This is a Butaman shop.

There are probably other Butaman shops and not just one so I edited the "the" to "a."

“Butaman” means pork mince-filled steamed buns. “Butaman” means pork mince steamed buns.

You're right that the word before “filled” should be hyphenated but because “pork mince” is two words it gets a bit difficult and it's easier to just rearrange the sentence a bit. Defining words from other languages- use quotation marks

Butaman means pork minced pork-filled steamed buns. Butaman means minced pork-filled steamed buns.

The main store is located in near Dotonbori. The main store is located near Dotonbori.

The main store is located in near Dotonbori. The main store is located near Dotonbori.

State of being (to be” must connect subject and location) Ex. She is outside of the mall right now. ✅ She outside of the mall right now. ❌

The main store is located in near Dotonbori. The main store is located in Dotonbori.

We don't use "in" and "near" together in the same sentence. One or the other is how we use it.

2:. Rikur’s (Uncle Rikuro’s cCheesecake) 2. Rikur’s (Uncle Rikuro’s Cheesecake)

This cheesecake is so flurry. This cheesecake is so flurry.

Maybe you mean "fluffy"? Like, very soft and airy? "Flurry" usually means a swirling something, so more of a movement. (Like a "flurry of snow").

Thise cheesecake at this store is so flurrffy. The cheesecake at this store is so fluffy.

We haven't explicitly mentioned cheesecake yet (the title doesn't count) so instead of saying “this cheesecake” (what cheesecake?) we say “the cheesecake at this store/sold here/at Uncle Rikuro’s/whatever descriptor you want is so fluffy.” Fluffy - ふわふわ Flurry - 小雪 (there are a few other definitions but I think you meant “fluffy” here)

This cheesecake is so flurrffy. This cheesecake is so fluffy.

また、この添削の方が自然です。 The cheesecake here is so fluffy.

I’m sure almost all people like it iff you like cheesecake, you’ll like cheesecakeUncle Rikuro’s. If you like cheesecake, you’ll like Uncle Rikuro’s.

“If you like ____, you'll like ___.” - common phrase

I’'m sure almost all people like it if youl the people who like cheesecake will like this. I'm sure all the people who like cheesecake will like this.

This main store is also located in near Dotonbori. This main store is also located near Dotonbori.

"in" and "near" can't exist together in these sentences, because "in Dotonbori" would mean it's inside the city, whereas "near" means it's not inside the city. :)

ThiUncle Rikuro’s main store is also located in near Dotonbori. Uncle Rikuro’s main store is also located near Dotonbori.

Thise main store is also located in near Dotonbori. The main store is also located in Dotonbori.

3:. Kukuru 3. Kukuru

ThisKukuro is a delicious takoyaki restaurant! Kukuro is a delicious takoyaki restaurant!

This is a delicious takoyaki restaurante takoyaki here is delicious! The takoyaki here is delicious!

日本語と違って、アメリカでは、レストランではなく、食べ物は美味しいです。

In Osaka, tThere are many takoyaki restaurants but my recommendation is definitelyin Osaka, but I definitely recommend this one. There are many takoyaki restaurants in Osaka, but I definitely recommend this one.

Seperatin “In Osaka” out at the beginning marks Osaka as the topic of the sentence. It's kind of like you're saying 大阪には instead of 大阪に. Its not wrong, but it puts too much focus on Osaka, if that makes sense It's usually better to use a verb than a more complex object phrase. Ex. I think you should take the course >> My thought is that you should take the course (not incorrect but awkward)

You can’t go wrong with herethis! You can’t go wrong with this!

You can’t wrong with herethis restaurant! You can’t wrong with this restaurant!

You can’t go wrong with here! You can’t go wrong here!

This main store is also located in Dotonbori. This main store is also located in Dotonbori.

This main store is also located in Dotonbori. This main store is also located in Dotonbori.

4:. Shinsekai 4. Shinsekai

There areis a symbol that is called Tsutenkaku. There is a symbol that is called Tsutenkaku.

If there is one symbol, then "There is a symbol..." If there are many symbols, then "There are symbols..."

There areis a symbol that called a “Tsutenkaku.” There is a symbol called a “Tsutenkaku.”

There areis a symbol that called Tsutenkaku. There is a symbol called Tsutenkaku.

ThisA Tsutenkaku is a like a tower but not highexcept shorter. A Tsutenkaku is like a tower except shorter.

“Symbol” means a representation of something else. What does a tsutenkaku symbolize? I think there might be a better word to describe its purpose.

This is a like a tower but not as high. This is like a tower but not as high.

In addition, there are very famous for Kushikatsu. In addition, there are very famous for Kushikatsu.

I'm not sure what this sentence refers to. If you are saying that the place is famous, then "In addition, it is very famous for Kushikatsu."

In addition, there areShinsekai(?) is also very famous for Kushikatsu. Shinsekai(?) is also very famous for Kushikatsu.

What is famous for Kushikatsu?

In addition, therey are very famous for Kushikatsu. In addition, they are very famous for Kushikatsu.

“Kushikatsu” means deep-fried skewers. “Kushikatsu” means deep-fried skewers.

You can eat them by dipping them in the sauce. You can eat them by dipping them in the sauce.

You can eat them by dipping them in thea [description] sauce. You can eat them by dipping them in a [description] sauce.

Ex. ... By dipping them in a yuzu soy sauce. ... By dipping them in a tonkatsu sauce

You can eat them by dipping them in the sauce. You can eat them by dipping them in sauce.

My recommendation shop isIf you want to try it, I recommend going to “Kushikatsu Daruma”.” If you want to try it, I recommend going to “Kushikatsu Daruma.”

My recommendation shopfor one is “Kushikatsu Daruma”. My recommendation for one is Kushikatsu Daruma.

This shop is also in near Dotonbori. This shop is also near Dotonbori.

This shop also in near Dotonbori. This shop also near Dotonbori.

This shop is also in near Dotonbori. This shop is also in Dotonbori.

☑︎ Extra editions ☑︎ Extras

1:. Minoh fFalls 1. Minoh Falls

Minoh Falls is called “the Niagara Falls of Osaka.” Minoh Falls is called “the Niagara Falls of Osaka.”

You can see beautiful scenes in ry there. You can see beautiful scenery there.

"Scenes" is not wrong, but I think "scenery" might be more appropriate. You can say "you can see beautiful scenery here," but it sounds more natural to me to say "there" if you are not yourself writing about this from that place. :)

You can see beautiful scenes inry here. You can see beautiful scenery here.

You can see beautiful scenes inry here. You can see beautiful scenery here.