Jan. 12, 2025
I have found this question and I've felt butterflies in my gut.
Nowadays, I love this world, my country, my city, my loved ones... but a few months ago I couldn't say the same - I was in a deppresion.
Thinking about it, this world have a huge amount of beautiful people and animals (I admit it, I love animals -especially my dogs- more than many humans ). Furthermore, I really enjoy the nature, the mountains, the beaches, the green areas in my country, seeing the rain and the sun... I also love travel around the world and discover new places and their people - and in my experience, most of them are kindly, wonderful ones.
Therefore, if you ask me today, probably I would tell you that being alive is an amazing present, and we should delight in the wonders of creation. There is always a way, there is always a salvation.
(It seems like I'm turning this app in my gratitude journal, right? hahaha)
What I love ofabout being alive
What I love about being alive
I have foundthought about this question and I'vit makes me feelt butterflies in my gut.
I have thought about this question and it makes me feel butterflies in my gut.
Nowadays, I love this world, my country, my city, and my loved ones... but a few months ago I couldn't say the same -- I was in a depep depression.
Nowadays, I love this world, my country, my city, and my loved ones... but a few months ago I couldn't say the same -- I was in a deep depression.
Thinking more about it, this world haves a huge amount of beautiful people and animals (I'll admit it, I love animals -- especially my dogs -- more than many humans ).
Thinking more about it, this world has a huge amount of beautiful people and animals (I'll admit it, I love animals -- especially my dogs -- more than many humans ).
Furthermore, I really enjoy the nature, the mountains, the beaches, the green areasery in my country, and seeing the rain and the sun...
Furthermore, I really enjoy the nature, the mountains, the beaches, the greenery in my country, and seeing the rain and the sun...
I also love travel around the world and discover new places and their people -- and in my experience, most of them are kindly, wonderful ones.
I also love travel around the world and discover new places and their people -- and in my experience, most of them are kind, wonderful ones.
There is always a way, t. There is always a salvation.
There is always a way. There is always a salvation.
(It seems like I'm turning this app into my gratitude journal, right? (It seems like I'm turning this app into my gratitude journal, right?
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Really great introspection and English! The two things I'd watch out for are dashes and lists separated by commas which are three or longer. If you want to use the dash to separate ideas, it should be two hyphens long. Hyphens, the short dash, are only used to joins words to create a compound word (over-exposed, Japanese-American). It can't be used as a pause in a sentence. When making a list with commas that is three or longer, the last phrase should have an and before it. Otherwise, really great work!
I also love to travel around the world and discover new places and learn about their people - and in my experience, most of them are kindly, wonderful ones. I also love to travel around the world and discover new places and learn about their people - and in my experience, most of them are kindly, wonderful ones.
What I love ofabout being alive
What I love about being alive
I have found this question and I've felt butterflies in my gut.
Nowadays, I love this world, my country, my city, my loved ones... but a few months ago I couldn't say the same - I was in a deppression.
Nowadays, I love this world, my country, my city, my loved ones... but a few months ago I couldn't say the same - I was in depression.
Thinking about it, this world have a huge amount ofs many beautiful people and animals (I admit it, I love animals; -especially my dogs-, more than many humans ).
Thinking about it, this world has many beautiful people and animals (I admit it, I love animals; especially my dogs, more than many humans).
Furthermore, I really enjoy the nature, the mountains, the beaches, the green areas in my country, seeexperiencing the rain and the sun...
Furthermore, I really enjoy nature, the mountains, the beaches, the green areas in my country, experiencing the rain and the sun...
I also love to travel around the world and discover new places and their people - and in my experience, most of them are kindly, and wonderful ones.
I also love to travel around the world and discover new places and their people - and in my experience, most of them are kind and wonderful.
Therefore, if you ask me today, probably I would tell you that being alive is an amazing present, and we should delight in the wonders of creation.
There is always a way, there is always a salvation.
(It seems like I'm turning this app in my gratitude journal, right?
It seems like I'm turning this app in my gratitude journal, right?
Haha yes, here for it
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Good job, and glad you got through your depression.
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Nowadays, I love this world, my country, my city, my loved ones... but a few months ago I couldn't say the same - I was in a deppresion.
Nowadays, I love this world, my country, my city, my loved ones... but a few months ago I couldn't say the same - I was in
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Furthermore, I really enjoy the nature, the mountains, the beaches, the green areas in my country, seeing the rain and the sun...
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I also love travel around the world and discover new places and their people - and in my experience, most of them are kindly, wonderful ones.
I also love to travel around the world and discover new places and their people - and in my experience, most of them are kind I also love to travel around the world and discover new places and learn about their people - and in my experience, most of them are kindly, wonderful ones. I also love to travel around the world and discover new places and learn about their people - and in my experience, most of them are kindly, wonderful ones.
I also love travel around the world and discover new places and their people -- and in my experience, most of them are kind |
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Therefore, if you ask me today, probably I would tell you that being alive is an amazing present, and we should delight in the wonders of creation. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There is always a way, there is always a salvation. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
There is always a way |
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(It seems like I'm turning this app in my gratitude journal, right?
Haha yes, here for it (It seems like I'm turning this app into my gratitude journal, right? (It seems like I'm turning this app into my gratitude journal, right? |
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