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April 25, 2023

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Hi Perez,
How's it going? I'm sorry I haven't been in touch for such a long time. I hope you and your family are OK. By the way, have you heard that the International Food Party for tomorrow night has been called off? I'm so annoyed about it. I think they should put it off instead of canceling it, don't you? Anyway, I should get going as I have a busy day.
Best wishes,
Sergio

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Informal Email 4

How's it going?

I'm sorry I haven't been in touch for such a long time.

I hope you and your family are OK. By the way, have you heard that the International Food Party for tomorrow night has been called off?

I'm so annoyed about it.

Best wishes,

Sergio

Informal Email 4

Hi Perez,

I'm sorry I haven't been in touch for such a long time.

I hope you and your family are OK. By the way, have you heard that the International Food Party for tomorrow night has been called off?

I'm so annoyed about it.

I think they should put it off instead of canceling it, don't you?

Best wishes,

Sergio

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I think they should put it offn instead of canceling it, don't you?

Not sure what you mean here. Do you want to have the party? If so, you should "put it on."

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Hi Perez,


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Hi, Perez, Hi, Perez,

How's it going?


How's it going? How's it going?

This tends to be used more in speech, it would be better to say "How are you doing?"

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I'm sorry I haven't been in touch for such a long time.


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I hope you and your family are OK. By the way, have you heard that the International Food Party for tomorrow night has been called off?


I hope you and your family are OK. By the way, have you heard that the International Food Party for tomorrow night has been called off? I hope you and your family are OK. By the way, have you heard that the International Food Party for tomorrow night has been called off?

The usage of "OK" is a bit negative in American culture. Usually you want to use "doing well"

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I'm so annoyed about it.


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I think they should put it off instead of canceling it, don't you?


I think they should put it offn instead of canceling it, don't you? I think they should put it on instead of canceling it, don't you?

Not sure what you mean here. Do you want to have the party? If so, you should "put it on."

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I think they should put it off instead of canceling it, don't you? I think they should put it off instead of canceling it, don't you?

or, more naturally in the US, I think they should postpone it instead of canceling it, don't you?

Anyway, I should get going as I have a busy day.


Anyway, I should get going as I have a busy day. Anyway, I should get going as I have a busy day.

I would scrap this setence as you would say this to someone rather than in an email

Anyway, I should get going as I have a busy day tomorrow. Anyway, I should get going as I have a busy day tomorrow.

Best wishes,


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Sergio


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