Feb. 8, 2026
What is the latest change that influences your day?
I’ve basically tried to keep every day the same but a little better than the before day. However, I think it’s about time to make a move. I’m going to move to new house and begin to find a good person for marriage. Sadly, I don’t think I’m a humorous person, but I’ve always been honest with my girlfriend and never cheated on her. This is the one of my few good things.
What is the latest change that influences your day?
I’ve basically tried to keep every day the same but a little better than the day before day.
However, I think it’s about time to make a move.
I’m going to move to new house and begin to find a good person forto marriagey.
I'm not sure why, but "For marriage" sounds a little off.
Sadly, I don’t think I’m a humorous person, but I’ve always been honest with my girlfriend and never cheated on her.
This is the one of my few good things.
This is one of my good qualities.
Feb. 9, 2026
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
It seems there were a lot of unnatural and incorrect expressions this time.
It's impossible to write beautiful and accurate English sentences unless I think about how to write solid sentences in Japanese as well.
By the way, I don't have a girlfriend right now. I would like to have one, though.
What is the latest change that influences your day?
I’ve basically tried to keep every day the same but a little better than the day before day.
postmodifier.
However, I think it’s about time to make a move.
to make a move is a vague choice of wording. do you mean to take a big step? since you mentioned you tried to have a litte better day each day??
I’m going to move to a new house and begin to findstart looking for a good person forto marriagey.
remember to add an article (a / an / the) or a determiner ( this, that , my, etc)
the following clause sounds unnatural.
This is the one of my few good things.
no need the. Few good things means its plural. if you use the, it breaks the sentence. since your one thing is a part of the few good things.
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i hope youre doing better! (both in your writing and romantically) hahahaha
Feb. 9, 2026
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
It seems there were a lot of unnatural and incorrect expressions this time.
It's impossible to write beautiful and accurate English sentences unless I think about how to write solid sentences in Japanese as well.
By the way, I don't have a girlfriend right now. I would like to have one, though.
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I’m going to move to new house and begin to find a good person forto marriagey.
Feb. 9, 2026
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
It seems there were a lot of unnatural and incorrect expressions this time.
It's impossible to write beautiful and accurate English sentences unless I think about how to write solid sentences in Japanese as well.
By the way, I don't have a girlfriend right now. I would like to have one, though.
I’ve basically tried to keep every day the same but a little better than the day before day.
I’m going to move to new house and begin to find a good person for marriage.
You can also say “find someone to marry”
Sadly, I don’t think I’m a humorous person, b. But I’ve always been honest with my ex-girlfriend(s) and never cheated on her(them).
If you’re looking for someone to marry then I assume you don’t have a girlfriend currently, am I correct? So that means, you are referring to your ex-girlfriend(s).
This is the one of mythe few good things about me.
Feb. 8, 2026
I agree with @jaspuurrr, but if you don't like the way "with my ex-girlfriends" sounds,
you could write "with my girlfriends in the past" or "with my past girlfriends."
Those variations sound gentler and would be appropriate if you parted ways amicably.
Feb. 9, 2026
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
It seems there were a lot of unnatural and incorrect expressions this time.
It's impossible to write beautiful and accurate English sentences unless I think about how to write solid sentences in Japanese as well.
By the way, I don't have a girlfriend right now. I would like to have one, though.
I’ve basically tried to keep every day the same but a little better than the day before day.
"before" isn't an adjective, so you need to switch the order so that "before" is recognizable as an adverb, like above, or you can use a different word ("the last day")
However, I think it’s about time to make a move.
I’m going to move to a new house and begin to findlook for a good person for marriage.
"begin to find" sounds like you'll find multiple people until you've found all of them, which doesn't really make sense?
Sadly, I don’t think I’m a humorous person, but I’ve always been honest with my girlfriend and never cheated on her.
This is the one of mythe few good things about me.
We always phrase it "things about ____" when describing a person/object's qualities. "One of my few good things" kind of sounds like you're talking about some object you own
or "one of my few good qualities"
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Good writing, just little stuff. Wait... you currently have a girlfriend but you're going to look for someone else to marry??
Feb. 9, 2026
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
It seems there were a lot of unnatural and incorrect expressions this time.
It's impossible to write beautiful and accurate English sentences unless I think about how to write solid sentences in Japanese as well.
By the way, I don't have a girlfriend right now. I would like to have one, though.
Feb. 9, 2026
Np! Oh okay, I'd phrase it in past tense then: "I was always honest with my last girlfriend and never cheated on her." Otherwise it sounds like you're still with her xD
Or to describe a tendency with multiple gfs: "I've always been honest with my girlfriends and never cheated on them." Good luck out there, the dating scene seems rough right now...
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Feb. 9, 2026
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
It seems there were a lot of unnatural and incorrect expressions this time.
It's impossible to write beautiful and accurate English sentences unless I think about how to write solid sentences in Japanese as well.
By the way, I don't have a girlfriend right now. I would like to have one, though.
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