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The picture was shot on the first day she went to kindergarten this September.
One day, I asked her if she had ever missed grandpa. She said, "No." She is an honest girl.

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Sept. 28, 2020

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The picture was shot on the first day she went to kindergarten this September.


The picture was shot this September on the first day she went to kindergarten this September. The picture was shot this September on the first day she went to kindergarten.

What you have is not incorrect. This just seems more natural to me.

One day, I asked her if she had ever missed grandpa.


She said, "No."


She said, "No." She said "No."

She is an honest girl.


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