And what afraid for him more,made him more afraid was that she didn't remember how she had turned outgotten there. And what made him more afraid was that she didn't remember how she had gotten there.

And what afraid for him more,made him more afraid was that she dicouldn't remember how she had turned outended up there. And what made him more afraid was that she couldn't remember how she had ended up there.

Although he was surprised and trembled with scary thoughts, he agreed to pick up her up. Although he was surprised and trembled with scary thoughts, he agreed to pick her up.

If the word is a noun, then it is fine to put the word either in the middle or at the end of the phrasal verb "pick up". Ex: "Pick up his friend" or "Pick his friend up" is fine. However, if the word is a pronoun (it, her, them, etc), then you have to put the word in the middle. Ex: Pick her up

Although he was surprised and trembled with scary thoughts, he agreed to pick up her up. Although he was surprised and trembled with scary thoughts, he agreed to pick her up.

Fortunately, it was his old friend, but her voice lookedsounded a little strange, though the connection was excellent / despite the excellent connection. Fortunately, it was his old friend, but her voice sounded a little strange, though the connection was excellent / despite the excellent connection.

"Though" is used when the phrase following it has a verb. "Despite" is used when the phrase following it is a noun or a noun clause.

Fortunately, it was his old friend, but her voice lookedsounded a little strange, thoughdespite the excellent connection. Fortunately, it was his old friend, but her voice sounded a little strange, despite the excellent connection.

She said that she was in the middle of nowhere near a phone booth on an unfamiliar road. She said that she was in the middle of nowhere near a phone booth on an unfamiliar road.

She said that she was in a phone booth in the middle of nowhere near phone booth oon an unfamiliar road. She said that she was in a phone booth in the middle of nowhere on an unfamiliar road.

Hesitantly, he picked up athe phone. Hesitantly, he picked up the phone.

Hesitantly, he picked up athe phone. Hesitantly, he picked up the phone.

He asked her did sheif she saw any landmarks. / He asked her, "Do you see any landmarks?" He asked her if she saw any landmarks. / He asked her, "Do you see any landmarks?"

He asked her didwhether she seeaw any landmarks?. He asked her whether she saw any landmarks.

When the sun went up, he tried to call to her house and was strongly surprised when her parents said that she had been at home all night. When the sun went up, he tried to call her house and was strongly surprised when her parents said that she had been at home all night.

When the sun went up, he tried to call to her house and was strongextremely surprised when her parents said that she had been at home all night. When the sun went up, he tried to call her house and was extremely surprised when her parents said that she had been at home all night.

CafA cafe or maybe a gas station. A cafe or maybe a gas station.

CafA cafe or maybeperhaps a gas station. A cafe or perhaps a gas station.

She said that she would walk up the road and/then called him back. She said that she would walk up the road and/then call him back.

She said that she would walk up the road and then called him back. She said that she would walk up the road and then call him back.

She didn't call back. She didn't call back.