May 5, 2024
Mysterious story
It was eleven o'clock when the phone rang. Hesitantly, he picked up a phone. Fortunately, it was his old friend, but her voice looked little strange, though the excellent connection. She said that she in the middle of nowhere near phone booth on unfamiliar road. And what afraid for him more, she didn't remember how she had turned out there.
Although he was surprised and trembled with scary thoughts, he agreed to pick up her. He asked her did she see any landmarks? Caffe or maybe gas station. She said that she would walk up the road and called him back. She didn't call. He waited all night. When sun went up, he tried to call to her house and was strongly surprise when her parents said that she had been at home all night.
Mysterious story
It was eleven o'clock when the phone rang.
Hesitantly, he picked up athe phone.
Fortunately, it was his old friend, but her voice lookedsounded a little strange, thoughdespite the excellent connection.
She said that she was in a phone booth in the middle of nowhere near phone booth oon an unfamiliar road.
And what afraid for him more,made him more afraid was that she dicouldn't remember how she had turned outended up there.
Although he was surprised and trembled with scary thoughts, he agreed to pick up her up.
He asked her didwhether she seeaw any landmarks?.
CafA cafe or maybeperhaps a gas station.
She said that she would walk up the road and then called him back.
She didn't call back.
He waited all night.
When the sun went up, he tried to call to her house and was strongextremely surprised when her parents said that she had been at home all night.
It was eleven o'clock when the phone rang.
Hesitantly, he picked up athe phone.
Fortunately, it was his old friend, but her voice lookedsounded a little strange, though the connection was excellent / despite the excellent connection.
"Though" is used when the phrase following it has a verb.
"Despite" is used when the phrase following it is a noun or a noun clause.
She said that she was in the middle of nowhere near a phone booth on an unfamiliar road.
And what afraid for him more,made him more afraid was that she didn't remember how she had turned outgotten there.
Although he was surprised and trembled with scary thoughts, he agreed to pick up her up.
If the word is a noun, then it is fine to put the word either in the middle or at the end of the phrasal verb "pick up".
Ex: "Pick up his friend" or "Pick his friend up" is fine.
However, if the word is a pronoun (it, her, them, etc), then you have to put the word in the middle. Ex: Pick her up
He asked her did sheif she saw any landmarks. / He asked her, "Do you see any landmarks?"
CafA cafe or maybe a gas station.
She said that she would walk up the road and/then called him back.
She didn't call.
He waited all night.
When the sun went up, he tried to call to her house and was strongly surprised when her parents said that she had been at home all night.
May 5, 2024
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Fortunately, it was his old friend, but her voice looked little strange, though the excellent connection. Fortunately, it was his old friend, but her voice "Though" is used when the phrase following it has a verb. "Despite" is used when the phrase following it is a noun or a noun clause. Fortunately, it was his old friend, but her voice |
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She said that she in the middle of nowhere near phone booth on unfamiliar road. She said that she was in the middle of nowhere near a phone booth on an unfamiliar road. She said that she was in a phone booth in the middle of nowhere |
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And what afraid for him more, she didn't remember how she had turned out there. And what And what |
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Although he was surprised and trembled with scary thoughts, he agreed to pick up her. Although he was surprised and trembled with scary thoughts, he agreed to pick If the word is a noun, then it is fine to put the word either in the middle or at the end of the phrasal verb "pick up". Ex: "Pick up his friend" or "Pick his friend up" is fine. However, if the word is a pronoun (it, her, them, etc), then you have to put the word in the middle. Ex: Pick her up Although he was surprised and trembled with scary thoughts, he agreed to pick |
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It was eleven o'clock when the phone rang. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Hesitantly, he picked up a phone. Hesitantly, he picked up Hesitantly, he picked up |
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He asked her did she see any landmarks? He asked her He asked her |
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He waited all night. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When sun went up, he tried to call to her house and was strongly surprise when her parents said that she had been at home all night. When the sun went up, he tried to call When the sun went up, he tried to call |
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Caffe or maybe gas station.
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She said that she would walk up the road and called him back. She said that she would walk up the road and/then call She said that she would walk up the road and then call |
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She didn't call. This sentence has been marked as perfect! She didn't call back. |
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