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Nov. 17, 2019

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After I graduated the university, I got the job for travel agency, because I was interested in overseas.
I actually wanted to study abroad when I was student, but it was difficult because my family didn't have enough money.
Though I worked at travel agency, I could't get a chance to go overseas, so I changed my job. Next I found a job at a foreign owned company.
I moved to this country and I could speak the local language. Now I really enjoy my life. Without fear of change, I step forward to do what I want to do from now on.

卒業して、海外に興味があったから旅行会社に就職した。本当は学生の時留学したかったけど、お金がなかったから難しかった。
しかし、旅行会社で働いても海外に行く機会がなかったので転職した。
次に外資系企業に就職した。その国に引っ越し、現地の言葉も話せるようになった。今とても楽しい！これからも変化を恐れず、自分のやりたい事のために踏み出したい。

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After I graduated thefrom university, I got thea job forat a travel agency, because I was interested in overseaforeign countries.

I had actually wanted to study abroad when I was a student, but it was difficult because my family didn't have enough money.

Though I worked at a travel agency, I couldn't get a chance to go overseas, so I changed my job.

Next, I found a job at a foreign -owned company.

I moved to this country, and I could speak the local language.

Now, I really enjoy my life.

Without fearbeing afraid of change, I will step forward to do what I want to do from now on.

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After I graduated thefrom university, I got thea job forat a travel agency, because I was interested in overseaforeign things.

I actually wanted to study abroad when I was student, but it was difficult because my family didn't have enough money.

Though I worked at travel agency, I coulddidn't get any chances to go overseas, so I changed my jobs.

Next I found a job at a foreign -owned company.

I moved to this country and I couldlearned to speak the local language.

Without fear of change, I stepmove forward to dodoing what I want to do from now on.

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Myself

After I graduated the university, I got the job for travel agency, because I was interested in overseas.

After I graduated thefrom university, I got thea job forat a travel agency, because I was interested in overseaforeign things.

After I graduated thefrom university, I got thea job forat a travel agency, because I was interested in overseaforeign countries.

I actually wanted to study abroad when I was student, but it was difficult because my family didn't have enough money.

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I had actually wanted to study abroad when I was a student, but it was difficult because my family didn't have enough money.

Though I worked at travel agency, I could't get a chance to go overseas, so I changed my job.

Though I worked at travel agency, I coulddidn't get any chances to go overseas, so I changed my jobs.

Though I worked at a travel agency, I couldn't get a chance to go overseas, so I changed my job.

Next I found a job at a foreign owned company.

Next I found a job at a foreign -owned company.

Next, I found a job at a foreign -owned company.

I moved to this country and I could speak the local language.

I moved to this country and I couldlearned to speak the local language.

I moved to this country, and I could speak the local language.

Now I really enjoy my life.

Now, I really enjoy my life.

Without fear of change, I step forward to do what I want to do from now on.

Without fear of change, I stepmove forward to dodoing what I want to do from now on.

Without fearbeing afraid of change, I will step forward to do what I want to do from now on.

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