Aug. 28, 2022
My Younger Sister
My Younger sister has been visiting my house since yesterday.
It's very awkward for me to be in a space with my sister.
The reason is that she and I have not been on good terms ever since I can remember, and have not been talking almost since I was in junior high school.
Today, I was clearing the dinner dishes with her.
Both of us were as awkward as if we were meeting for the first time, but I was actually delighted that she was working with me.
In the future, we will probably never be what the general public calls "close sisters", but the older sister is happy if we get along with each other in acceptable distance.
昨日から妹が家に遊びに来ている。
妹のいる空間はとても気まずい。
なぜなら、私と妹は物心ついた頃から仲が悪く、私が中学生の頃からほぼ全く話さないからだ。
そんな妹と今日、夕飯の片付けをした。
お互い、初対面かのようにぎこちなかったが、一緒に作業をしてくれたことが実はとても嬉しかった。
これから先、世間の言う「仲良い姉妹」にはなれないだろうが、絶妙な距離で仲良くしてくれると姉はうれしい。
My Younger Sister
My Yyounger sister has been visiting my houswith me since yesterday.
It's very awkward for me to be in a space with my sister.
The reason is that she and I have not been on good terms ever since I can remember, and have not been talking almost since I was in junior high school.
Today, I was clearing the dinner dishes with her.
Both of us were as awkward as if we were meeting for the first time, but I was actually delighted that she was working with me.
In the future, we will probably never be what the general public calls "close sisters"," but the older sister isI'm happy if we get along with each other iat an acceptable distance.
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いいですね。上手に書けています！
Aug. 29, 2022
Thank you for correcting me!
My Younger Sister
My Younger sister has been visitingat my house since yesterday.
It's very awkward for me to be in any space with my sister.
The reason is that sat is because her and I have not been on good terms ever since I can remember, and we have not been talking almost since I was in junior high school.
Today, I was clearing the dinner dishes with her.
Both of us were as awkward as if we were meeting for the first time, but I was actually delighted that she was working with me.
In the future, we will probably never be what the general public calls "close sisters", but theour older sister is happy if we get along with each other in acceptable distance.
I presume "the older sister" means one of your sister's and not you.
The last part of the sentence doesn't make a lot of sentence to me and isn't really required.
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Great writing :)
Aug. 29, 2022
Thank you for correcting me.
In this sentence, I wanted to say that the older sister is me, and I should have used the letter "I".
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Both of us were as awkward as if we were meeting for the first time, but I was actually delighted that she was working with me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In the future, we will probably never be what the general public calls "close sisters", but the older sister is happy if we get along with each other in acceptable distance. In the future, we will probably never be what the general public calls "close sisters", but I presume "the older sister" means one of your sister's and not you. The last part of the sentence doesn't make a lot of sentence to me and isn't really required. In the future, we will probably never be what the general public calls "close sisters |
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