Nov. 1, 2023
I dont't love my job. I work on receptions in big clinic. Every dai I must speak with other people. Sometime they are kind, but sometimes they're stressed and angry. However I never raise my voice on the patients. I now that the're just ill and need to help. I work on this job about 6 years. I wanna to change my job and my profession in the future.
I dont't love my job.
there is only 1 "t" in don't, after the apostrophe.
I work onas a receptionsist in big clinic.
Every daiy I must speak with other people.
However I never raise my voice onat the patients.
I now that the're just ill and need to help.
the verb "know" is spelt with a k. "now" means something happening at the present moment
I have work oned this job for about 6 years.
I wanna to change my job and my profession in the future.
"want to" is polite. "wanna" is very informal
I dont't love my job.
I work on the receptions desk in a big clinic.
Every daiy I must speak with other people.
However I never raise my voice onwith the patients.
I know that they're just ill and need to help.
I have worked on this job for about 6 years.
I wannat to change my job and my profession in the future.
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Great writing and great that you keep your composure even in the face of stressed/angry patients! Hope you are able to find a new job - good luck!
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I dont't lovhate my job.
If you don't love your job, it can mean two things- 1. You have a negative view about your job and 2. You have neutral view about your job. If 1. is true, then you should write 'hate' or 'despise' instead of 'don't love'. Also, you may have a typo there, as you have written 'dont't' instead of the correct 'don't'. I think you should stay away from contractions like 'don't', 'can't', 'haven't', 'should've', 'wanna' 'gonna' etc. till you have learnt English fluently.
I work oin receptions in a big clinic.
Prepositions are something a lot of English learners struggle to learn. You will eventually get over it. But articles should be there when suitable.
Every daiy I must speak with other people.
Your spelling of 'day' is wrong.
Sometimes they are kind, butand sometimes they're stressed and angry.
Because you have written sometimes, it is expecetd that something else will happen in the second clause, so do not write 'but' in this case. When you are already talking about 'them' in the first clause, you need not mention them in the second clause. Readers will understand.
However I never raise my voice on the patients.
I know that they're just ill and need to help.
Your spelling of 'they're' is wrong. Once again, you need to stay away from contractions for now. You spelt 'know' wrong, too. It is a mistake that a lot of English learners make and it is nothing to worry about if you are just a beginner. 'Need to help' will become 'need help' because otherwise, it sounds like they are the ones who are going to be helping.
I have worked on this job for about 6 years.
Classic rookie mistakes.
I wanna to change my job and my profession in the future.
'Wanna' and 'want' are two different words. 'Wanna' itself is a contraction of 'want' and 'to' so 'to' after 'wanna' is not needed.
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You are just a beginner, so I would request you to stay away or not use contractions. You have some other basic mistakes that most English learners make at some point, and that is okay! You are a human, and humans make mistakes. Remember, the best way to learn a language is to speak to the natives.
I dont't love my job.
The correct spelling is "don't"
Every daiy I must speak with other people.
It is spelt "day"
I know that they're just ill and need to help.
While they look similar, "know" is an entirely different word
I work onhave worked at this job for about 6 years.
I wannat to to change my job and my profession in the future.
I dont'’t love my job.
I work on receptions in a big clinic.
Every daiy I must speak with other people.
However I never raise my voice onat the patients.
I know that the'y’re just ill and need to help.
I work onhave worked at this job for about 6 years.
I wanna to change my job and my profession in the future.
I dont't love my job.
I work oin receptions in at a big clinic.
Every daiy I musthave to speak with other people.
must was all right but have to is more natural here
However I never raise my voice ton the patients.
I know that the'y’re just ill and need to help.
I work onhave been doing this job for about 6 years.
I wannat to change my job and my profession in the future.
wanna is very informal, probably not appropriate for talking about career goals
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I dont't love my job.
I work on a receptions in a big clinic.
You could say "on a reception" or just "on reception". You also need "a" before reception. If "reception" was a specific one it would be "the" - E g. "The reception of a large company " - Hope this helps. 😁
Every daiy I must speak with other people.
Possibly just a typo?
Sometime they are kind, but sometimes they're stressed and angry.
However I never raise my voice ton the patients.
I know that they're just ill and need to help.
I work o have worked in this job for about 6 years.
I wanna to change my job and my profession in the future.
Want to would be be more correct, wanna is very casual/slang
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A good effort, just some minor errors. Keep posting. This is also my first correction so hopefully it will be useful.
My work routine
I dont't love my job.
I work onat the receptions in a big clinic.
Every daiy I must speak with other people.
Sometime they are kind, but sometimes they're stressed and angry.
However I never raise my voice onwith the patients.
I know that they're just ill and need to help.
I work on this jobhave worked there for about 6 years.
It's better expressed in English like this.
I wannat to change my job and my profession in the future.
''Wanna'' is a casual word. It's normal in a spoken conversation, but not in writing.
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Try to be consistent with your contractions. Sometimes you use '''they are'' and sometimes ''they're''. Overall a good level of written English with only some little mistakes.
I dont't love my job.
I work on receptions in a big clinic.
Every daiy I must speak with other people.
Sometimes they are kind, but sometimes they're stressed and angry.
However I never raise my voice ton the patients.
I know that they're just ill and need to help.
I work onhave worked at this job for about 6 years.
I wannat to change my job and my profession in the future.
Feedback
Really nicely written. Just a few spelling errors and minor grammar issues.
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