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Alaxej21

Sept. 5, 2024

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My work

I am an architect. I worked almost for 7 years. I working in a small architect’s company. There are 3 workers now: two founders - a couple and I. We are designing different kind of building - medicines building, hotels, living and residental houses, offices. Also we doing interior’s design. We rare building something new. Most part of our projects is reconstruction.
When i have a new project, at first l take a pen and start to drawing. I need to find the best ideas and then choose the one or two. And than start to working on it with maket or computer.
Most of a time i work on a computer. I used special programs like Autocad and Revit for designing. But i also use Photoshop and Indesign for processing imaging.


Я архитектор. Я работаю почти 7 лет. Я работаю в маленьком архитектурном бюро. Сейчас там работают 3 человека - основатели - муж с женой и я. Мы проектируем разное - медицину, гостиницы, офисы, частные и жилые дома. Также мы занимаемся интерьерами. Мы редко проектируем что-то новое. Большая часть наших заказов это реконструкция.
Когда у меня появляется новый проект, сперва я беру ручку и начинаю зарисовывать. Мне нужно выработать лучшие идеи и из них выбрать одну или несколько. И дальше их прорабатывать на макете или на компьютере.
Больше всего времени я провожу на компьютере. Я использую специальные программы для проектирования - Autocad и Revit. Но также я использую Photoshop и Indesign для оформления.

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My work

I am an architect.

I worked for almost for 7 years.

"Almost" is used before the number, hence there is an uncertain amount of time in there.

I am working in a small architect’s company.

Both present tense and continuous tense could be used since it is a fact and you work for that company now.

There are 3 workers now: two founders - a couple and I.

We are designing different kinds of buildings - medicines building, hotels, living and residental houses, offices.

While talking about plural stuff we should be careful about making everything in the sentence plural that refer those things.

Also we are doing interior’s design.

Continuous tense is "be verb+ing"

We rare building something new.

Most part of our projects isare reconstruction.

Since there are more than one project "are" should be used instead of "is"

When iI have a new project, at first l take a pen and start to drawing.

I need to find the best ideas and then choose the one or two.

The is used to refer at specific things, however in here those "one or two" are not that kind of specific.

And thaen start to working on it with maket or computer.

"Than" is used while making comparisons, "then" is for saying "later on"

Most of athe time iI work on a computer.

Time cannot be one

I used special programs like Autocad and Revit for designing.

But iI also use Photoshop and Indesign for processing imaging.

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Alaxej21

Sept. 13, 2024

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Thank you very much for correction!

I am an architect.

I am working in a small architect’sure company.

We are designing different kinds of buildings, including - medicines buildings, hotels, living and residential houses, and offices.

We rarely building something new.

Most part of our projects isnvolve reconstruction.

When iI have a new project, at first l take a pen and start to drawing.

"I" is always in the capital letter

I need to find the best ideas and then choose the one or two.

And thaen start to working on it with a marketr or computer.

I think this was what you meant

Most of athe time iI work on a computer.

I used special programs like Autocad and Revit for designing.

It's something you do, it should be in the present form

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Alaxej21

Sept. 13, 2024

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Thank you very much for correction!

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Toluwani

Sept. 13, 2024

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You are welcome :)

My wWork as an Architect

I am an architect.

I worked for almost for 7seven years.

ICurrently, I am working in a small architect’s company.

There are 3 workers now: two founders -, a couple and Ime.

We are designing different kind of building -s, including but not limited to, medicinesal building, hotels, living and residential houses, and offices.

Also, we're doing interior’s design.

We rare building something new.

MFor the most part of, our projects isare reconstruction.

When iI have a new project, atl first l take a pen and start to drawing.

I need to find the best ideas and then choose theonly one orf twohem.

And thanThen, I start to working on it with a maket or computer.

Most of athe time i, I work on a computer.

I used special programs like, such as AutocadCAD and Revit for designing.

But i alsoAdditionally, I use Photoshop and IndDesign for processing imaging.

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Alaxej21

Sept. 13, 2024

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Thank you very much for correction!

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marblemenow

Sept. 13, 2024

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You're welcome.

I workedhave been working for almost for 7 years.

I am working in a small architect’sure company.

There are 3 workers nowcurrently: two founders - a couple and I.

We are designing different kinds of building - medicinescal buildings (or hospitals), hotels, living and residental houses, offices.

Also we doingWe also do interior’s design.

We rarely building some anything new.

Most part of our projects involves reconstruction.

When iI have a new project, at first, l take a pen and startbegin to drawing.

when you use "I" as a pronoun, it is always capitalized

I needtry to find the best ideas and then choose the one or two.

And thanThen, I start to working on it with a maket or a computer.

Sentences don't start with "and"

Most of a time i, I work on a computer.

I used special programtools like Autocad and Revit for designing.

But iI also use Photoshop and Indesign for processing imaginges.

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Alaxej21

Sept. 13, 2024

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Thank you very much for correction!

My wWork

I am an architect.

I've worked as an architect for almost for 7 years.

"I worked" makes it sound like you used to work but now you don't anymore.

I'm working in a small architect’sure company.

There are 3 workers now: two founders - (a couple) and Ime.

We are designing different kinds of buildings - medicinesal buildings, hotels, living andhouses, residential housmes, and offices.

Also, we doing interior’s design.

We rarely building something new.

Most part of our projects isare reconstruction.

When iI have a new project, atI first l take a pen and start to drawing.

I need to find the best ideas and then choose the one or two.

And thanen I start to working on it with maket or computer.

Most of athe time iI work on a computer.

I used special programs like Autocad and Revit for designing.

But iI also use Photoshop and Indesign for processing imaginges.

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Alaxej21

Sept. 13, 2024

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Thank you very much for correction!

I have worked almost for 7 years.

I working in a small architect’s companyural firm.

There are 3 workers now: two founders - a couple and Ime.

We are designing different kinds of building - medicinesal buildings, hotels, living and residential houses, and offices.

Also we doing interior’s design.

We rarely building something new.

Most part of our projects isare reconstructions.

When iI have a new project, atI first l take a pen and start to drawing.

I need to find the best ideas and then choose the one or two.

And than I start to working on it with a maket or a computer.

What's a "maket"?

Most of a time iI work on a computer.

I have used special programs like Autocad and Revit for designing.

But iI also use Photoshop and IndDesign for processing imaginges.

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Very good, keep up the good work!

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Alaxej21

Sept. 13, 2024

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Thank you very much for correction!

My work


My wWork

My wWork as an Architect

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I am an architect.


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I worked almost for 7 years.


I have worked almost for 7 years.

I've worked as an architect for almost for 7 years.

"I worked" makes it sound like you used to work but now you don't anymore.

I workedhave been working for almost for 7 years.

I worked for almost for 7seven years.

I worked for almost for 7 years.

"Almost" is used before the number, hence there is an uncertain amount of time in there.

I working in a small architect’s company.


I working in a small architect’s companyural firm.

I'm working in a small architect’sure company.

I am working in a small architect’sure company.

ICurrently, I am working in a small architect’s company.

I am working in a small architect’sure company.

I am working in a small architect’s company.

Both present tense and continuous tense could be used since it is a fact and you work for that company now.

There are 3 workers now: two founders - a couple and I.


There are 3 workers now: two founders - a couple and Ime.

There are 3 workers now: two founders - (a couple) and Ime.

There are 3 workers nowcurrently: two founders - a couple and I.

There are 3 workers now: two founders -, a couple and Ime.

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We are designing different kind of building - medicines building, hotels, living and residental houses, offices.


We are designing different kinds of building - medicinesal buildings, hotels, living and residential houses, and offices.

We are designing different kinds of buildings - medicinesal buildings, hotels, living andhouses, residential housmes, and offices.

We are designing different kinds of building - medicinescal buildings (or hospitals), hotels, living and residental houses, offices.

We are designing different kind of building -s, including but not limited to, medicinesal building, hotels, living and residential houses, and offices.

We are designing different kinds of buildings, including - medicines buildings, hotels, living and residential houses, and offices.

We are designing different kinds of buildings - medicines building, hotels, living and residental houses, offices.

While talking about plural stuff we should be careful about making everything in the sentence plural that refer those things.

Also we doing interior’s design.


Also we doing interior’s design.

Also, we doing interior’s design.

Also we doingWe also do interior’s design.

Also, we're doing interior’s design.

Also we are doing interior’s design.

Continuous tense is "be verb+ing"

We rare building something new.


We rarely building something new.

We rarely building something new.

We rarely building some anything new.

We rare building something new.

We rarely building something new.

We rare building something new.

Most part of our projects is reconstruction.


Most part of our projects isare reconstructions.

Most part of our projects isare reconstruction.

Most part of our projects involves reconstruction.

MFor the most part of, our projects isare reconstruction.

Most part of our projects isnvolve reconstruction.

Most part of our projects isare reconstruction.

Since there are more than one project "are" should be used instead of "is"

When i have a new project, at first l take a pen and start to drawing.


When iI have a new project, atI first l take a pen and start to drawing.

When iI have a new project, atI first l take a pen and start to drawing.

When iI have a new project, at first, l take a pen and startbegin to drawing.

when you use "I" as a pronoun, it is always capitalized

When iI have a new project, atl first l take a pen and start to drawing.

When iI have a new project, at first l take a pen and start to drawing.

"I" is always in the capital letter

When iI have a new project, at first l take a pen and start to drawing.

I need to find the best ideas and then choose the one or two.


I need to find the best ideas and then choose the one or two.

I need to find the best ideas and then choose the one or two.

I needtry to find the best ideas and then choose the one or two.

I need to find the best ideas and then choose theonly one orf twohem.

I need to find the best ideas and then choose the one or two.

I need to find the best ideas and then choose the one or two.

The is used to refer at specific things, however in here those "one or two" are not that kind of specific.

And than start to working on it with maket or computer.


And than I start to working on it with a maket or a computer.

What's a "maket"?

And thanen I start to working on it with maket or computer.

And thanThen, I start to working on it with a maket or a computer.

Sentences don't start with "and"

And thanThen, I start to working on it with a maket or computer.

And thaen start to working on it with a marketr or computer.

I think this was what you meant

And thaen start to working on it with maket or computer.

"Than" is used while making comparisons, "then" is for saying "later on"

Most of a time i work on a computer.


Most of a time iI work on a computer.

Most of athe time iI work on a computer.

Most of a time i, I work on a computer.

Most of athe time i, I work on a computer.

Most of athe time iI work on a computer.

Most of athe time iI work on a computer.

Time cannot be one

I used special programs like Autocad and Revit for designing.


I have used special programs like Autocad and Revit for designing.

I used special programs like Autocad and Revit for designing.

I used special programtools like Autocad and Revit for designing.

I used special programs like, such as AutocadCAD and Revit for designing.

I used special programs like Autocad and Revit for designing.

It's something you do, it should be in the present form

I used special programs like Autocad and Revit for designing.

But i also use Photoshop and Indesign for processing imaging.


But iI also use Photoshop and IndDesign for processing imaginges.

But iI also use Photoshop and Indesign for processing imaginges.

But iI also use Photoshop and Indesign for processing imaginges.

But i alsoAdditionally, I use Photoshop and IndDesign for processing imaging.

But iI also use Photoshop and Indesign for processing imaging.

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