May 14, 2025
When i get home , I change into comfortable pijamas , I make wuduu to pray el asr , empty my bag and organise my desk .
After that , I go to the kitchen to eat something , and then relax in my bad and watch an episode of my current serie , if I did a workout earlier that day , I will then put a hair oil and take a relaxing bath , around 8pm I'm gonna review what we had earlier in school , have dinner , pray el ichaa . and I always try to make a tomorrow to do list to keep track of my goals , if i felt well and a little energized , I make a cup of hot vervain tea and read few pages of my book , around 11pm I do my skincare (very simple , a cleanser and a moisterizer ) and brush my teeth to jump into my bed ( my fav part ).
Well i guess that's my perfect evening routine , of course sometimes I don't do it all , it depends much about my energy levels and my mood (well to be transparent , if I felt shitty i'm going to binge watch or sleep veryy early ) , but I have the must do, like my prayers , one hour study session and reviewing my day and my weekly plan , that's all , simple right? what do you think?
i don't feel like writing all this again in arabic
mMy winding down routine after a long day
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I'm sorry if I misspelled some of the names of the prayer terms :-(
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Please work on punctuation and break your sentences into smaller ones. Keep it up
mMy wind down routine after a long day
When iI get home , I change into comfortable piyjamas , I makeperform wuduu to pray el asr , empty my bag and organise my desk .
To my understanding, Al-Asr is a chapter of the Quran. I'm not sure what it's doing in this sentence, so I just removed it. Perhaps you can provide some clarification as a comment.
After that , I go to the kitchen to eat something , and then relax in my baed and watch an episode of my current serie , is. If I did a workout earlier that day , I will then put aapply hair oil and take a relaxing bath , a. Around 8pm, I'm gonna review what we had learnt earlier in school , have dinner , pray el ichaa , then perform the Isha prayer.
(1) This is a very long sentence with many clauses. Do consider breaking it up into multiple shorter ones.
(2) "put hair oil" is okay, but "apply hair oil" might be more suitable.
(3) "oil" is uncountable, so "a hair oil" is ungrammatical. It should just be "hair oil".
(4) "I'm gonna" means "I'm going to". It is in the future tense, since it conveys future intentions. However, you're writing in the present tense here, so it is ungrammatical in this context.
(5) I assume by "el ichaa", you're referring to the Isha prayer. Googling "el ichaa" did not yield any other relevant results.
aAnd I always try to make a tomorrow to do list do list for tomorrow to keep track of my goals , i. If iI feelt well and a little energized , I make a cup of hot vervain tea and read few pages of my book , a. Around 11pm, I do my skincare (very simple , a cleanser and a moisteurizer ) and brush my teeth to jump into my bed ( my fav part ).
(1) Again, it helps to break up a lengthy sentence into multiple shorter ones, especially when narrating a long of series of events, as you are doing.
(2) It should be "feel" instead of "felt". Once again, you are writing in the present tense.
Well i, I guess that's my perfect evening routine , o. Of course sometimes I don't do it all , it depends much abouta lot on my energy levels and my mood (well, to be transparent , if I feelt shitty iI'm going to binge watch or sleep veryy early ) , but I have the must -dos, like my prayers , one hour study session and reviewing of my day and my weekly plan , t. That's all , simple right?
(1) It should be "feel" instead of "felt", for the same reason as above.
(2) If you deliberately spelt "veryy" (with two "y"s) in order to make it sound dragged out, you can write "veeery" instead.
(3) "must-dos", being a compound word, should be hyphenated. By the way, some people will spell "must-dos" as "must-do's". In order to avoid confusing you with the other uses of the apostrophe, however, I have decided not to spell it so.
wWhat do you think?
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A couple main points to take note of.
(1) Do not feel the need to lump everything into the same sentence. Do try to split lengthy sentences into multiple shorter ones.
(2) There is no spacing before punctuations. Hence, it's not "When I get home , ..." but "When I get home, ...".
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Well i guess that's my perfect evening routine , of course sometimes I don't do it all , it depends much about my energy levels and my mood (well to be transparent , if I felt shitty i'm going to binge watch or sleep veryy early ) , but I have the must do, like my prayers , one hour study session and reviewing my day and my weekly plan , that's all , simple right? Well (1) It should be "feel" instead of "felt", for the same reason as above. (2) If you deliberately spelt "veryy" (with two "y"s) in order to make it sound dragged out, you can write "veeery" instead. (3) "must-dos", being a compound word, should be hyphenated. By the way, some people will spell "must-dos" as "must-do's". In order to avoid confusing you with the other uses of the apostrophe, however, I have decided not to spell it so. Well |
When i get home , I change into comfortable pijamas , I make wuduu to pray el asr , empty my bag and organise my desk . When To my understanding, Al-Asr is a chapter of the Quran. I'm not sure what it's doing in this sentence, so I just removed it. Perhaps you can provide some clarification as a comment. When i get home , I change into comfortable p When |
After that , I go to the kitchen to eat something , and then relax in my bad and watch an episode of my current serie , if I did a workout earlier that day , I will then put a hair oil and take a relaxing bath , around 8pm I'm gonna review what we had earlier in school , have dinner , pray el ichaa . After that (1) This is a very long sentence with many clauses. Do consider breaking it up into multiple shorter ones. (2) "put hair oil" is okay, but "apply hair oil" might be more suitable. (3) "oil" is uncountable, so "a hair oil" is ungrammatical. It should just be "hair oil". (4) "I'm gonna" means "I'm going to". It is in the future tense, since it conveys future intentions. However, you're writing in the present tense here, so it is ungrammatical in this context. (5) I assume by "el ichaa", you're referring to the Isha prayer. Googling "el ichaa" did not yield any other relevant results. After that , I go to the kitchen to eat something , and then relax in my b After that |
and I always try to make a tomorrow to do list to keep track of my goals , if i felt well and a little energized , I make a cup of hot vervain tea and read few pages of my book , around 11pm I do my skincare (very simple , a cleanser and a moisterizer ) and brush my teeth to jump into my bed ( my fav part ).
(1) Again, it helps to break up a lengthy sentence into multiple shorter ones, especially when narrating a long of series of events, as you are doing. (2) It should be "feel" instead of "felt". Once again, you are writing in the present tense.
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