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DavidTheChinese

Nov. 12, 2024

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My wife is crazy about the Tesla Stock!

Ever since Elon Musk publicly supported Donald Trump for his second time President election, the stock price of Tesla has tied tightly with the success or failure of Trump.
Last Tuesday, when Trump won the election, the price of Tesla started to increase rapidly. I told my wife this information at the first time. She was very exciting and bought 10 shares of Tesla stock immediately.
Since then she haven't had a good sleep. As we are living in China, the time of our location is 13 hours ahead of the US east time. So the US stock market opens at 10:30 p.m. at night! My wife would wake up for 3 to 4 times every night, to watch the current price of Tesla.
Every morning I woke up, she would tell me "Tesla increased for 8 percent!" or "Tesla is now $308 !" with sparkling eyes as if she would never feel tired.
Actually, I'm very bored about it. Because the price of Tesla is too high to buy now, and I've missed the best time to "buy the DIP"!


我老婆被特斯拉股票整疯了!

自从Elon Musk公开支持Donald Trump的第二次大选,特斯拉的股票和Trump的成败息息相关。
上周二,当川普赢得了大选,特斯拉的股票迅速飞涨。我第一时间把这个消息告诉了我老婆。她很兴奋,并且立即买入了10股特斯拉的股票。
从此,她再没睡过一天好觉。因为我们在中国,比美国东部时间快13个小时。因此美股市场在夜里10:30开市!我老婆每天夜里要醒来3、4次,紧盯特斯拉股价。
每天早上我醒来,她都会眼睛发亮地告诉我“特斯拉涨了百分之八!”或者“特斯拉现在$308!”似乎她一点都不困。
事实上,我对此毫无兴趣。因为特斯拉现在的股价太高了,我已经错失了“buy the DIP”的最好时机了!

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My wife is crazy about the Tesla Sstock!

We don't usually capitalize "stock" - e.g. Google stock, Tesla stock, etc.

Ever since Elon Musk publicly supported Donald Trump for his second time Ppresident electionial term, the stock price of Tesla has been tied tightly with the success or failure of Trump.

"To be closely tied to" is another more common way of saying that something is strongly associated with something else. E.g. "The stock price of Tesla has been closely tied to..."

Last Tuesday, when Trump won the election, the price of Tesla started to increase rapidly.

I told my wife this information at the first timeimmediately.

"第一时间"用英文不是能直接翻译的。用英文好像“马上”,或者“尽快”,或者"first thing"。比如说"I told my wife about it first thing."

She wasgot very excitinged and bought 10 shares of Tesla stock immediately.

I changed "was" to "got", because it emphasizes that she became excited as a result of you telling her this information.

Since then she havesn't had a good night's sleep.

Another common way to express this: "I didn't sleep well,"

As we are living in China, the time of our location is 13 hours ahead of the US eEast tern Time.

Timezones are usually capitalized. It is common to abbreviate Eastern Time to ET.

So the US stock market opens at 10:30 p.m. at night!

You don't have to say both "p.m." and "at night".

My wife would wake up for 3 to 4 times every night, to watch the current price of Tesla.

Every morning I woke up, she would tell me "Tesla increased forby 8 percent!"

The "by" can also be left out: "Tesla increased 8 percent!"

or "Tesla is now $308 !"

with sparkling eyes as if she would never feel tired.

Actually, I'm very bored aboutof it.

You can "feel (an emotion) about something", but you can't "be bored about something", you have to say "I feel bored about something." It's confusing.

Because the price of Tesla is too high to buy now, and I've missed the best time to "buy the DIP"!

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Nice use of "buy the dip," haha. I Googled it and I think "抄底" is a similar expression in Chinese.

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DavidTheChinese

Nov. 19, 2024

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Thank you so much for these detailed corrections! I really appreciate it! "Buy the DIP" exactly means "抄底" or "逢低买入". Your Chinese is pretty good!

My wife is crazy about the Tesla Stock!

Ever since Elon Musk publicly supported Donald Trump for his second timerm in the Presidential election, the stock price of Tesla has tied tightly with the success or failure of Trump.

I told my wife this information at the first timewhat was going on.

She was very excitinged and bought 10 shares of Tesla stock immediately.

Since then she havesn't had a good sleepbeen sleeping well.

As we are living in China, the time of our location is 13 hours ahead of the US east time.

So the US stock market opens at 10:30 p.m. at night!

My wife would wake up forabout 3 to 4 times every night, to watch the current price of Tesla.

Every morning I woke up, she would tell me "Tesla increased for 8 percent!"

or "Tesla is now $308 !"

with sparkling eyes as if she would never feel tired.

Actually, I'm very bored about it.

Because the price of Tesla is too high to buy now, and I've missed the best time to "buy the DIP"!

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DavidTheChinese

Nov. 19, 2024

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Thank you!

Ever since Elon Musk publicly supported Donald Trump for his second time President election, the stock pricehares of Tesla has been tied tightly with the success or failure of Trump.

Last Tuesday, when Trump won the election, the stock price of Tesla started to increase rapidly.

She was very exciting and bought 10 shares of Tesla stock immediately.

Since then she havesn't had a good sleepslept well.

As we are living in China, the time of our location is 13 hours ahead of the US east time.

My wife would wake up for 3 to 4 times every night, to watch the current stock price of Tesla.

Every morning I woke up, she would tell me "Tesla increased forby 8 percent!"

or "Tesla is now $308 !"

with sparkling eyes as if she would never feelget tired.

Actually, I'm very bored aboutnot interested in it.

Because the priceshares of Tesla is too high to buy now, and I've missed the best time to "buy the DIP"!

What is the DIP?

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The future can be unpredictable at times 😪

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DavidTheChinese

Nov. 14, 2024

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Tank you very much! I think "DIP" means "Drop In Price". Almost all investors prefer to buy stocks in a low price, so many of them are watching the price, and buy some shares once the price is dropped sharply, for example by 2%. This is a typical example of "buy the DIP". ^ ^

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Toluwani

Nov. 14, 2024

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Okay. Thank you for the explanation 😊

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My wife is crazy about the Tesla Stock!

Ever since Elon Musk publicly supported Donald Trump for his second time Ppresident electioncy, the stock price of Tesla has been tied tightly witho the success or failure of Trump.

Last Tuesday, when Trump won the election, the price of Tesla started to increase rapidly.

I told my wife this information at the first time.nd

Sshe was very exciting and boughted, buying 10 shares of Tesla stock immediately.

Since then she havesn't hadgotten a good night's sleep.

As we are living in China, the time of our location is 13 hours ahead of the US eastern time.

So the US stock market opens at 10:30 p.m. at night!

My wife would wake up for 3 to 4 times every night, just to watch the current price of Tesla.

Every morning I woake up, she would tell me "Tesla increased forby 8 percent!"

or "Tesla is now $308 !"

with sparkling eyes as if she would never feel tired.

Actually, I'm very bored aboutwith it.

Because the price of Tesla is too high to buy now, and I've missed the best time to "buy the DIP"!

Feedback

Good writing! Hopefully this Tesla stock brings you both great fortune :)

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DavidTheChinese

Nov. 12, 2024

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Thank you, Judar! Have a nice day!

Ever since Elon Musk publicly supported Donald Trump for his second time President election, the stock price of Tesla has tied tightly with the success or failure of Trump.


Ever since Elon Musk publicly supported Donald Trump for his second time Ppresident electioncy, the stock price of Tesla has been tied tightly witho the success or failure of Trump.

Ever since Elon Musk publicly supported Donald Trump for his second time President election, the stock pricehares of Tesla has been tied tightly with the success or failure of Trump.

Ever since Elon Musk publicly supported Donald Trump for his second timerm in the Presidential election, the stock price of Tesla has tied tightly with the success or failure of Trump.

Ever since Elon Musk publicly supported Donald Trump for his second time Ppresident electionial term, the stock price of Tesla has been tied tightly with the success or failure of Trump.

"To be closely tied to" is another more common way of saying that something is strongly associated with something else. E.g. "The stock price of Tesla has been closely tied to..."

My wife is crazy about the Tesla Stock!


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My wife is crazy about the Tesla Stock!

My wife is crazy about the Tesla Sstock!

We don't usually capitalize "stock" - e.g. Google stock, Tesla stock, etc.

Last Tuesday, when Trump won the election, the price of Tesla started to increase rapidly.


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Last Tuesday, when Trump won the election, the stock price of Tesla started to increase rapidly.

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I told my wife this information at the first time.


I told my wife this information at the first time.nd

I told my wife this information at the first timewhat was going on.

I told my wife this information at the first timeimmediately.

"第一时间"用英文不是能直接翻译的。用英文好像“马上”,或者“尽快”,或者"first thing"。比如说"I told my wife about it first thing."

She was very exciting and bought 10 shares of Tesla stock immediately.


Sshe was very exciting and boughted, buying 10 shares of Tesla stock immediately.

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She was very excitinged and bought 10 shares of Tesla stock immediately.

She wasgot very excitinged and bought 10 shares of Tesla stock immediately.

I changed "was" to "got", because it emphasizes that she became excited as a result of you telling her this information.

Since then she haven't had a good sleep.


Since then she havesn't hadgotten a good night's sleep.

Since then she havesn't had a good sleepslept well.

Since then she havesn't had a good sleepbeen sleeping well.

Since then she havesn't had a good night's sleep.

Another common way to express this: "I didn't sleep well,"

As we are living in China, the time of our location is 13 hours ahead of the US east time.


As we are living in China, the time of our location is 13 hours ahead of the US eastern time.

As we are living in China, the time of our location is 13 hours ahead of the US east time.

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As we are living in China, the time of our location is 13 hours ahead of the US eEast tern Time.

Timezones are usually capitalized. It is common to abbreviate Eastern Time to ET.

So the US stock market opens at 10:30 p.m. at night!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

So the US stock market opens at 10:30 p.m. at night!

You don't have to say both "p.m." and "at night".

My wife would wake up for 3 to 4 times every night, to watch the current price of Tesla.


My wife would wake up for 3 to 4 times every night, just to watch the current price of Tesla.

My wife would wake up for 3 to 4 times every night, to watch the current stock price of Tesla.

My wife would wake up forabout 3 to 4 times every night, to watch the current price of Tesla.

My wife would wake up for 3 to 4 times every night, to watch the current price of Tesla.

Every morning I woke up, she would tell me "Tesla increased for 8 percent!"


Every morning I woake up, she would tell me "Tesla increased forby 8 percent!"

Every morning I woke up, she would tell me "Tesla increased forby 8 percent!"

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Every morning I woke up, she would tell me "Tesla increased forby 8 percent!"

The "by" can also be left out: "Tesla increased 8 percent!"

or "Tesla is now $308 !"


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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or "Tesla is now $308 !"

with sparkling eyes as if she would never feel tired.


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with sparkling eyes as if she would never feelget tired.

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Actually, I'm very bored about it.


Actually, I'm very bored aboutwith it.

Actually, I'm very bored aboutnot interested in it.

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Actually, I'm very bored aboutof it.

You can "feel (an emotion) about something", but you can't "be bored about something", you have to say "I feel bored about something." It's confusing.

Because the price of Tesla is too high to buy now, and I've missed the best time to "buy the DIP"!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Because the priceshares of Tesla is too high to buy now, and I've missed the best time to "buy the DIP"!

What is the DIP?

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