Aug. 12, 2025
Last weekend was fun , we with a friend go to sauna , we feels good in the weekend,
We swim to the water pool and drink sprite ,
After party I go in home . I very need sleep and my brother also.
This my first try, thanks.
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(1) I broke up the sentence into two. I think it flows better this way.
(2) I assume by "we" you're referring to your brother and yourself. If you're only referring to yourself, you'd use "I": "I went to a sauna with a friend".
(3) I took a guess at what you meant by "we feels good in the weekend". I assume you're talking about the sauna.
(4) "Sprite" is the name of a trademarked product and should be capitalised.
(5) The phrase is "go home" (or "went home" for the past tense).
I verreally need sleep and so does my brother also.
In this situation, we'd use "really" instead of "very".
This is my first try writing, thanks.
I suggest clarifying explicitly what it is that you're trying for the first time.
Feedback
Good job and keep going!!
Last weekend was fun , we went with a friend go to the sauna , we feels good in the weekend,
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We swiam toin the water pool and driank sprite ,
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After the party I go inwent home .
I verreally need sleep, and so does my brother also.
This my first try, thanks.
Feedback
Good job, keep it up 👍
My weekend My Generally, all words in a title are capitalised. |
Last weekend was fun , we with a friend go to sauna , we feels good in the weekend, We swim to the water pool and drink sprite , After party I go in home . Last weekend was fun Last weekend was fun (1) I broke up the sentence into two. I think it flows better this way. (2) I assume by "we" you're referring to your brother and yourself. If you're only referring to yourself, you'd use "I": "I went to a sauna with a friend". (3) I took a guess at what you meant by "we feels good in the weekend". I assume you're talking about the sauna. (4) "Sprite" is the name of a trademarked product and should be capitalised. (5) The phrase is "go home" (or "went home" for the past tense). |
I very need sleep and my brother also. I I In this situation, we'd use "really" instead of "very". |
This my first try, thanks. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This is my first try writing, thanks. I suggest clarifying explicitly what it is that you're trying for the first time. |
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