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Aug. 12, 2025

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My weekend

Last weekend was fun , we with a friend go to sauna , we feels good in the weekend,
We swim to the water pool and drink sprite ,
After party I go in home . I very need sleep and my brother also.
This my first try, thanks.

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My wWeekend

Generally, all words in a title are capitalised.

Last weekend was fun , we with a friend go to sauna , we. We went to a sauna with a friend which feelst good in the weekend,
We
swiam toin the water pool and driank sSprite , ¶
A
, then after the party I go inwent home .

(1) I broke up the sentence into two. I think it flows better this way.
(2) I assume by "we" you're referring to your brother and yourself. If you're only referring to yourself, you'd use "I": "I went to a sauna with a friend".
(3) I took a guess at what you meant by "we feels good in the weekend". I assume you're talking about the sauna.
(4) "Sprite" is the name of a trademarked product and should be capitalised.
(5) The phrase is "go home" (or "went home" for the past tense).

I verreally need sleep and so does my brother also.

In this situation, we'd use "really" instead of "very".

This is my first try writing, thanks.

I suggest clarifying explicitly what it is that you're trying for the first time.

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Good job and keep going!!

Last weekend was fun , we went with a friend go to the sauna , we feels good in the weekend, hich felt good.
We sw
iam toin the water pool and driank sprite , .
After
the party I go inwent home .

I verreally need sleep, and so does my brother also.

This my first try, thanks.

Feedback

Good job, keep it up 👍

My weekend


My wWeekend

Generally, all words in a title are capitalised.

Last weekend was fun , we with a friend go to sauna , we feels good in the weekend, We swim to the water pool and drink sprite , After party I go in home .


Last weekend was fun , we went with a friend go to the sauna , we feels good in the weekend, hich felt good.
We sw
iam toin the water pool and driank sprite , .
After
the party I go inwent home .

Last weekend was fun , we with a friend go to sauna , we. We went to a sauna with a friend which feelst good in the weekend,
We
swiam toin the water pool and driank sSprite , ¶
A
, then after the party I go inwent home .

(1) I broke up the sentence into two. I think it flows better this way. (2) I assume by "we" you're referring to your brother and yourself. If you're only referring to yourself, you'd use "I": "I went to a sauna with a friend". (3) I took a guess at what you meant by "we feels good in the weekend". I assume you're talking about the sauna. (4) "Sprite" is the name of a trademarked product and should be capitalised. (5) The phrase is "go home" (or "went home" for the past tense).

I very need sleep and my brother also.


I verreally need sleep, and so does my brother also.

I verreally need sleep and so does my brother also.

In this situation, we'd use "really" instead of "very".

This my first try, thanks.


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This is my first try writing, thanks.

I suggest clarifying explicitly what it is that you're trying for the first time.

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