May 25, 2020
My Weekend 23/24 May 2020
This weekend was very cold, I didn't leave the house, I took the time to study, read books, watch movies and today Monday is a holiday here in my state. Today's holiday was actually an anticipation of the 1932 Constitutionalist Revolution holiday originally celebrated on 9 July. This decision to anticipate this holiday was made by the state governor who wanted the population to stay at home so as not to have crowds of people, in order to reduce the spread of Coronavirus. Unfortunately, many people are not respecting how this isolation measure should.
Esse fim de semana foi muito frio, eu não saí de casa aproveitei o tempo para estudar, ler livros assistir séries e filmes, e hoje segunda-feira é feriado aqui no meu estado. Na verdade o feriado de hoje foi uma antecipação do feriado da Revolução Constitucionalista de 1932 comemorado originalmente em 9 de Julho. Essa decisão de se antecipar esse feriado, foi do governador do estado que queria que a população ficasse em casa para não ter aglomeração de pessoas, para assim diminuir o contágio do Coronavirus. Infelizmente muitas pessoas não estão respeitando como deveriam essa medida de isolamento.
My Weekend 23/24 May 2020
This weekend was very cold,. I didn't leave the house, I took the time to study, read books, and watch movies and t. Today is Monday and is a holiday here in my state.
'And' goes before the final item in a list
'Today, Monday,' is correct but it's more natural to write 'Today is Monday and it is...'
Today's holiday was actually an anticipcommemoration of the 1932 Constitutionalist Revolution, a holiday originally celebrated on 9 July.
Thise decision to anticipcommemorate this holiday was made by the state governor who wanted the population to stay at home so as not to have crowds of people, in order to reduce the spread of Coronavirus.
Unfortunately, many people are not respecting how thisthe isolation measures as they should.
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Very good. Just a few mistakes here and there.
May 26, 2020
Thanks 😎👍🏻
My Weekend 23/24 May 2020
This weekend was very cold,. I didn't leave the house, but instead, I took the time to study, read books, and watch movies and today. Today, which is Monday, is a holiday here in my state.
I added "but instead" to make it sound smoother.
Today's holiday was actually an anticipation of the 1932 Constitutionalist Revolution holidayof 1932, originally celebrated on 9 July.¶
"the" instead of "an" because you are talking about something specific
This decision to anticipate this holiday was made by the state governor who wanted the population to stay at home sto as not tovoid have crowds of people, in order to reduce the spread of Coronavirus.
Unfortunately, many people are not respecting how this isolation measure like they should.
May 25, 2020
Good job! Your writing was great! :D
One thing I will mention is we don't really use the word "anticipation" much. It's definitely a word, but I got a little confused when I read it, since I barely see it. I don't really know a synonym to help you with. If you tend to use that term a lot, I would suggest to find another way to say it.
May 26, 2020
Thanks 👍🏻🙂
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This weekend was very cold, I didn't leave the house, I took the time to study, read books, watch movies and today Monday is a holiday here in my state. This weekend was very cold I added "but instead" to make it sound smoother. This weekend was very cold 'And' goes before the final item in a list 'Today, Monday,' is correct but it's more natural to write 'Today is Monday and it is...' |
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Today's holiday was actually an anticipation of the 1932 Constitutionalist Revolution holiday originally celebrated on 9 July. Today's holiday was actually an anticipation of the "the" instead of "an" because you are talking about something specific Today's holiday was actually an |
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This decision to anticipate this holiday was made by the state governor who wanted the population to stay at home so as not to have crowds of people, in order to reduce the spread of Coronavirus. This decision to anticipate this holiday was made by the state governor who wanted the population to stay at home Th |
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Unfortunately, many people are not respecting how this isolation measure should. Unfortunately, many people are not respecting Unfortunately, many people are not respecting |
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