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galoarellano1987

Oct. 21, 2024

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My weekend

My weekend began the last Friday, because I had medical permission. I had cough and fever the Thursday night.
Friday, I had taking pills and drinking enough water.

On morning Satudary, I felt better, for this reason I went to the park with my childrens. We was in the park around 2 hours, We was ridding bycicle and Walking around the park. I hope the next Saturday, We can visit the park.

On Sunday, at the morning, We went to supermarket to buy somethings for this week. Also, I had very happy because my team Barcelona won the "Astillero Classic"

Thank you for reading me.

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My weekend began the laston Friday, because I had medicala doctor's permission.

"because I took a sick day." (most natural)
"because I stayed home sick." or "because I was (home) sick."
"because I went on medical leave." (if it was long term)

I had cough and fever theon Thursday night.

On Friday, I had takingo take pills and make sure I was drinking enough water.

On morning Saturdary, I felt better, for this reason I went to the park with my childrens.

We wasere in the park around 2 hours,. We was ridding bycirode bicycles and Wwalkinged around the park.

I hope the next Saturday, Wwe can visit the park again.

On Sunday, atin the morning, Wwe went to supermarket to buy some things for this week.

Also, I had very happy day because my team, Barcelona, won the "Astillero Classic"


Thank you for reading m
ey post.

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I'm glad to hear you're feeling better!

My weekend


My weekend began the last Friday, because I had medical permission.


My weekend began the laston Friday, because I had medicala doctor's permission.

"because I took a sick day." (most natural) "because I stayed home sick." or "because I was (home) sick." "because I went on medical leave." (if it was long term)

I had cough and fever the Thursday night.


I had cough and fever theon Thursday night.

Friday, I had taking pills and drinking enough water.


On Friday, I had takingo take pills and make sure I was drinking enough water.

On morning Satudary, I felt better, for this reason I went to the park with my childrens.


On morning Saturdary, I felt better, for this reason I went to the park with my childrens.

We was in the park around 2 hours, We was ridding bycicle and Walking around the park.


We wasere in the park around 2 hours,. We was ridding bycirode bicycles and Wwalkinged around the park.

I hope the next Saturday, We can visit the park.


I hope the next Saturday, Wwe can visit the park again.

On Sunday, at the morning, We went to supermarket to buy somethings for this week.


On Sunday, atin the morning, Wwe went to supermarket to buy some things for this week.

Also, I had very happy because my team Barcelona won the "Astillero Classic" Thank you for reading me.


Also, I had very happy day because my team, Barcelona, won the "Astillero Classic"


Thank you for reading m
ey post.

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