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danielsiq

Oct. 19, 2020

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My Weekend

On Friday, I decided not to leave the house, because it was cold and I stayed home drinking beer but I changed my mind and decided to go out to eat a hot dog.
As it was cold, I had to wear a jacket.
The hot dog was delicious.

On Saturday I studied in the morning and didn't go to lunch at the restaurant.
On Saturdays my mom doesn't prepare lunch, we have to cook something or go to lunch at the restaurant.

Saturday night at home I stayed at home watching Godfather I on Netflix.

Sunday was a day off and I drank beers before lunch.

At night I ordered an Uber and before going to the bar I had to deposit the rent for my father's workshop at the bank.

The Uber driver was not a friendly person.
After I made the deposit I went to the bar.

There were a lot of people there and to my concern no one but me and the waiters were wearing a mask.
I fear the same thing happening in Europe, a second wave of Corona virus.

Although the rates of contaminations and deaths have declined a lot here in recent weeks, I still don't feel totally safe.

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My Weekend

On Friday, I decided not to leave the house, because it was cold an, instead I stayed home drinking beer but. Later, I changed my mind and decided to go out to eathave a hot dog.

You could say "to eat a hotdog" but it sounds more natural to "have a hot dog" or to "go for a hot dog" in thi sentence

As it was cold, so I had to wear a jacket.

The hot dog was delicious.

On Saturday I studied in the morning and didn't go to lunch at the restaurant.

On Saturdays my mom doesidn't prepare lunch, we haveeither had to cook something or go to lunch at the restaurant.

Saturday night at home I stayed at home watching The Godfather I on Netflix.

I think the movie title in english is "The Godfather"

Sunday was a day off and I drank, so I had some beers before lunch.

You could also say "I drank beer before lunch" if you didn't want to specify the quantity

At night I ordered an Uber and before going to the bar I had to deposites the rent for my father's workshop at the bank.

The Uber driver was not a friendly person.

After I made the deposit I went to the bar.

There were a lot of people there and to my concern no one but me and the waiters were wearing a mask.

"to my concern" is not something you would say in english I'm not sure what you would say besides maybe "to my surprise" or "I was concerned that" depending on what you are trying to get across

I fear the same thing happening in Europe,; a second wave of Corona virus.

Although the rates of contaminatransmitions and deaths have declined a lot here in recent weeks, I still don't feel totally safe.

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danielsiq

Oct. 20, 2020

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Thank you for the corrections.
Best regards

The hot dog was delicious.


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My Weekende


On Friday, I decided not to leave the house, because it was cold and I stayed home drinking beer but I changed my mind and decided to go out to eat a hot dog.


On Friday, I decided not to leave the house, because it was cold an, instead I stayed home drinking beer but. Later, I changed my mind and decided to go out to eathave a hot dog.

You could say "to eat a hotdog" but it sounds more natural to "have a hot dog" or to "go for a hot dog" in thi sentence

As it was cold, I had to wear a jacket.


As it was cold, so I had to wear a jacket.

On Saturday I studied in the morning and didn't go to lunch at the restaurant.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

On Saturdays my mom doesn't prepare lunch, we have to cook something or go to lunch at the restaurant.


On Saturdays my mom doesidn't prepare lunch, we haveeither had to cook something or go to lunch at the restaurant.

Saturday night at home I stayed at home watching Godfather I on Netflix.


Saturday night at home I stayed at home watching The Godfather I on Netflix.

I think the movie title in english is "The Godfather"

Sunday was a day off and I drank beers before lunch.


Sunday was a day off and I drank, so I had some beers before lunch.

You could also say "I drank beer before lunch" if you didn't want to specify the quantity

At night I ordered an Uber and before going to the bar I had to deposit the rent for my father's workshop at the bank.


At night I ordered an Uber and before going to the bar I had to deposites the rent for my father's workshop at the bank.

The Uber driver was not a friendly person.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

After I made the deposit I went to the bar.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

There were a lot of people there and to my concern no one but me and the waiters were wearing a mask.


There were a lot of people there and to my concern no one but me and the waiters were wearing a mask.

"to my concern" is not something you would say in english I'm not sure what you would say besides maybe "to my surprise" or "I was concerned that" depending on what you are trying to get across

I fear the same thing happening in Europe, a second wave of Corona virus.


I fear the same thing happening in Europe,; a second wave of Corona virus.

Although the rates of contaminations and deaths have declined a lot here in recent weeks, I still don't feel totally safe.


Although the rates of contaminatransmitions and deaths have declined a lot here in recent weeks, I still don't feel totally safe.

My Weekend


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