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jpsmg866

June 28, 2025

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my week

This week was normal. I spant at embrapa working with my coworker. this week I had the privilege eating at home almost every day. I dind't have any exams this week, hallelujah. I went to the gym every single day and I feel that progressing with gym workouts and increasing the loads. by the way, something different happend this week, on monday I took my brother to the hospital for an exam. It was procedure using a camera to check if there was anything wrong with his rectum . another highlight of the week was my seeds class , in which my college friend and I evaluated treated seeds to determine which ones were good for germination and which ones were not.

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mMy wWeek

Titlecase if I'm being picky

I spaent it at eEmbrapa working with my coworker.

The person before me explained well.

tThis week I had the privilege of eating at home almost every day.

privilege should be followed by "of"

I dindn't have any exams this week, hallelujah.

I went to the gym every single day and I feel thate progress ing with my gym workouts andfrom increasing the loads.

I'm not totally clear on exactly what you are trying to say about gym. To me, it sounds like you feel progress because you have been able to increase the loads. But I think you could also be saying that you have been able to feel progress by increasing the loads. Slightly different, but not crucially.

bBy the way, something different happened this week, o. On monday, I took my brother to the hospital for an exam.

Don't forget to capitalize. I put a period because you have two seperate sentences combined into one.

It was a procedure using a camera to check if there was anything wrong with his rectum .

"procedure" needs an article
also haha.

aAnother highlight of the week was my seeds class , in which my college friend and I evaluated treated seeds to determine which ones were good for germination and which ones were not.

don't forget to capitalize.

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Seeds class is interesting! I wish I knew how to do that. Hope your brother's rectum has no issues hahaha.

Generally, you wrote this well. Small errors, and a couple odd wordings. That's all. Don't forget to capitalise :)

mMy wWeek

I spaent it at embrapa working with my coworker.

Don't know what embrapa is, but if it is the name of a store/business, then it should usually be capitalized.

tThis week I had the privilege eating at home almost every day.

I dindn't have any exams this week, hallelujah.

I went to the gym every single day and. I feel thatlike I am progressing with gymthe workouts and increasing the loadsamount of weight I can lift.

bBy the way, something different happened this week, o. On mMonday I took my brother to the hospital for an exam.

It was procedure using a camera to check if there was anything wrong with his rectum .

aAnother highlight of the week was my seeds class , in which m. My college friend and I evaluated treated seeds to determine which ones were good for germination and which ones were not.

I went to the gym every single day and I feel that progressing with gym workouts and increasing the loads.


I went to the gym every single day and. I feel thatlike I am progressing with gymthe workouts and increasing the loadsamount of weight I can lift.

I went to the gym every single day and I feel thate progress ing with my gym workouts andfrom increasing the loads.

I'm not totally clear on exactly what you are trying to say about gym. To me, it sounds like you feel progress because you have been able to increase the loads. But I think you could also be saying that you have been able to feel progress by increasing the loads. Slightly different, but not crucially.

my week


mMy wWeek

mMy wWeek

Titlecase if I'm being picky

This week was normal.


another highlight of the week was my seeds class , in which my college friend and I evaluated treated seeds to determine which ones were good for germination and which ones were not.


aAnother highlight of the week was my seeds class , in which m. My college friend and I evaluated treated seeds to determine which ones were good for germination and which ones were not.

aAnother highlight of the week was my seeds class , in which my college friend and I evaluated treated seeds to determine which ones were good for germination and which ones were not.

don't forget to capitalize.

I spant at embrapa working with my coworker.


I spaent it at embrapa working with my coworker.

Don't know what embrapa is, but if it is the name of a store/business, then it should usually be capitalized.

I spaent it at eEmbrapa working with my coworker.

The person before me explained well.

this week I had the privilege eating at home almost every day.


tThis week I had the privilege eating at home almost every day.

tThis week I had the privilege of eating at home almost every day.

privilege should be followed by "of"

I dind't have any exams this week, hallelujah.


I dindn't have any exams this week, hallelujah.

I dindn't have any exams this week, hallelujah.

by the way, something different happend this week, on monday I took my brother to the hospital for an exam.


bBy the way, something different happened this week, o. On mMonday I took my brother to the hospital for an exam.

bBy the way, something different happened this week, o. On monday, I took my brother to the hospital for an exam.

Don't forget to capitalize. I put a period because you have two seperate sentences combined into one.

It was procedure using a camera to check if there was anything wrong with his rectum .


It was procedure using a camera to check if there was anything wrong with his rectum .

It was a procedure using a camera to check if there was anything wrong with his rectum .

"procedure" needs an article also haha.

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