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Sept. 26, 2020

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My weaknesses

I am a person who has many weaknesses. I know exactly about that and always want to change them, but I can not do it. This reminds me of an old Chinese saying, the regime is easy to change, but it is hard to change a person's character. And I think this is a true saying. I have the following weaknesses: first, I don't know how to care for people. I used to try to do that, but it seemed odd and the result was not satisfied by the two sides. Second, don't either speak or speak too directly. Speaking this way sometimes makes someone uncomfortable and even gets mad. Third, too little to communicate with others, this is not good for people to get to know each other. Fourth, I am easy to be proud and I think this is a vital weakness because I know everybody hates a person who gets proud easily. Fifth, always careless about clothing. I like to wear casual clothing, as long as I feel comfortable, for instance, never wear a suit and tie, never wear shoes with high heels. There are so many weaknesses I can not tell them all at one moment, maybe I can tell them next time. Although I have many weaknesses, I think I haven't done bad things to people. I don't think I have the ability.

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My weaknesses

I am a person who hasith many weaknesses.

I know exactly about thait and always want to change themmyself, but I can not do it.

This reminds me of an old Chinese saying, t"The regime is easy to change, but it is hard to change a person's character."

And I think this is a true sayingsaying is true.

I have the following weaknesses: first,My first weakness is that I don't know how to care for people.

I used to try to do thatcaring for people, but it seemed odd and the result was not satisfied by the twoying to either sides.

Second, don'tly, I either don't speak or speak too directly.

Speaking this way sometimes makes someonpeople uncomfortable and even gets mad.

Third, too little toI communicate too little with others, this is not goodenough for people to get to know each other.

Fourth, I amay easy to beily appear too proud and I think this is a vital weakness because I know everybody hates a person who gets proud easily.

Fifth, I am always careless about clothing.

I like to wear casual clothing, as long as I feel comfortable, for instance, I never wear a suit and a tie, and never wear shoes with high heels.

There are so many weaknesses that I can not tell them all at once moment, maybe I can tell them next time.

Although I have many weaknesses, I think I haven't done bad things to people.

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Jack

Sept. 27, 2020

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Thank you for your correction, I really appreciate it. Thanks again.

My wWeaknesses

I know exactly about thatwhat they are, and always want to change them, but I can no't do it.

This reminds me of an old Chinese saying, t"The regime is easy to change, but it i's hard to change a person's character".

it's = it is

And I think this is a true sayingsaying is true.

I have the following weaknesses: fFirst off, I don't know how to care for people.

I used to try to do that, but it seemed odd and the result was not satisfied by the twoying to either sides.

Second, don'tly, I either don't speak or speak too directly.

Speaking this way to someone, can sometimes makes someone them uncomfortable and even gets mad.

Third, too little toI communicate too little with others, and this is non't good for people who need/want to get to know each other.

is not = isn't

Fourth, I am easy to beasily become proud and I think this is a vital weakness because I know everybody hates a person who gets proud easily.

Fifth, I'm always careless about clothing.

I like to wear casual clothing, as long as I feel comfortable, for instance, I never wear a suit and tie, and never wear shoes with high heels.

There are so many weaknesses that I can no't tell them all at one moment, so maybe I can tell them all next time.

I don't think I have the ability.

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Jack

Sept. 26, 2020

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Thank you for your correction, you are very kind. I really appreciate it.

My weaknesses


My wWeaknesses

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I am a person who has many weaknesses.


I am a person who hasith many weaknesses.

I know exactly about that and always want to change them, but I can not do it.


I know exactly about thatwhat they are, and always want to change them, but I can no't do it.

I know exactly about thait and always want to change themmyself, but I can not do it.

This reminds me of an old Chinese saying, the regime is easy to change, but it is hard to change a person's character.


This reminds me of an old Chinese saying, t"The regime is easy to change, but it i's hard to change a person's character".

it's = it is

This reminds me of an old Chinese saying, t"The regime is easy to change, but it is hard to change a person's character."

And I think this is a true saying.


And I think this is a true sayingsaying is true.

And I think this is a true sayingsaying is true.

I have the following weaknesses: first, I don't know how to care for people.


I have the following weaknesses: fFirst off, I don't know how to care for people.

I have the following weaknesses: first,My first weakness is that I don't know how to care for people.

I used to try to do that, but it seemed odd and the result was not satisfied by the two sides.


I used to try to do that, but it seemed odd and the result was not satisfied by the twoying to either sides.

I used to try to do thatcaring for people, but it seemed odd and the result was not satisfied by the twoying to either sides.

Second, don't either speak or speak too directly.


Second, don'tly, I either don't speak or speak too directly.

Second, don'tly, I either don't speak or speak too directly.

Speaking this way sometimes makes someone uncomfortable and even gets mad.


Speaking this way to someone, can sometimes makes someone them uncomfortable and even gets mad.

Speaking this way sometimes makes someonpeople uncomfortable and even gets mad.

Third, too little to communicate with others, this is not good for people to get to know each other.


Third, too little toI communicate too little with others, and this is non't good for people who need/want to get to know each other.

is not = isn't

Third, too little toI communicate too little with others, this is not goodenough for people to get to know each other.

Fourth, I am easy to be proud and I think this is a vital weakness because I know everybody hates a person who gets proud easily.


Fourth, I am easy to beasily become proud and I think this is a vital weakness because I know everybody hates a person who gets proud easily.

Fourth, I amay easy to beily appear too proud and I think this is a vital weakness because I know everybody hates a person who gets proud easily.

Fifth, always careless about clothing.


Fifth, I'm always careless about clothing.

Fifth, I am always careless about clothing.

I like to wear casual clothing, as long as I feel comfortable, for instance, never wear a suit and tie, never wear shoes with high heels.


I like to wear casual clothing, as long as I feel comfortable, for instance, I never wear a suit and tie, and never wear shoes with high heels.

I like to wear casual clothing, as long as I feel comfortable, for instance, I never wear a suit and a tie, and never wear shoes with high heels.

There are so many weaknesses I can not tell them all at one moment, maybe I can tell them next time.


There are so many weaknesses that I can no't tell them all at one moment, so maybe I can tell them all next time.

There are so many weaknesses that I can not tell them all at once moment, maybe I can tell them next time.

Although I have many weaknesses, I think I haven't done bad things to people.


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I don't think I have the ability.


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