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My wallpaper is a drawing of Icarus, from Greek mythology. If you asked me any questions about the depth of his story, I couldn't tell you much. Honestly, I vaguely remember his story from high school or middle school when we studied Greek Mythology.
This story resonates with me: it's a boy who created his own wigs to escape a maze. He flew in the sky and got so close to the sun that it melted the fabric of his wigs. He fell and died, but he smiled while falling because he got close to the sun.
It resonates with me because I know what I aim for right now, and even if it hurts sometimes ( because of the lack of sleep... ) I know that I'll be happy at the end.
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My wallpaper is a drawing of Icarus, from Greek mythology.
If you asked me any questions about the depthtails of his story, I couldn't tell you much.
Honestly, I only vaguely remember his story from high school or middle school when we studied Greek Mythology.
TStill, this story resonates with me: it's. It's about a boy who created his own wigs to escape a maze.
He flew into the sky, and got so close to the sun that it melted the fabric of his wings.
He fell and died, but he smiled while falling because he got close to the sun.
ItThis resonates with me because I know what I'm aiming for right now, a will make me happy in the end, even if it hurts sometimes ( because of the lack of sleep... ) I know that I'll be happy at the end).
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If you asked me any questions about the depth of his story, I couldn't tell you much.
You could say "details of his story" or "questions about his backstory"
This story resonates with me:; it's a boy who created his own wigs to escape a maze.
Small grammar error I think a semi colon joins sentences like this instead of the colon.
He flew intoward the sky and got so close to the sun that it melted the fabric of his wings. (or just melted his wings is enough)
He fell and died, but he smiled while falling because he got close to the sun.
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If you asked me any questions about the depth of his story, I couldn't tell you much. If you asked me any questions about the depth of his story, I couldn't tell you much. You could say "details of his story" or "questions about his backstory" If you asked me any questions about the de |
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Honestly, I vaguely remember his story from high school or middle school when we studied Greek Mythology. Honestly, I only vaguely remember his story from high school or middle school when we studied Greek Mythology. |
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This story resonates with me: it's a boy who created his own wigs to escape a maze. This story resonates with me Small grammar error I think a semi colon joins sentences like this instead of the colon.
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He flew in the sky and got so close to the sun that it melted the fabric of his wigs. He flew He flew into the sky, and got so close to the sun that it melted the fabric of his wings. |
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He fell and died, but he smiled while falling because he got close to the sun. He fell and died, but he smiled while falling because he got close to the sun. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It resonates with me because I know what I aim for right now, and even if it hurts sometimes ( because of the lack of sleep... ) I know that I'll be happy at the end.
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