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ayanbaru

Jan. 21, 2023

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My Voice

A few days ago, one of my friends said that my voice sounds like a man. I was like “I knew that my voice is too low as a woman, I wish I had an attractive voice!”
I tend to hasitate to talk to strangers because I don’t like how my voice sounds. Even to my friends I sometimes get nervous before talking.
So I told another friend about that and then she quickly responded that my voice sounds lovely. It was so unexpected that made me ask her why.
She said that she likes me singing a song in an attractive way and how my voice traces the melody. Guess how much her words saved me. By her words I found that my voice when singing sounds not as low as that of when speaking so I became proud of myself singing well and that made me more into singing than before.
I’m still not confident in talking but I no longer feel bad about my voice anymore.

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My Voice

A few days ago, one of my friends said that my voice sounds like a man.

I was like, “I kneow that my voice is too low asfor a woman,. I wish I had an attractive voice!”

I tend to haesitate to talk to strangers because I don’t like how my voice sounds.

Even to my friends I sometimes get nervous before talking.

So I told another friend about that and then she quickly responded that my voice sounds lovely.

It was so unexpected that it made me ask her why.

She said that she likes me singhow I sing a song in an attractive way and how my voice traces the melody.

いいですね。

Guess how much her words saved me.

Byecause of her words, I found that my voice when singing sounds is not as low as that ofit is when speaking so I became proud of myself singing well and that madegot me more into singing than before.

すごい!

I’m still not confident in talspeaking but I no longer feel bad about my voice any more.

よかった。

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My Voice

A few days ago, one of my friends said that my voice sounds like a man.

I was like, “I knew that my voice iseemed too low asfor a woman,. I wish I had an attractive voice!”

I tend to haesitate to talk to strangers because I don’t like how my voice sounds.

Even towith my friends, I sometimes get nervous before talking.

So I told another friend about that and then she quickly responded that my voice sounds lovely.

It was so unexpected that it made me ask her why.

Guess how much her words saved me.

If you are asking someone to guess how much her words have saved you, you would say it in this way. What might make more sense because you're telling us is: Her words have really saved me.

Byecause of her words, I found that my voice when singing sounds is not as low as that of when speaking so I became proud of myself singing well and that made me more into singing than before.

I’m still not confident in talking but I no longer feel bad about my voice anymore.

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ayanbaru

Jan. 22, 2023

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My Voice


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A few days ago, one of my friends said that my voice sounds like a man.


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I was like “I knew that my voice is too low as a woman, I wish I had an attractive voice!”


I was like, “I knew that my voice iseemed too low asfor a woman,. I wish I had an attractive voice!”

I was like, “I kneow that my voice is too low asfor a woman,. I wish I had an attractive voice!”

I tend to hasitate to talk to strangers because I don’t like how my voice sounds.


I tend to haesitate to talk to strangers because I don’t like how my voice sounds.

I tend to haesitate to talk to strangers because I don’t like how my voice sounds.

Even to my friends I sometimes get nervous before talking.


Even towith my friends, I sometimes get nervous before talking.

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So I told another friend about that and then she quickly responded that my voice sounds lovely.


So I told another friend about that and then she quickly responded that my voice sounds lovely.

So I told another friend about that and then she quickly responded that my voice sounds lovely.

It was so unexpected that made me ask her why.


It was so unexpected that it made me ask her why.

It was so unexpected that it made me ask her why.

She said that she likes me singing a song in an attractive way and how my voice traces the melody.


She said that she likes me singhow I sing a song in an attractive way and how my voice traces the melody.

いいですね。

Guess how much her words saved me.


Guess how much her words saved me.

If you are asking someone to guess how much her words have saved you, you would say it in this way. What might make more sense because you're telling us is: Her words have really saved me.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

By her words I found that my voice when singing sounds not as low as that of when speaking so I became proud of myself singing well and that made me more into singing than before.


Byecause of her words, I found that my voice when singing sounds is not as low as that of when speaking so I became proud of myself singing well and that made me more into singing than before.

Byecause of her words, I found that my voice when singing sounds is not as low as that ofit is when speaking so I became proud of myself singing well and that madegot me more into singing than before.

すごい!

I’m still not confident in talking but I no longer feel bad about my voice anymore.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I’m still not confident in talspeaking but I no longer feel bad about my voice any more.

よかった。

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