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Jack

May 19, 2025

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My Vocational School And Classes Mates.

When I was studying at a secondary vocational school, there were 29 students in my class.

Around one or two months later, a female student's admission was revoked. The reason was that someone reported to the education authorities that she was a high school graduate.

At that time, only middle school students were eligible to take the secondary vocational school entrance examination.

Consequently, there were only 28 students left in our class, among whom 5 were female.

Our classroom was a one - story building, approximately 11 meters long and 7 meters wide.

Our dormitory was about the same size as the classroom. It was equipped with bunk beds. The dormitory supervisors would turn off the lights at 10 p.m. sharp.

Our major was agricultural machinery management. We studied a wide range of topics related to automobiles and agricultural machinery.

After graduation, two of my classmates were assigned to the Agricultural Machinery Bureau of Anhui Province. The rest were dispatched to the agricultural machinery bureaus of various counties in my hometown, Fuyang.

As for me, I was assigned to a county in another city. Nevertheless, with the assistance of my relatives, I was transferred back to my hometown four years later.

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My Vocational School Aand Classes Mmates.

Classmates is one word.

and is usually not capitalised, even in title case.

Our classroom was a one - story building, approximately 11 meters long and 7 meters wide.

My Vvocational Sschool Aand Cclasses Mmates.

No need to capitalise every word

When I was studying at a secondary vocational school, there were 29 students in my class.

Around one or two months later, a female student's admission was revoked.

The reason was that someone had reported to the education authorities that she was a high school graduate.

At that time, only middle school students were eligible to take the secondary vocational school entrance examination.

Consequently, there were only 28 students left in our class, among whom, 5 were female.

Our classroom was a one - story building, approximately 11 meters long and 7 meters wide.

Our dormitory was about the same size as the classroom.

It was equipped with bunk beds.

The dormitory supervisors would turn off the lights at 10 p.m. sharp.

Our major was agricultural machinery management.

We studied a wide range of topics related to automobiles and agricultural machinery.

After graduation, two of my classmates were assigned to the Agricultural Machinery Bureau of Anhui Province.

The rest were dispatched to the agricultural machinery bureaus ofin various counties in my hometown, Fuyang.

As for me, I was assigned to a county in another city.

Nevertheless, with the assistance of my relatives, I was transferred back to my hometown four years later.

Jack's avatar
Jack

May 19, 2025

5

Thank you very much.

My Vocational School And Classes Mates.

When I was studying at a secondary vocational school, there were 29 students in my class.

Around one or two months later, a female student's admission was revoked.

The reason was that someone reported to the education authorities that she was a high school graduate.

At that time, only middle school students were eligible to take the secondary vocational school entrance examination.

Consequently, there were only 28 students left in our class, among whom 5 were female.

Our classroom was a one - story building, approximately 11 meters long and 7 meters wide.

Our dormitory was about the same size as the classroom.

It was equipped with bunk beds.

The dormitory supervisors would turn off the lights at 10 p.m. sharp.

Our major was agricultural machinery management.

We studied a wide range of topics related to automobiles and agricultural machinery.

After graduation, two of my classmates were assigned to the Agricultural Machinery Bureau of Anhui Province.

The rest were dispatched to the agricultural machinery bureaus of various counties in my hometown, Fuyang.

As for me, I was assigned to a county in another city.

Nevertheless, with the assistance of my relatives, I was transferred back to my hometown four years later.

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Nice work.

Our classroom was a one - -story building, approximately 11 meters long and 7 meters wide.

we normally say "single story building", but when connecting words like wide-eyed, push-ups, there are no spaces!

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Jack

May 19, 2025

5

Thank you very much.

Our dormitory was about the same size as the classroom.


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My Vocational School And Classes Mates.


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My Vvocational Sschool Aand Cclasses Mmates.

No need to capitalise every word

My Vocational School Aand Classes Mmates.

Classmates is one word. and is usually not capitalised, even in title case.

When I was studying at a secondary vocational school, there were 29 students in my class.


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Around one or two months later, a female student's admission was revoked.


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The reason was that someone reported to the education authorities that she was a high school graduate.


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The reason was that someone had reported to the education authorities that she was a high school graduate.

At that time, only middle school students were eligible to take the secondary vocational school entrance examination.


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Consequently, there were only 28 students left in our class, among whom 5 were female.


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Consequently, there were only 28 students left in our class, among whom, 5 were female.

Our classroom was a one - story building, approximately 11 meters long and 7 meters wide.


Our classroom was a one - -story building, approximately 11 meters long and 7 meters wide.

we normally say "single story building", but when connecting words like wide-eyed, push-ups, there are no spaces!

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Our classroom was a one - story building, approximately 11 meters long and 7 meters wide.

It was equipped with bunk beds.


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The dormitory supervisors would turn off the lights at 10 p.m. sharp.


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Our major was agricultural machinery management.


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We studied a wide range of topics related to automobiles and agricultural machinery.


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After graduation, two of my classmates were assigned to the Agricultural Machinery Bureau of Anhui Province.


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The rest were dispatched to the agricultural machinery bureaus of various counties in my hometown, Fuyang.


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The rest were dispatched to the agricultural machinery bureaus ofin various counties in my hometown, Fuyang.

As for me, I was assigned to a county in another city.


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Nevertheless, with the assistance of my relatives, I was transferred back to my hometown four years later.


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