Sept. 19, 2020
My village
In the early eighties, I studied in Fuyang city. Every time I go back to my village during the summer vacation or winter break, I always feel sad because the village hasn’t even changed a little since I left it. In the following decade when I got a job, it was still in its old shape that I remembered at my young age. Maybe in the 2010’s, our village started to change and it seemed very quick. Each family built a new house with three or four floors and the roads were all renewed to cement. Not to mention tap water, telephones, networks and cars. Back in the old days, what we lived in was just a thatched cottage, mud road, no electricity, wherever we went we just took a walk and we didn’t even have a bike. Every time I think of those days when we didn’t even have enough food to eat, I often feel sorrow. However, all of those days have passed and now, my old neighbors all have better living conditions. But if the plans for the countryside could be more reasonable, the public facilities are perfect. It would be a smart choice to live in the countryside. In a word, the countryside has developed really fast in recent years. I am very glad to see these.
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MaybeThen in the 2010’s, our village started to change and it seemed very quickly.
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Back inThese rapid changes made me think back to the old days, whaten we lived in was just a thatched cottage, mud road, no electricity, wherever we went we just took a walk andwalked on mud roads as we didn’ not even have a bikes, and had no electricity.
Every time I think of those days when we didn’t even have enough food to eat, I often feelwould feel a great sense of sorrow.
However, all of those days have passed and now, my old neighbors all have better living conditions.
But if the plans for the countryside could be more reasonable, the public facilities are perfect.
I’m not sure what you’re trying to say.
It would be a smart choice to live in the countryside.
In a word, the countryside has developed really fast in recentconclusion, I’m very glad to see the rapid development in my village in the past 10 years.
I am very glad to see these.
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I’m glad your village has improved
Sept. 21, 2020
谢谢你的修改，谢谢你！
Sept. 21, 2020
You're welcome.
My village
In the early eighties, I studied in Fuyang city.
Every time I go back to my village during the summer vacation or winter break, I always feel sad because the village hasn’t even changed a little since I left it.
In the following decade when I got a job, it was still in its old shape that I remembered at my young age.
Maybe in the 2010’s, our village started to change and it seemed very quick.
Each family built a new house with three or four floors and the roads were all renewed to cement.
Not to mention tap water, telephones, networks and cars.
Back in the old days, what we lived in was just a thatched cottage, mud road, no electricity, wherever we went we just took a walk and we didn’t even have a bike.
Every time I think of those days when we didn’t even have enough food to eat, I often feel sorrow.
However, all of those days have passed and now, my old neighbors all have better living conditions.
But if the plans for the countryside could be more reasonable, the public facilities are perfect.
It would be a smart choice to live in the countryside.
In aother words, the countryside has developed really fast in recent years.
I am very glad to see theseis.
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Great job writing this. I am glad the standard of living in your home village has improved.
Sept. 19, 2020
Thank you for your help!
My village
In the early eighties, I studied in Fuyang city.
Every time I’d go back to my village during the summer vacation or winter break, I always feelt sad because the village hasdn’t even changed a little since I left it.
Use past tense.
In the following decade, when I got a job, it was still in its old shapecondition that I remembered atfrom my young age.th.
Back in the old days, what we lived in was just a thatched cottage, mud road, no electricity, w. Wherever we went we just took a walk and we didn’t even have a bike.
But if the plans for the countryside could be more reasonable, the public facilities are perfect.(Don’t understand what this means)
I am very glad to see theseis.
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Very nice! I’m sorry I couldn’t figure out what you were trying to convey in the one section but the rest was easily understood.
Sept. 19, 2020
Thank you for your help!
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