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Jack

May 15, 2025

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My View on Food

If I could run a small business, it would be a small restaurant.

As I aged, I gradually realized that the food offered by restaurants was not ideal.

Have you had these symptoms after eating at a restaurant? For example, you may feel bitter or sticky in your mouth, feel thirsty, get blisters on your lips and have eye discharge the next morning.

I guess it is because chefs add too many “seasonings” to their dishes, and some of the “seasonings” are even harmful.

When I cook at home, I just use oil, salt, green onions, garlic and ginger, with no other ingredients.

In my opinion, over - processed foods are even more harmful since they contain lots of additives and preservatives, so I never buy packaged foods in stores.

The logic behind cooking is very simple: the simpler the cooking is, the healthier the food is.

To eat healthy foods, try to cook at home as much as possible and keep the food low in oil, salt and seasonings.

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My View on Food

If I could run a small business, it would be a small restaurant.

As I aged, I gradually realized that the food offered by restaurants was not ideal.

Have you had these symptoms after eating at a restaurant?

For example, you may feelhave a bitter or sticky feeling in your mouth, feel thirsty, get blisters on your lips andor have eye discharge the next morning.

I guess ithis is because chefs add too many “seasonings” to their dishes, and some of the “seasonings” are even harmful.

When I cook at home, I just use oil, salt, green onions, garlic and ginger, with no other ingredients.

In my opinion, over - -processed foods are even more harmful since they contain lots of additives and preservatives, so I never buy packaged foods in stores.

The logic behind cooking is very simple: the simpler the cooking is, the healthier the food is.

To eat healthy foods, try to cook at home as much as possible and keep the food low in oil, salt and seasonings.

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Well done!

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Jack

May 17, 2025

5

Thank you very much.

If I could run a small business, it would be a small restaurant.

Unless you really mean you want the size of the restaurant to be small, this is not needed information.

As I aged, I've grown older, I've gradually realized that the food being offered by restaurants wais not ideal.

I -> I've (look up perfect tense)
As I aged --> As I've grown older (sounds more native)

was -> is (corrected the tense)

Have you had these symptomsever felt sick after eating at a restaurant?

had symptoms -> felt sick (sounds more native)

For example, your mouth may feel bitter or sticky in your mouth, feel thirsty, get blisters on your lips, and have eye discharge the next morning.

(The added comma is a style choice. I like it, because it allows for clearer writing, which is why I added it.)

When I cook at home, I just use oil, salt, green onions, garlic, and ginger, with no other ingredients.

In my opinion, over - processed foods are even more harmful since they contain lots of additives and preservatives, so I never buy packaged foods in stores.

To eat healthy foods, try to cook at home as much as possible and keep the food low in oil, salt, and seasonings.

Feedback

Nicely done overall :)

Your narrative was well done too.

Jack's avatar
Jack

May 15, 2025

5

Thank you very much.

My Views on Food

As I've aged, I've gradually realized that the food offered by restaurants was not ideal.

Have you had these symptoms after eating at a restaurant?

I guess it is because chefs add too many “seasonings” to their dishes, and some of the “seasonings” are even harmful.

In my opinion, over - processed foods are even more harmful since they contain lots of additives and preservatives, so I never buy packaged foods inat stores.

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Well done! I agree with you, home- cooked food is always better than eating out.

Jack's avatar
Jack

May 15, 2025

5

Thank you very much.

My View on Food


My Views on Food

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If I could run a small business, it would be a small restaurant.


If I could run a small business, it would be a small restaurant.

Unless you really mean you want the size of the restaurant to be small, this is not needed information.

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As I aged, I gradually realized that the food offered by restaurants was not ideal.


As I've aged, I've gradually realized that the food offered by restaurants was not ideal.

As I aged, I've grown older, I've gradually realized that the food being offered by restaurants wais not ideal.

I -> I've (look up perfect tense) As I aged --> As I've grown older (sounds more native) was -> is (corrected the tense)

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Have you had these symptoms after eating at a restaurant?


Have you had these symptoms after eating at a restaurant?

Have you had these symptomsever felt sick after eating at a restaurant?

had symptoms -> felt sick (sounds more native)

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For example, you may feel bitter or sticky in your mouth, feel thirsty, get blisters on your lips and have eye discharge the next morning.


For example, your mouth may feel bitter or sticky in your mouth, feel thirsty, get blisters on your lips, and have eye discharge the next morning.

(The added comma is a style choice. I like it, because it allows for clearer writing, which is why I added it.)

For example, you may feelhave a bitter or sticky feeling in your mouth, feel thirsty, get blisters on your lips andor have eye discharge the next morning.

I guess it is because chefs add too many “seasonings” to their dishes, and some of the “seasonings” are even harmful.


I guess it is because chefs add too many “seasonings” to their dishes, and some of the “seasonings” are even harmful.

I guess ithis is because chefs add too many “seasonings” to their dishes, and some of the “seasonings” are even harmful.

When I cook at home, I just use oil, salt, green onions, garlic and ginger, with no other ingredients.


When I cook at home, I just use oil, salt, green onions, garlic, and ginger, with no other ingredients.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In my opinion, over - processed foods are even more harmful since they contain lots of additives and preservatives, so I never buy packaged foods in stores.


In my opinion, over - processed foods are even more harmful since they contain lots of additives and preservatives, so I never buy packaged foods inat stores.

In my opinion, over - processed foods are even more harmful since they contain lots of additives and preservatives, so I never buy packaged foods in stores.

In my opinion, over - -processed foods are even more harmful since they contain lots of additives and preservatives, so I never buy packaged foods in stores.

The logic behind cooking is very simple: the simpler the cooking is, the healthier the food is.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

To eat healthy foods, try to cook at home as much as possible and keep the food low in oil, salt and seasonings.


To eat healthy foods, try to cook at home as much as possible and keep the food low in oil, salt, and seasonings.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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