June 29, 2025
Today I would like to talk about the movie - Troy. I was watching it yesterday by myself for the first time! I know, it's an old movie but when I saw Brad Pitt I didn't have doubt, I love Brad Pitt, especially when he was younger 😍
So the movie basically talk about Troy and Greek. At the begging, They are "friends" but my other crush - Paris (Orlando Bloom) falls in love with a woman but she is from Troy and he is Greek. She doesn't like her husband so she run away with Paris, starting a big war between Greek and Troy. Aquiles (Brad Pitt) is a big soldier, nobody wants to fight with him because he is an astonishing fighter and he accepted fight against Greek because he wants to be more famous!
Anyway, the movie is long and a lot of things happened until the Troy soldiers conquer Greek with an amazing and surprising way!!!
I really recommend this movie!! 🤌
My view about the movie -, Troy
Today I would like to talk about the movie -, Troy.
I know, it's an old movie but when I saw Brad Pitt I didn't have doubt, I love Brad Pitt, especially when he was younger 😍
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So the movie basically talks about Troy and the Greek.s
I would say, “ …but when I saw Brad Pitt was starring in it (the movie), I knew I wanted to watch it…
At the begging, They are "friends" but my other crush -, Paris (Orlando Bloom), falls in love with a woman but she is from Troy and he is Greek.
She doesn't like her husband so she run away with Paris, starting a big war between the Greeks and Troy.
Aquiles (Brad Pitt) is a big soldier, nobody wants to fight with him because he is an astonishing fighter and he accepted fight against Greek because he wants to be more famous!
I would say, “…he agreed to fight against the Greeks …he wanted to be …”
Anyways, the movie is long and a lot of things happened until the Troyjan soldiers conquer the Greek withs in an amazing and surprising way!!!
My view aboutthoughts on the movie - “Troy”
“My view about the movie” sounds odd, you normally should only use articles like “the” once the object that you’re already referring to has been mentioned before. But if you phrase it as “The movie ‘Troy’”, then it works. Movie titles should also be captioned if you write it like this.
Today I would like to talk about the movie - Troy.
The dash is not need
I know, it's an old movie but when I saw Brad Pitt I didn't have doubt, that it would be good. I love Brad Pitt, especially when he was younger 😍
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So the movie is basically talk about the two city-states, Troy and Greek.
1. “I didn’t have a doubt” sounds weird on its own, you need to mention what you didn’t have a doubt about. I’m assuming that you didn’t have a doubt that the movie would be good
2. You should end the sentence after the “I didn’t have a doubt” bit because there are no prepositions or connecting words, and without them the sentence can be run-on-y
3. “The movie talks about” sounds a bit weird. You would only use this phrase when referring to things like articles or things characters in that movie are talking about. Instead, you should replace the word “talks” with “is”
4. You should mention who Troy and Greek are. Since they’re ancient city-states in the movie, you should mention that, it can be confusing if you don’t
At the begginning, They are "friends" but my other celebrity crush -, Paris (Orlando Bloom), falls in love with a woman, but she is from Troy and he is from Greek.
1. Small spelling error
2. I’ve noticed that you’re using dashes a lot as commas. These have an entirely different function. Dashes in English are used to indicate a break in a sentence, interruption, or emphasis. They can’t also be used for compound words which require a dash like “mother-in-law”, “two-dimensional “, and “well-being” Commas are used indicate a pause in a sentence.
Example:
“The library, a place of quiet contemplation—or at least it should be—was filled with boisterous students”
3. I’m assuming by “crush” you mean an actor that you’re attracted to. We actually have a term for this in English: “Celebrity crush”
She doesn't like her husband so she runs away with Paris, starting a big war between Greek and Troy.
When using verbs for the he/she/it pronoun and in the present tense, an “s” needs to be added
Aquiles (Brad Pitt) is a big soldier, nobody wants to fight with him because he is an astonishing fighter and he accepted a fight against Greek because he wants to be more famous!
Missing an article before “fight”
Anyway, the movie is long and a lot of things happened untilbefore the Troy soldiers conquer Greek within an amazing and surprising way!!!
The words here that you used, while comprehensible, are a bit confusing, so I changed them to words that I think sound more natural
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Your English is really good! Just some small errors. Keep it up!
My viewthoughts about the movie - Troy
Today I would like to talk about the movie - Troy.
I was watching it yesterday by myself for the first timetched it for the first time yesterday by myself!
I know, it's an old movie but when I saw Brad Pitt, I didn't havhad no doubt the movie dwoubt,ld be good. I love Brad Pitt, especially when he was younger 😍
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So the movie basically talks about Troy and Greekce.
At the begginning, Tthey are "friends" but my other crush - Paris (Orlando Bloom) falls in love with a woman but s. She is from Troy and he is from Greekce.
She doesn't like her husband so she runs away with Paris, starting a big war between Greekce and Troy.
Aquiles (Brad Pitt) is a big soldier, n. Nobody wants to fight with him because he is an astonishing fighter and h. He accepted to fight against the Greeks because he wants to be more famous!
Anyway, the movie is long and a lot of things happened until the Troy soldiers conquer Greekce with an amazing and surprising way!!!
I really recommend this movie!!
🤌
My view about the movie - Troy My My “My view about the movie” sounds odd, you normally should only use articles like “the” once the object that you’re already referring to has been mentioned before. But if you phrase it as “The movie ‘Troy’”, then it works. Movie titles should also be captioned if you write it like this. My view about the movie |
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I know, it's an old movie but when I saw Brad Pitt I didn't have doubt, I love Brad Pitt, especially when he was younger 😍 So the movie basically talk about Troy and Greek. I know I know, it's an old movie but when I saw Brad Pitt I didn't have doubt 1. “I didn’t have a doubt” sounds weird on its own, you need to mention what you didn’t have a doubt about. I’m assuming that you didn’t have a doubt that the movie would be good 2. You should end the sentence after the “I didn’t have a doubt” bit because there are no prepositions or connecting words, and without them the sentence can be run-on-y 3. “The movie talks about” sounds a bit weird. You would only use this phrase when referring to things like articles or things characters in that movie are talking about. Instead, you should replace the word “talks” with “is” 4. You should mention who Troy and Greek are. Since they’re ancient city-states in the movie, you should mention that, it can be confusing if you don’t I know, it's an old movie but when I saw Brad Pitt I didn't have doubt, I love Brad Pitt, especially when he was younger 😍 I would say, “ …but when I saw Brad Pitt was starring in it (the movie), I knew I wanted to watch it… |
At the begging, They are "friends" but my other crush - Paris (Orlando Bloom) falls in love with a woman but she is from Troy and he is Greek. At the beg At the beg 1. Small spelling error 2. I’ve noticed that you’re using dashes a lot as commas. These have an entirely different function. Dashes in English are used to indicate a break in a sentence, interruption, or emphasis. They can’t also be used for compound words which require a dash like “mother-in-law”, “two-dimensional “, and “well-being” Commas are used indicate a pause in a sentence. Example: “The library, a place of quiet contemplation—or at least it should be—was filled with boisterous students” 3. I’m assuming by “crush” you mean an actor that you’re attracted to. We actually have a term for this in English: “Celebrity crush” At the begging, They are "friends" but my other crush |
She doesn't like her husband so she run away with Paris, starting a big war between Greek and Troy. She doesn't like her husband so she runs away with Paris, starting a big war between Gree She doesn't like her husband so she runs away with Paris, starting a big war between Greek and Troy. When using verbs for the he/she/it pronoun and in the present tense, an “s” needs to be added She doesn't like her husband so she run away with Paris, starting a big war between the Greeks and Troy. |
Aquiles (Brad Pitt) is a big soldier, nobody wants to fight with him because he is an astonishing fighter and he accepted fight against Greek because he wants to be more famous! Aquiles (Brad Pitt) is a big soldier Aquiles (Brad Pitt) is a big soldier, nobody wants to fight with him because he is an astonishing fighter and he accepted a fight against Greek because he wants to be more famous! Missing an article before “fight” Aquiles (Brad Pitt) is a big soldier, nobody wants to fight with him because he is an astonishing fighter and he accepted fight against Greek because he wants to be more famous! I would say, “…he agreed to fight against the Greeks …he wanted to be …” |
Anyway, the movie is long and a lot of things happened until the Troy soldiers conquer Greek with an amazing and surprising way!!! Anyway, the movie is long and a lot of things happen Anyway, the movie is long and a lot of things happened The words here that you used, while comprehensible, are a bit confusing, so I changed them to words that I think sound more natural Anyways, the movie is long and a lot of things happened until the Tro |
I really recommend this movie!! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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