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plum_mei

Aug. 13, 2025

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My vague feelings 私のあいまいな心

I typed a small worry into ChatGPT almost without thinking. To my surprise, my fingers put my thoughts into words much faster and more clearly than I had expected. It made me wonder if I really felt that way. I am still half in doubt.

I have never been very good at knowing what I truly feel. Anger especially is hard to grasp. In me, it quickly dissolves into sadness and questions like why can’t they understand me and why won’t they accept me.

Even when my feelings remain hazy and unsettled, the words that appear on the screen look far too clear, clearer than my emotions. I still don’t know what I should do.


ちょっとした悩みをchatGPTに打ち込んでみた。
自分が思っているよりもはっきりと早く、自分の指が自分の思いを打ち出すので、ちょっとびっくりする。私は本当にそう思っていたのかな、とまだ半信半疑だ。
昔から、自分の感じていることがよくわからない。特に、怒るという感情はよくわからない。怒るという感情は私の中ですぐに、悲しみと疑問に分解されてしまう。なぜわかってもらえないんだろう、どうして受け入れてもらえないんだろう。私の気持ちはずっともやもやしたままなのに、スクリーンに打ち出された言葉は私の感情よりもはっきりしすぎている。私はまだ、どうしたらいいかわからない。

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My vVague fFeelings 私のあいまいな心

Just a minor issue of title capitalisation.

I typed a small worry into ChatGPT almost without thinking.

To my surprise, my fingers put my thoughts into words much faster and more clearly than I had expected.

It made me wonder if I really felt that way.

I am still half in doubt.

I have never been very good at knowing what I truly feel.

Anger especially is hard to grasp.

InFor me, it quickly dissolves into sadness and questions like w"Why can't they understand me?" and w"Why won't they accept me.?"

Putting the questions in quotation marks makes the sentence easier to read. It helps pace the sentence: punctuation like quotation marks and question marks make the reader pause for a moment, thus breaking up the sentence.

Even when my feelings remain hazy and unsettled, the words that appear on the screen look far too clear, clearer than my emotions.

I still don’t know what I should do.

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plum_mei

Aug. 13, 2025

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Thank you!

My vague fNuanced Feelings 私のあいまいな心

From my understanding of あいまい I think nuanced might be a closer match...?

I typed a small worry into ChatGPT almost without thinking.

To my surprise, my fingers put my thoughts into words much faster and more clearly than I had expected.

It made me wonder if I really felt that way.

I am still half in doubt.

I have never been very good at knowing what I truly feel.

Anger especially is hard to grasp.

InFor me, it quickly dissolves into sadness and questions like why can’t they understand me and why won’t they accept me.

Or you could say "inside me" to sound a bit more poetic.

Even when my feelings remain hazy and unsettled, the words that appear on the screen look far too clear, clearer than my emotions.

I still don’t know what I should do.

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plum_mei

Aug. 13, 2025

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Thank you! "Inside me" sounds perfect!

My vague feelings 私のあいまいな心

I typed a small worry into ChatGPT almost without thinking.

To my surprise, my fingers put my thoughts into words much faster and more clearly than I had expected.

It made me wonder if I really felt that way.

I am still half in doubt.

I have never been very good at knowing what I truly feel.

Anger especially is hard to grasp.

In me, itanger quickly dissolves into sadness and questions like why can’t they understand me and why won’t they accept me.

Even when my feelings remain hazy and unsettled, the words that appear on the screen look far too clear, clearer than my emotions.

I still don’t know what I should do.

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怒りの時、チョコアイスを食べた方がいいです。(笑) 
ʕ•ᴥ•ʔノ♡

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plum_mei

Aug. 13, 2025

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Thank you! チョコアイス! I've never thought about it, but I bet it works. ミントチョコもすっきりしていいかも??笑

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From my understanding of あいまい I think nuanced might be a closer match...?

My vVague fFeelings 私のあいまいな心

Just a minor issue of title capitalisation.

I typed a small worry into ChatGPT almost without thinking.


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To my surprise, my fingers put my thoughts into words much faster and more clearly than I had expected.


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It made me wonder if I really felt that way.


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I am still half in doubt.


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I have never been very good at knowing what I truly feel.


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Anger especially is hard to grasp.


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In me, it quickly dissolves into sadness and questions like why can’t they understand me and why won’t they accept me.


In me, itanger quickly dissolves into sadness and questions like why can’t they understand me and why won’t they accept me.

InFor me, it quickly dissolves into sadness and questions like why can’t they understand me and why won’t they accept me.

Or you could say "inside me" to sound a bit more poetic.

InFor me, it quickly dissolves into sadness and questions like w"Why can't they understand me?" and w"Why won't they accept me.?"

Putting the questions in quotation marks makes the sentence easier to read. It helps pace the sentence: punctuation like quotation marks and question marks make the reader pause for a moment, thus breaking up the sentence.

Even when my feelings remain hazy and unsettled, the words that appear on the screen look far too clear, clearer than my emotions.


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I still don’t know what I should do.


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