My universıity period

I began to universıity at in 2023 year.

"In [year]"
No need to put the word "year" after the number

2023 iswas a difficult years for me because lI have Ad an exam.

I havegenerally/normally/usually worked 10 hours a days generally.

İIt iwas very hard.

But l loved it.

I amMy dream is livingto live in İIstanbul, so veryI studied very much.

I won to Fakgot accepted to the faculty of medicine.

I like a my school but.

İBut it is a small school.

Very small.

But İIstanbul is very beautiful ı, I like it.

There are have Aa lot of places to visit, for example Ayasofya mosque , Süleymaniye mosque, Üsküdar …, etc.

İI have a few friends.

Some of them are Hatice, Aysu, Hüdanur, and Hümeyra ….

We areOur dream is to travel abroad, for example ito Italy, France, or Mekke ….

I meet someone there.

He is awas very nice and handsome.

I guess I like to hehim.

"He" is the subject, "him" is object

I have d a dream about heim.

I guess takas places.

Not sure what this means so I can't correct it properly, sorry

My parsubject is very hard, so l don’t like it.

I assume you're talking about what you're studying

There is a lot of memorazization.

İI don't like a memorazization.

My universıity period

I began tostarted universıty at in 2023 year.

Using “started” is a bit more natural

2023 iswas a difficult years for me because l have Ad an exam.

I have worked 10 hours a days generally.

I’m not sure if you’re talking about what you did in 2023. If you are, it’d be “I worked 10 hours a day”

İIt is very hard.,

Bbut l love it.

I amMy dream is livingto live in İIstanbul sto very studied.study

I’m also not clear on what you were trying to say which is why I assumed you want to live in Istanbul to further your studies. If not, it’d be “My dream is to live in Istanbul, so I’m studying very hard.”

I wongo to Fakculty of mMedicine.

I don’t know if you mean you got into faculty of medicine? If so, you should say “I got into the Faculty of Medicine” but I’m gonna assume you already go there bcos of ur next sentence

I like a my school, but.

İit is a small school.

VIt’s very smal.l.

But İIstanbul is very beautiful ı. I like it.

There are have Aa lot of places to visit, for example Ayasofya mosque , Süleymaniye mosque, and Üsküdar ….

İI have a few friends.

Hatice, Aysu, Hüdanur, and Hümeyra ….

We areOur dream is to go abroad for example i, to Italy, France,Mekke … and Mecca.

I meet someone there.

He is a very nice and handsome.

I guess like to he.

I honestly don’t know what you’re trying to say here. You probably mean “I guess I like him”

I have s dream about heim.

I guess takas places.

Don’t understand what takas places is, sorry.

My part is very hard so l don’t like it.

There is a lot of memorazisation.

İI dont like a memorazisation.

My uUniversıity pPeriod

Title capitalization rules.
Alternative titles: My University Days, My College Days

I began to universıity at in 2023 year.

Use "in" before months or years

2023 iswas a difficult years for me because l haved an A exam.

I have workstudied 10 hours a days, generally.

If we are still speaking about university, use "studied" here. But if you are switching to talk about working a job, "worked" is correct

İIt iwas very hard.

We are talking about the past => past tense

But l loved it.

I amMy dream is living in İIstanbul so very studied.

The original sentence needs some work to be understood. At the end, if you mean that you need to have a good education in order to live in Istanbul, you can add at the end, ", so I need a good education."

I won to Fakgot into the faculty of medicine.

I like a my school but.

İit is a small school.

Combine this line with the previous sentence

Very small.

But İHowever, Istanbul is very beautiful ı, I like it.

To avoid repeating "but" too many times, we can say "however" here

There are have Aa lot of places to visit f. For example, Ayasofya mosque , Süleymaniye mosque, and Üsküdar ….

İI have a few friends.

Hatice, Aysu, Hüdanur, and Hümeyra ….

We areOur dream is to travel abroad, for example i, to Italy, France,Mekke … and Mecca.

I meet someone there.

As a reader, I don't know where you mean by "there." Do you mean from university? If so, change to "I met someone at my university"

He is a very nice and handsome.

I guessthink I like to hehim.

I don't understand your original sentence, but if you mean that you might be realizing you like this man romantically, this edit works well.

I have dreams about heim.

Here, "dreams" would signify having dreams while you are asleep, dreaming about him. But if you mean you have desires/wishes involving him, I would change this to, "I think about spending time with him."

I guess takas placesgoing out / traveling together.

"Going out" would mean going to local places with him, where "traveling" would mean visiting far away places together.

My partwork is very hard so l don’t like it.

I don't know what you mean by "part." Are you speaking about your job? If so, we can say "work." If you are speaking about school, you could say "My classes are very hard, so I don't like them."

There is a lot of memorazization.

İI don't like a memorazization.