Sept. 1, 2020
My uncle
I can't describe my uncle in a word.
My uncle is little annoying to me.
He have never had a partner so that he can afford to buy everything I want from my childhood.
I've often felt upset that he still treat me as if I'm his little son or a friend.
He often sent me meaningless messages with a lot of emoji, and called for a drinking party with his friends on me.
The most unbelievable behavior is that he waste his money on gambling, alcohol and useless gifts though he is far cleverer than me and very competent as a mechanical engineer.
私の叔父は1言で表すのが難しく、ややめんどくさい。
彼はずっと未婚だったため、私が小さい頃から欲しがるものは何でも買ってやる余裕があった。
叔父がいまだに私を自らの息子か友達のように接することに度々うんざりさせられる。
毎日のように用もないのに絵文字付きのメッセージを送ってくるし、叔父の飲み会の席に呼び出されることがある。
最も理解できないのは、彼は私より遥かに賢くエンジニアとして優秀であるにも関わらずギャンブルやお酒に浪費する癖があることだ。
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The original way you wrote the sentence could be read in potentially two different ways: 1) that he bought and gave to you anything you wanted or 2) he bought for himself things that you wanted and caused jealousy. I think most of the time people would think #1, but the way I corrected it makes it unambiguous, and I think it is also closer to what you wrote in Japanese.
He often sentds me meaningless messages with a lot offilled with emojis, and called for asometimes calls me out to drinking partyies with his friends on me.
The way I corrected it makes it clear that he has called you out to drinking parties multiple times. If it has only happened one time then I would go with Seiga's correction.
TheHis most unbelievable behavior is that he waste his moneyhis wasteful spending on gambling, alcohol, and useless gifts, even though he is far cleverer than me and verya competent as a mechanical engineer and far more clever than I am.
I think this is a more polished version of your sentence that gets the same meaning across concisely.
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Great job! I think Seiga's corrections caught the other things I saw. Let me know if you have any questions.
Sept. 2, 2020
I appreciate that you always correct my sentences carefully! I'm glad to know who to describe his behaviors.
My uncle
I can't describe my uncle in aone word.
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My uncle is little annoying to meannoys me a bit.
This sounds more natural.
He haves never had a partner so that he can afford to buy everything I want from mysince childhood.
I've often felt upset that he still treats me as if I'm his little son or ahis friend.
He often sentds me meaningless messages with a lot of emoji,s and called forinvited me to a drinking party with his friends on me.
The most unbelievable behavior is that he wastes his money on gambling, alcohol and useless gifts; even though he is far more cleverer than me and he is very competent as he is a mechanical engineer.
Cleverer sounds a bit weird, I would personally use 'more clever'.
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Very well written, just a few grammatical errors. Well done!
Sept. 2, 2020
Thanks a lot!
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I've often felt upset that he still treat me as if I'm his little son or a friend. I've often felt upset that he still treats me as if I'm his little son or |
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He often sent me meaningless messages with a lot of emoji, and called for a drinking party with his friends on me. He often sen He often sen The way I corrected it makes it clear that he has called you out to drinking parties multiple times. If it has only happened one time then I would go with Seiga's correction. |
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I think this is a more polished version of your sentence that gets the same meaning across concisely. |
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