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sachisachi

March 21, 2024

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My Trip to Osaka (63)

I went to Osaka with my family and we had a lot of fun for three days.

On the first day, we strolled a long shopping street called "Tenjinbashi street"

It wasn't a sophisticated and trendy street, yet more like a street for local people.

We had deep fried skewers called "Kushikatsu" which is a specialty in Osaka.

I was looking forward to hearing Osaka dialect, but for some reason I didn't.

When I talked with waitresses or shop assistants, they all spoke standard Japanese.

That was a shame.


家族と大阪に行って、三日間、楽しく過ごしました。

最初の日、私達は「天神橋商店街」というストリートを散策しました。

その商店街は、洗練された都会っぽいものではなくて、もっと地元の人の商店街という感じでした。

私達は串カツという大阪の名物を食べました。

私は、大阪弁を聞くのを楽しみにしていましたが、なぜか聞くことができませんでした。

私がウェイトレスや店員さんと話したとき、彼らはみんな標準語を話しました。

残念。

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My Trip to Osaka

I went to Osaka for three days with my family and we had a lot of fun for three days.

Saying "we had a lot of fun for three days" makes it seem like your trip was longer than 3 days, and only 3 days of the trip were fun.

On the first day, we strolled a long a shopping street called "Tenjinbashi street"


It wasn't a sophisticated
andor trendy street, yebut more like a street for local people.

We had deep fried skewers called "Kushikatsu" which is a specialty in Osaka.

I was looking forward to hearing the Osaka dialect, but for some reason I didn't.

When I talked with waitresses or shop assistants, they all spoke standard Japanese.

That was a shame.

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Sounds like you had a nice trip overall!

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sachisachi

March 21, 2024

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Yes, it was a nice trip, but three days were too short. Thank you so much for your correction!

My Trip to Osaka

I went to Osaka with my family and we had a lot of fun for three days.

On the first day, we strolled down a long shopping street called "Tenjinbashi sStreet" ¶
."¶

It wasn't a sophisticated and trendy street,
yebut more like a street for local people.

We had "kushikatsu," deep fried skewers called "Kushikatsu" which is which are an Osaka specialty in Osaka.

I was looking forward to hearing the Osaka dialect, but for some reason I didn't.

When I talked with waitresses or shop assistants, they all spoke standard Japanese.

That was a shame.

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I love kushikatsu! It's really good.

I'm glad you and your family had fun in Osaka! I'm going to Osaka next month, and I'm excited. 😁

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sachisachi

March 21, 2024

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Wow, you are going to Osaka next month! You will definitely have fun! I'd like to visit Osaka again!

sachisachi's avatar
sachisachi

March 21, 2024

1

Thank you so much for your correction!

My Trip to Osaka

I went to Osaka with my family and we had a lot of fun for three days.

On the first day, we strolled a long shopping street called "Tenjinbashi street"


It wasn't a sophisticated and trendy street,
yet more like a street for local people.

We had deep fried skewers called "Kushikatsu" which is a specialty in Osaka.

I was looking forward to hearing the Osaka dialect, but for some reason I didn't.

When I talked with waitresses or shop assistants, they all spoke standard Japanese.

That was a shame.

sachisachi's avatar
sachisachi

March 21, 2024

1

Thank you so much for your correction!

My Trip to Osaka

I went to Osaka with my family and we had a lot of fun for three days.

On the first day, we strolled a long shopping street called "Tenjinbashidown "Tenjinbashi street," a long shopping street" ¶


It wasn't a sophisticated and trendy street,
yebut more like a street for local peoplelocal shopping street.

We had deep fried skewers called "Kushikatsu" which is a specialty in Osaka/ate an Osaka specialty called "Kushikatsu" (deep fried skewers).

I was looking forward to hearing the Osaka dialect, but for some reason I didn't.

When I talked with waitresses or shop assistants, they all spoke standard Japanese.

That was a shame.

Feedback

I hope you enjoyed your visit to Osaka.

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sachisachi

March 21, 2024

1

Thank you so much for your correction!

My Trip to Osaka


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I went to Osaka with my family and we had a lot of fun for three days.


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I went to Osaka for three days with my family and we had a lot of fun for three days.

Saying "we had a lot of fun for three days" makes it seem like your trip was longer than 3 days, and only 3 days of the trip were fun.

We had deep fried skewers called "Kushikatsu" which is a specialty in Osaka.


We had deep fried skewers called "Kushikatsu" which is a specialty in Osaka/ate an Osaka specialty called "Kushikatsu" (deep fried skewers).

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We had "kushikatsu," deep fried skewers called "Kushikatsu" which is which are an Osaka specialty in Osaka.

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When I talked with waitresses or shop assistants, they all spoke standard Japanese.


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On the first day, we strolled a long shopping street called "Tenjinbashi street" It wasn't a sophisticated and trendy street, yet more like a street for local people.


On the first day, we strolled a long shopping street called "Tenjinbashidown "Tenjinbashi street," a long shopping street" ¶


It wasn't a sophisticated and trendy street,
yebut more like a street for local peoplelocal shopping street.

On the first day, we strolled a long shopping street called "Tenjinbashi street"


It wasn't a sophisticated and trendy street,
yet more like a street for local people.

On the first day, we strolled down a long shopping street called "Tenjinbashi sStreet" ¶
."¶

It wasn't a sophisticated and trendy street,
yebut more like a street for local people.

On the first day, we strolled a long a shopping street called "Tenjinbashi street"


It wasn't a sophisticated
andor trendy street, yebut more like a street for local people.

I was looking forward to hearing Osaka dialect, but for some reason I didn't.


I was looking forward to hearing the Osaka dialect, but for some reason I didn't.

I was looking forward to hearing the Osaka dialect, but for some reason I didn't.

I was looking forward to hearing the Osaka dialect, but for some reason I didn't.

I was looking forward to hearing the Osaka dialect, but for some reason I didn't.

My Trip to Osaka (63)


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