April 16, 2021
My Trip to Italy and My Missing Toy!
Writing Challenge: Day 16
Friday, April 16th, 2021
I have two brothers and two sisters. When my parents used to travel, they used to choose one of us to take with them, and leave the rest at home. Once I was the chosen one and I got myself a trip to Italy : )
I felt lucky and it was my first time in a hotel room by myself. It was winter and weather was cold and snowy. All my photos with my father show us under a huge umbrella and a snowfall :D
I remember an incident where I thought a man was giving away chewing gums to everyone, so I took one and thanked him. When he started following me, I remember I ran towards my parents and that man started yelling and moving his hand angrly. Apparently he was selling the chewing gum and unknowingly I stole one :D
Luckily he left us alone when my father gave him money and apologised for what I did.
It's tough to be a six years old in a foreign country ;) hehe
I bought a leather bag from Rome that I still use sometimes as a wallet. It's extremely beautiful. My parents bought me a toy, a stuffed sheep that I used to love so much. One day I lost it and I think what happened was that we had some visitors at home and one of their boys took it home with him.
Whenever I see a stuffed animal that looks like my old stuffed sheep, I just feel like buying it!
My Trip to Italy and My Missing Toy!
Writing Challenge: Day 16
Friday, April 16th, 2021
I have two brothers and two sisters.
When my parents used to travel, they used to choose one of us to take with them, and leave the rest at home.
Once I was the chosen one and I got myself a trip to Italy : )
I felt lucky, and it was my first time in a hotel room by myself.
It was winter, and weather was cold and snowy.
All my photos with my father show us under a huge umbrella and awith snow falling :D
I remember an incident where I thought a man was giving away chewing gums to everyone, so I took one and thanked him.
When he started following me, I remember I ran towards my parents and that the man started yelling and moving his hand angrily.
Apparently he was selling the chewing gum, and I had unknowingly I stole one :D
Luckily, he left us alone when my father gave him money and apologiszed for what I didhad done.
It's tough to be a six years old in a foreign country ;) hehe
I bought a leather bag from Rome that I still use sometimes as a wallet.
It's extremely beautiful.
My parents bought me a toy, a stuffed sheep that I used to love so much.
One day, I lost it and I think what happened was that we had some visitors at homour house and one of their boys took it home with him.
Whenever I see a stuffed animal that looks like my old stuffed sheep, I just feel like buying it!
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Great Job! Just a few corrections!
April 16, 2021
Thank you very much, Oceandrive : )
I really appreciate your time and help.
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I have two brothers and two sisters. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When my parents used to travel, they used to choose one of us to take with them, and leave the rest at home. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Once I was the chosen one and I got myself a trip to Italy : ) This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I felt lucky and it was my first time in a hotel room by myself. I felt lucky, and it was my first time in a hotel room by myself. |
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It was winter and weather was cold and snowy. It was winter, and weather was cold and snowy. |
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All my photos with my father show us under a huge umbrella and a snowfall :D All my photos with my father show us under a huge umbrella |
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I remember an incident where I thought a man was giving away chewing gums to everyone, so I took one and thanked him. I remember an incident where I thought a man was giving away chewing gum |
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When he started following me, I remember I ran towards my parents and that man started yelling and moving his hand angrly. When he started following me, I remember I ran towards my parents and that the man started yelling and moving his hand angrily. |
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Apparently he was selling the chewing gum and unknowingly I stole one :D Apparently he was selling the chewing gum, and I had unknowingly |
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Luckily he left us alone when my father gave him money and apologised for what I did. Luckily, he left us alone when my father gave him money and apologi |
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It's tough to be a six years old in a foreign country ;) hehe This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I bought a leather bag from Rome that I still use sometimes as a wallet. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's extremely beautiful. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My parents bought me a toy, a stuffed sheep that I used to love so much. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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One day I lost it and I think what happened was that we had some visitors at home and one of their boys took it home with him. One day, I lost it and I think what happened was that we had some visitors at |
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Whenever I see a stuffed animal that looks like my old stuffed sheep, I just feel like buying it! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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