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Ducky

Sept. 9, 2022

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My Traveling Blood.

Some days ago, I went to give blood. Today, I have received a message from the "Banc de sang" where they tell me that my blood has being sent to "Vall d'Hebron Hospital", in Barcelona, where a patient is waiting to receive it. I'm happy to help another people.

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My Traveling Blood.

SomeA few days ago, I went to give blood.

Today, I have received a message from the "Banc de sang" where they tellold me that my blood hwas being sent to "Vall d'Hebron Hospital", in Barcelona, where a patient is waiting to receive it.

I'm happy to help another peoplerson.

or

I'm happy to help other people.

another → for one person
other → for more than one person

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Ducky

Sept. 12, 2022

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Thanks for your feedback.

My Traveling Blood.


My Traveling Blood.

Some days ago, I went to give blood.


SomeA few days ago, I went to give blood.

Today, I have received a message from the "Banc de sang" where they tell me that my blood has being sent to "Vall d'Hebron Hospital", in Barcelona, where a patient is waiting to receive it.


Today, I have received a message from the "Banc de sang" where they tellold me that my blood hwas being sent to "Vall d'Hebron Hospital", in Barcelona, where a patient is waiting to receive it.

I'm happy to help another people.


I'm happy to help another peoplerson.

or I'm happy to help other people. another → for one person other → for more than one person

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