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Alaxej21

Sept. 18, 2024

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My Today’s Day

Hi, everyone who is reeding this!
I’m always want to try write diary in English. So that is my chance. Let’s go.
My wake up was late. Because I go to bad late because of studying English. It was at 9.30 am. I got up, brushed my teeth, went to shower and started to got dress. After that i was train my speaking. I found good exercises that improve my skill to speak on any topic with anybody(hold the conversation) in my native language. After that i went to breakfast. I ate casserole with cauliflower and eggs, and tortilla with cottage cheese, tomatos, cheese and sausage. And for drink was backaged black tea with no sugar. I refuse of sugar many years ago. Thanks to my exgirlfriend.
After that i went to my job. I live in centre of city and it takes 20 minutes to get to my office by foot. I like when you live near your job and don’t need to take a bus or taxi. Also it keep you in form and allow to relax. I was at work at 12.00 am. I’m working as an architect. And my whole day is pass on computer. But recently i started to continuously use pomodoro’s practic. So i have 5 minutes breaks after 30 minutes of concentration work. It allows to relax and to walk to the window. Now i’m working on residential area and prepare picture renders. After that was lunch(or dinner?). I always take a lunch with me and ate on the work. It allows to eat in peace, because my bosses go to the canteen. After that i’m usually go for a walk. But today i was on meeting. Because the main topic of the conversation was about my current object. It was a facade of dendistry’s building. And yes, it is reconstruction. We don’t build a new building often. After the meeting i was continued my work on computer. In 20.00 pm i finished my work and talked with my boss about architecture competition, that i doing in my freetime.
In 20.40 pm I was home. In 21.00 pm I started my hometraning. I do calistetics. It is training body with your own weight. The training continued 1 hour. After I went to kitchen. I ate a little fried potatotes with chicken and watermelon. I really love watermelon. Now it is a season of this fruct (or vegetable, who what like more). After supper(or dinner? I’m always wonderful why dinner can be on the lunch and on the supper?) i went to practice English. And the circle is locked up)
Thank you for reading. Good buy and have a good (your time of day)!

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My Today’s Day

Hi, everyone who is reeading this!

I’m have always want to try to write a diary in English.

So that is my chance.

Let’s go.

MyI waoke up was late.

Because I go to baed late because of studying English.

It was at 9.30 am.

I got up, brushed my teeth, went to shower and started to got dress.

After that i wasI trained my speaking skills.

I found good exercises that improve my skill to speak on any topic with anybody(hold the conversation) in my native language.

After that iI went to have breakfast.

I ate casserole with cauliflower and eggs, and tortilla with cottage cheese, tomatos, cheese and sausage.

And for a drink wasI had a backaged black tea with no sugar.

I refuse ofstopped consuming sugar many years ago.

Thanks to my exgirlfriend.

After that iI went to my job.

I live in centrer of the city and it takes 20 minutes to get to my office by foot.

I like when you live near your job and don’t need to take a bus or taxi.

Also it keeps you in formshape and allows you to relax.

I wasarrived at work at 12.00 am.

I’m working as an architect.

And my whole day is passspent the on computer.

But recently iI started to continuously use pomodoro’s practic.

So iI have 5 minutes breaks after 30 minutes of concentration work.

It allows me to relax and to walk to the window.

Now iI’m working on residential area and have to prepare picture renders.

After that was lunch(or dinner?).

Lunch - usually around 11:00 am - 1:00 pm Dinner - usually around 5:00 pm - 7:00 pm

I always take a lunch with me and eate on the at work.

It allows me to eat in peace, because my bosses go to the canteen.

After that iI’m usually go for a walk.

But today iI was onin a meeting.

Because the main topic of the conversation was about my current object.

It was a facade of dendtistry’s building.

I am assuming this is the word you were looking for.

And yes, it is a reconstruction.

We don’t build a new buildings often.

After the meeting i wasI continued my work on the computer.

InAt 20.00 pm iI finished my work and talked with my boss about architecture competition, that iI doing in my freetime.

InAt 20.40 pm I was home.

InAt 21.00 pm I started my hometraning.

I do calistetics.

It is training body with your own weight.

The training continued 1 hour.

This is correct but you could also say: I trained for an hour.

After training I went to kitchen.

I ate a little fried potatotes with chicken and watermelon.

I really love watermelon.

Now it is a season of this frucit (or vegetable, who what like more).

After supper(or dinner?

Supper and dinner are interchangeable.

I’m always wonderful why dinner can be on the lunch and on the supper?)

iI went to practice English.

And the circle is locked up) Thank you for reading.

Good buye and have a good (your time of day)!

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Overall this is pretty good! Keep up the hard work.

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Alaxej21

Sept. 19, 2024

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Thank you very much!

My Today’s Day


My Today’s Day

It was a facade of dendistry’s building.


It was a facade of dendtistry’s building.

I am assuming this is the word you were looking for.

And yes, it is reconstruction.


And yes, it is a reconstruction.

We don’t build a new building often.


We don’t build a new buildings often.

After the meeting i was continued my work on computer.


After the meeting i wasI continued my work on the computer.

In 20.00 pm i finished my work and talked with my boss about architecture competition, that i doing in my freetime.


InAt 20.00 pm iI finished my work and talked with my boss about architecture competition, that iI doing in my freetime.

In 20.40 pm I was home.


InAt 20.40 pm I was home.

In 21.00 pm I started my hometraning.


InAt 21.00 pm I started my hometraning.

I do calistetics.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It is training body with your own weight.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The training continued 1 hour.


The training continued 1 hour.

This is correct but you could also say: I trained for an hour.

After I went to kitchen.


After training I went to kitchen.

I ate a little fried potatotes with chicken and watermelon.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I really love watermelon.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Now it is a season of this fruct (or vegetable, who what like more).


Now it is a season of this frucit (or vegetable, who what like more).

After supper(or dinner?


After supper(or dinner?

Supper and dinner are interchangeable.

Hi, everyone who is reeding this!


Hi, everyone who is reeading this!

I’m always want to try write diary in English.


I’m have always want to try to write a diary in English.

So that is my chance.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Let’s go.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My wake up was late.


MyI waoke up was late.

Because I go to bad late because of studying English.


Because I go to baed late because of studying English.

It was at 9.30 am.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I got up, brushed my teeth, went to shower and started to got dress.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

After that i was train my speaking.


After that i wasI trained my speaking skills.

I found good exercises that improve my skill to speak on any topic with anybody(hold the conversation) in my native language.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

After that i went to breakfast.


After that iI went to have breakfast.

I ate casserole with cauliflower and eggs, and tortilla with cottage cheese, tomatos, cheese and sausage.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

And for drink was backaged black tea with no sugar.


And for a drink wasI had a backaged black tea with no sugar.

I refuse of sugar many years ago.


I refuse ofstopped consuming sugar many years ago.

Thanks to my exgirlfriend.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

After that i went to my job.


After that iI went to my job.

I live in centre of city and it takes 20 minutes to get to my office by foot.


I live in centrer of the city and it takes 20 minutes to get to my office by foot.

I like when you live near your job and don’t need to take a bus or taxi.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Also it keep you in form and allow to relax.


Also it keeps you in formshape and allows you to relax.

I was at work at 12.00 am.


I wasarrived at work at 12.00 am.

I’m working as an architect.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

And my whole day is pass on computer.


And my whole day is passspent the on computer.

But recently i started to continuously use pomodoro’s practic.


But recently iI started to continuously use pomodoro’s practic.

So i have 5 minutes breaks after 30 minutes of concentration work.


So iI have 5 minutes breaks after 30 minutes of concentration work.

It allows to relax and to walk to the window.


It allows me to relax and to walk to the window.

Now i’m working on residential area and prepare picture renders.


Now iI’m working on residential area and have to prepare picture renders.

After that was lunch(or dinner?).


After that was lunch(or dinner?).

Lunch - usually around 11:00 am - 1:00 pm Dinner - usually around 5:00 pm - 7:00 pm

I always take a lunch with me and ate on the work.


I always take a lunch with me and eate on the at work.

It allows to eat in peace, because my bosses go to the canteen.


It allows me to eat in peace, because my bosses go to the canteen.

After that i’m usually go for a walk.


After that iI’m usually go for a walk.

But today i was on meeting.


But today iI was onin a meeting.

Because the main topic of the conversation was about my current object.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I’m always wonderful why dinner can be on the lunch and on the supper?)


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

i went to practice English.


iI went to practice English.

And the circle is locked up) Thank you for reading.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Good buy and have a good (your time of day)!


Good buye and have a good (your time of day)!

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