yesterday
My Tight Schedule
I won’t be able to take a day off until the end of the month. In fact, even on my supposed days off, I have ended up craming my schedule full. Realizing that made me feel overwhealmed this morning.
So I decided to shift my mindset and focus on making each day fulfilling instead of worrying too much about what’s ahead.
Of course, I’ll remind myself not to forget to take it easy once in a while.
月末まで休めない。というか休日でも予定をぎっしり詰め込んでしまっている。そう思うと急につらくなった。
先のことを考えるより、一日一日を充実していこうと心を切り替えることにした。もちろんどこかで手抜きをすることも忘れない。
My Tight Schedule
I won’t be able to take a day off until the end of the month.
In fact, even on my supposed days off, I have ended up cramming my schedule full.
This line sounds correct though a bit unnatural in the usage of the word "cramming" with "schedule" in this context. "Cramming" is used more often when it comes to studying, memorizing, information etc.
Here, I would feel it would be more natural to use "packing" or "filling".
Realizing that this morning made me feel overwhealmed this morning.
The grammar is correct but the natural spoken/written order felt a bit unnatural.
So I decided to shift my mindset and focus on making each day fulfilling instead of worrying too much about what’s ahead.
Of course, I’ll remind myself (optional: not to forget) to take it easy once in a while.
It's quite perfect and more of a suggestion towards natural speech more so than correction.
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Very good! In spoken English, these few things would not be noticed or corrected.
My Tight Schedule
I won’t be able to take a day off until the end of the month.
In fact, even on my supposed days off, I have ended up cramming my schedule full.
Verbs with a short vowel sound need a double consonant when made into the past and present tense!
For example: stopping/stopped, cupping/cupped
Realizing that made me feel overwhealmed this morning.
So I decided to shift my mindset and focus on making each day fulfilling instead of worrying too much about what’s ahead.
Of course, I’ll remind myself not to forget to take it easy once in a while.
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Really really well done! You did awesome, only one minor mistake. Keep it up! :)
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I won’t be able to take a day off until the end of the month. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In fact, even on my supposed days off, I have ended up craming my schedule full. In fact, even on my supposed days off, I have ended up cramming my schedule full. Verbs with a short vowel sound need a double consonant when made into the past and present tense! For example: stopping/stopped, cupping/cupped In fact, even on my supposed days off, I have ended up cramming my schedule full. This line sounds correct though a bit unnatural in the usage of the word "cramming" with "schedule" in this context. "Cramming" is used more often when it comes to studying, memorizing, information etc. Here, I would feel it would be more natural to use "packing" or "filling". |
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Realizing that made me feel overwhealmed this morning. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Realizing that this morning made me feel overwhe The grammar is correct but the natural spoken/written order felt a bit unnatural. |
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So I decided to shift my mindset and focus on making each day fulfilling instead of worrying too much about what’s ahead. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Of course, I’ll remind myself not to forget to take it easy once in a while. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Of course, I’ll remind myself (optional: not to forget) to take it easy once in a while. It's quite perfect and more of a suggestion towards natural speech more so than correction. |
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