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bb779

Jan. 24, 2020

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My thoughts and "Yesterday"

Today is a heavenly, calm, and pleasant day. Namely, it's Friday. Consequently, I can rest a lot. I couldn't settle on a reading a book, so I settled on writing this entry. My classmates left school just before me because I was changing I was out of my P.E. uniform to my normal one after P.E. class.
Frankly speaking, absolutely nobody ever brings their uniform for P.E. I have no idea why; maybe they have no interest in the subject ; who knows. I remember that blackout scarcely occurred at home when I was using the computer. Also, I must admit that the class across the hall from m in e is much more active. When I tried to turn my laptop on, it lagged so much that I couldn't even click the mouse. It drove me up the wall, so I turned it off and nearly hit the laptop.
I was hoping to post an entry, but I wasn't able to. Because of that, I meditated for ten minutes.
It helped me release the anger in my mind.
“Yesterday” one song in contemporary musical history that has a great back story.
I thought about how the Beatles' song “Yesterday” was made when I was listening to it.
Coincidentally, I was translating a text about this song from my native language to English.
I found out the song's fascinating backstory : According to McCartney, he wrote a song as he dreamed.
He wondered what it could be, so he played the tune on an upright piano that was nearby him.
He liked the song and could not believe that something so wonderful was totally his.
What's more, it was the first song that ha d been written without the help of other members. McCartney wrote it alone.
Keen to not forget the song, he jotted down some placeholder words for it.
If I remember correctly, they went: “Scrambled eggs, oh, my baby, how I love your legs”.
I also have to mention that “ scrambled eggs” was a joke in the band before the song was fully recorded.
Lennon said, “ The song was around for months and months before we finally completed it. Every time we got together to write songs for a recording session, this one would come up. We almost had it finished. Paul wrote nearly all of it, but we just couldn't find the right title. We called it 'Scrambled Eggs ' and it became a joke between us.”

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Today is a heavenly, calm, and pleasant day,n. Namely, it's fFriday, and consequently, I can rest a lot.

Make sure you pay attention to spacing after punctuation.

I couldn't settled o down to read thea book, yet I settled on writing this entry.

My classmates left the school just before me, due to the fact that, I was changing my uniform to classical one after having PE subject.

You don't need to write subject after a class name.

Frankly speaking, absolutely nobody ever brings uniform for PE subject, by the way,. I have no idea what the reason for it, p is. Perhaps they have no interest in the subject, who knows.

I remember, sScarcely hads a blackout occurred at home when I used the computer.

Also, I gotta admit the class across the class I study in, is much more active compared with ours.

When I tried to turn my laptop on, it started to lag so much that I couldn't even just press the left button of the mouse, so i. It drove me up the wall so much that I turned it off and nearly hit the laptop.

I was just hoping to post an entry,; however, it did not enable me to do it, b. Because of that, I meditated for 10 minutes.

I thought about how the Beatles' song "Yesterday" was made when I was listening to it.

I found out a fascinating backstory, a. According to McCartney's words, he made a song as he dreamt.

He wondered what it could be, so t. There was an upright piano beside him, thenand he played the tune.

What's more, it's the first song that hasd been written without the help of other members,; namely McCartney wrote it alone.

You could choose to split this into two separate sentences or use a semi-colon.

Keen to not forget the song, he wrote temporary words for it.

If I'm not wrong, they went: "Scrambled eggs, oh, my baby, how I love your legs"."

Periods go inside quotation marks.

I also have to mention that " scrambled eggs" was a joke in the band before it' was fully recorded.

You have been using past tense, so you need to continue using the same tense.

Lennon said: "Every time when we got together to write some songs for the session, this would come up, but we couldn't think of the right title so we called it "'scrambled eggs",' then it became a joke between us."

When you need to quote something that is already inside quotation marks, you use apostrophes instead.

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Happy Friday! I also love the Beatles, so it was fun to read about the history of such a famous song.

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felixir

Jan. 24, 2020

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Also, I wanted to add several main points of focus for you. One thing would be figuring out when sentences should be split up because some of your sentences tend to run-on for a bit. Another thing would be working with punctuation and figuring out where commas are needed in a sentence.

Other than that, good job and keep on going! :)

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bb779

Jan. 25, 2020

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Well,my punctuation isn't that good either in English or in my native language.But I'll probably learn the usage in the internet and try to split up sentences.
I have to thank you all for pointing out my mistakes.

My thoughts and "Yesterday"

Today is a heavenly, calm, and pleasant day,n. Namely, it's fFriday,c. Consequently, I can rest a lot.

I couldn't settled on toa read theing a book,yet so I settled on writing this entry.

My classmates left the school just before me,due to the fact that,I was changing my because I was changing I was out of my P.E. uniform to classicmy normal one after having PE subjectP.E. class.

Frankly speaking, absolutely nobody ever brings their uniform for PE subject, by the way, I have no idea what the reason for it, perhaps.E. I have no idea why; maybe they have no interest in the subject,; who knows.

I remember, scarcely had a blackout that blackouts scarcely occurred at home when I usedwas using the computer.

Also, I gotta admimust admit that the class across the class I study hall from min,e is much more active compared with ours.

When I tried to turn my laptop on, it started to lagged so much that I couldn't even just press the left button ofclick the mouse, so i. It drove me up the wall, so much that I turned it off and nearly hit the laptop.

I was just hoping to post an entry, however, it did not enable me to do it, bbut I wasn't able to. Because of that, I meditated for 10ten minutes.

Well, iIt helped me unwindrelease the anger inside of my mind.

"Yesterday" is one of the songs which has a great backstory in contemporary musical hisong in contemporary musical history that has a great backstory.

I thought about how the Beatles' song "Yesterday" was made when I was listening to it.

Coincidentally, I was translating thea text about this song from my native language to English.

I found out athe song's fascinating backstory, a: According to McCartney's words he mad, he wrote a song as he dreamted.

He wondered what it could be, so there was an upright piano beside him, then he played the tunehe played the tune on an upright piano that was nearby him.

He liked the song, plus he and could not believe that such aomething so wonderful song was totally his.

What's more, it' was the first song that hasd been written without the help of other members, namely. McCartney wrote it alone.

Keen to not forget the song, he wrote temporaryjotted down some placeholder words for it.

If I'm not wrong remember correctly, they went: "Scrambled eggs, oh, my baby, how I love your legs".

I also have to mention that " scrambled eggs" was a joke in the band before it'the song was fully recorded.

Lennon said:, "The song was around for months and months before we finally completed it. Every time when we got together to write some songs for thea recording session, this one would come up. We almost had it finished. Paul wrote nearly all of it, but we just couldn't think offind the right title so w. We called it "s'Scrambled eEggs", then' and it became a joke between us."

I looked online and found what I think is the original quote :)

My thoughts and "Yesterday"


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Today is heavenly,calm and pleasant day,namely it's friday,consequently,I can rest a lot.


Today is a heavenly, calm, and pleasant day,n. Namely, it's fFriday,c. Consequently, I can rest a lot.

Today is a heavenly, calm, and pleasant day,n. Namely, it's fFriday, and consequently, I can rest a lot.

Make sure you pay attention to spacing after punctuation.

I couldn't settled on to read the book,yet I settled on writing this entry.


I couldn't settled on toa read theing a book,yet so I settled on writing this entry.

I couldn't settled o down to read thea book, yet I settled on writing this entry.

My classmates left the school just before me,due to the fact that,I was changing my uniform to classical one after having PE subject.


My classmates left the school just before me,due to the fact that,I was changing my because I was changing I was out of my P.E. uniform to classicmy normal one after having PE subjectP.E. class.

My classmates left the school just before me, due to the fact that, I was changing my uniform to classical one after having PE subject.

You don't need to write subject after a class name.

Frankly speaking, absolutely nobody ever brings uniform for PE subject, by the way, I have no idea what the reason for it, perhaps they have no interest in the subject, who knows.


Frankly speaking, absolutely nobody ever brings their uniform for PE subject, by the way, I have no idea what the reason for it, perhaps.E. I have no idea why; maybe they have no interest in the subject,; who knows.

Frankly speaking, absolutely nobody ever brings uniform for PE subject, by the way,. I have no idea what the reason for it, p is. Perhaps they have no interest in the subject, who knows.

I remember, scarcely had a blackout occurred at home when I used the computer.


I remember, scarcely had a blackout that blackouts scarcely occurred at home when I usedwas using the computer.

I remember, sScarcely hads a blackout occurred at home when I used the computer.

Also, I gotta admit the class across the class I study in, is much more active compared with ours.


Also, I gotta admimust admit that the class across the class I study hall from min,e is much more active compared with ours.

Also, I gotta admit the class across the class I study in, is much more active compared with ours.

When I tried to turn my laptop on, it started to lag so much that I couldn't even just press the left button of the mouse, so it drove me up the wall so much that I turned it off and nearly hit the laptop.


When I tried to turn my laptop on, it started to lagged so much that I couldn't even just press the left button ofclick the mouse, so i. It drove me up the wall, so much that I turned it off and nearly hit the laptop.

When I tried to turn my laptop on, it started to lag so much that I couldn't even just press the left button of the mouse, so i. It drove me up the wall so much that I turned it off and nearly hit the laptop.

I was just hoping to post an entry, however, it did not enable me to do it, because of that, I meditated for 10 minutes.


I was just hoping to post an entry, however, it did not enable me to do it, bbut I wasn't able to. Because of that, I meditated for 10ten minutes.

I was just hoping to post an entry,; however, it did not enable me to do it, b. Because of that, I meditated for 10 minutes.

Well, it helped me unwind the anger inside of my mind.


Well, iIt helped me unwindrelease the anger inside of my mind.

"Yesterday" is one of the songs which has a great backstory in contemporary musical history.


"Yesterday" is one of the songs which has a great backstory in contemporary musical hisong in contemporary musical history that has a great backstory.

I thought about how the Beatles' song "Yesterday" made when I was listening to it.


I thought about how the Beatles' song "Yesterday" was made when I was listening to it.

I thought about how the Beatles' song "Yesterday" was made when I was listening to it.

Coincidentally, I was translating the text about this song from my native language to English.


Coincidentally, I was translating thea text about this song from my native language to English.

I found out a fascinating backstory, according to McCartney's words he made a song as he dreamt.


I found out athe song's fascinating backstory, a: According to McCartney's words he mad, he wrote a song as he dreamted.

I found out a fascinating backstory, a. According to McCartney's words, he made a song as he dreamt.

He wondered what it could be, so there was an upright piano beside him, then he played the tune.


He wondered what it could be, so there was an upright piano beside him, then he played the tunehe played the tune on an upright piano that was nearby him.

He wondered what it could be, so t. There was an upright piano beside him, thenand he played the tune.

He liked the song, plus he could not believe that such a wonderful song was totally his.


He liked the song, plus he and could not believe that such aomething so wonderful song was totally his.

What's more, it's the first song that has been written without the help of other members, namely McCartney wrote it alone.


What's more, it' was the first song that hasd been written without the help of other members, namely. McCartney wrote it alone.

What's more, it's the first song that hasd been written without the help of other members,; namely McCartney wrote it alone.

You could choose to split this into two separate sentences or use a semi-colon.

Keen to not forget the song he wrote temporary words for it.


Keen to not forget the song, he wrote temporaryjotted down some placeholder words for it.

Keen to not forget the song, he wrote temporary words for it.

If I'm not wrong, they went: "Scrambled eggs, oh, my baby, how I love your legs".


If I'm not wrong remember correctly, they went: "Scrambled eggs, oh, my baby, how I love your legs".

If I'm not wrong, they went: "Scrambled eggs, oh, my baby, how I love your legs"."

Periods go inside quotation marks.

I also have to mention that " scrambled eggs" was a joke in the band before it's fully recorded.


I also have to mention that " scrambled eggs" was a joke in the band before it'the song was fully recorded.

I also have to mention that " scrambled eggs" was a joke in the band before it' was fully recorded.

You have been using past tense, so you need to continue using the same tense.

Lennon said: "Every time when we got together to write some songs for the session, this would come up, but we couldn't think of the right title so we called it "scrambled eggs", then it became a joke between us."


Lennon said:, "The song was around for months and months before we finally completed it. Every time when we got together to write some songs for thea recording session, this one would come up. We almost had it finished. Paul wrote nearly all of it, but we just couldn't think offind the right title so w. We called it "s'Scrambled eEggs", then' and it became a joke between us."

I looked online and found what I think is the original quote :)

Lennon said: "Every time when we got together to write some songs for the session, this would come up, but we couldn't think of the right title so we called it "'scrambled eggs",' then it became a joke between us."

When you need to quote something that is already inside quotation marks, you use apostrophes instead.

Today is a heavenly, calm, and pleasant day.


Namely, it's Friday.


Consequently, I can rest a lot.


I couldn't settle on a reading a book, so I settled on writing this entry.


My classmates left school just before me because I was changing I was out of my P.E.


uniform to my normal one after P.E.


class.


Frankly speaking, absolutely nobody ever brings their uniform for P.E.


I have no idea why; maybe they have no interest in the subject ; who knows.


I remember that blackout scarcely occurred at home when I was using the computer.


Also, I must admit that the class across the hall from m in e is much more active.


When I tried to turn my laptop on, it lagged so much that I couldn't even click the mouse.


It drove me up the wall, so I turned it off and nearly hit the laptop.


I was hoping to post an entry, but I wasn't able to.


Because of that, I meditated for ten minutes.


It helped me release the anger in my mind.


“Yesterday” one song in contemporary musical history that has a great back story. I thought about how the Beatles' song “Yesterday” was made when I was listening to it.


Coincidentally, I was translating a text about this song from my native language to English.


I found out the song's fascinating backstory : According to McCartney, he wrote a song as he dreamed.


He wondered what it could be, so he played the tune on an upright piano that was nearby him.


He liked the song and could not believe that something so wonderful was totally his.


What's more, it was the first song that ha d been written without the help of other members.


McCartney wrote it alone.


Keen to not forget the song, he jotted down some placeholder words for it.


If I remember correctly, they went: “Scrambled eggs, oh, my baby, how I love your legs”. I also have to mention that “ scrambled eggs” was a joke in the band before the song was fully recorded.


Lennon said, “ The song was around for months and months before we finally completed it. Every time we got together to write songs for a recording session, this one would come up. We almost had it finished. Paul wrote nearly all of it, but we just couldn't find the right title. We called it 'Scrambled Eggs ' and it became a joke between us.”


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