Three days ago I had a surgery idone on my noise,. It was specifically I had a septumoplasty, because my septum had a deviattion to left sidewhich needed to happen because my septum was tilting to the left.

I just feel like this is more clear, I don't know.

On day of the surgery I felt nervous and bit ansxiouxs, even I feltalmost as if it wasere my last day tof lifve.

got rid of "bit" because if you are going to compare it to fearing for your life, then you are not only a bit anxious, you are very anxious. The vast majority of people are not only a bit nervous to die.

Today, I feel better and more quietcalm.

My noise doesn't hurt and my mind is inat peace.

instead of "my mind is at peace" you could also say something like, "I'm very relaxed" or "I'm in a state of calm" or something like that. "my mind is at peace" is fine too though.

I thought the recovery process was going to be more difficult, howeverbut I think everything is going Oto be ok.

I hope the outcomes are as expectedhealing process goes smoothly and my breathing improves a lot.

breaths are like individual inhalations or exhalations of air from the lungs.

I just felt like "the healing process goes smoothly" was more clear.

My thoughts and feelings about the surgery

Three days ago I had a surgery in my noise, s. Specifically I had a septumplasty, because my septum had a deviattion to the left side.

A period instead of a comma here separates the two statements.

On day of the surgery I felt nervous and a bit ansxioux,s. I even I felt it was my last day of life.

Typically, we use "a bit", instead of just "bit". Add a period to separate statements. Typically, the subject (I) would come before "even", as this just sounds more natural. You could also say "I even felt that it was the last day of my life", as adding "that" helps to emphasize what you were feeling.

My noise doesn't hurt and my mind is inat peace.

"At peace" is the correct expression.

I thought the recovery process was going to be more difficult, however I think everything is going OkK.

Sentence is correct, however you can also say: "I think that everything is going OK", to emphasize the thought. In my experience, "OK" is typically all uppercase, but others may disagree.

I hope the outcomes are as expected and my breathing improves a lot.

Correct verb conjugation. "Breathing" makes more sense than "breath", as breathing refers to the action itself, whereas breath is more the physical/actual air that you breathe out.

You could again say "I hope that...", and/or "an that my breath....", to help emphasize the idea, but again this is optional.

Three days ago I had a surgery in my noise, s. Specifically I had a septumoplasty, because my septum had a deviattion toward the left side.

Cuando busqué "septumplasty" en Google, me lo corrigió a "septoplasty"...creo que es la misma cirugia que recibiste, pero no soy médico, así que no estoy seguro.

Septoplasty is what Google corrected me to for "septumplasty", and it sounds like what you meant, but I'm not a doctor, so I'm not sure :)

On day of the surgery I felt nervous and bit ansxioux, evens. I felt it was mylike it might be the last day of my life.

Today, I feel better and more quietcalmer.

My noise doesn't hurt and my mind is inat peace.

I thought the recovery process was going to be more difficult, howeverbut I think everything is going OkK.

I hope the outcomes areit works as expected and my breathing improves a lot.

My thoughts and feelings about themy surgery

Use “my“ when talking about things or events that are specifically related to you

Three days ago, I had a nose surgery in my noise, s. Specifically, I had a septumplasty, because my septum had a deviattion to the left side.

Watch out for spelling mistakes.

On day of the surgery I felt nervous and bit ansxioux,s. I even I felt like it was mythe last day of my life.

I left the "the" before the word surgery because the context is already established. But "my" works here too.

Today, I feel better and more quietcalm.

My noise doesn't hurt and my mind is inat peace.

I thought the recovery process was going to be more difficult, however I think everything is going Ok.

I hope the outcomes are is as expected and that my breathing improve a lots.

The surgery might have multiple benefits but they weren't mentioned. I simplified it to be about the surgery itself. The "a lot" feels misplaced but it's not necessarily wrong, just felt unnatural

My thoughts and feelings about themy sugery

Three days ago I had a sugery ion my noise, specifically I had a septumoplasty, because my septum had a deviattion to left side/my septum deviated to the left.

On the day of the sugery I felt nervous and bit ansxiouxs, even I felteling as though it was my last day of lif/even feeling as though I might not survive.

Today, I feel better and more quietcalm.

My noise doesn't hurt and my mind is inat peace.

I thought the recovery process was going to be more difficult, howeverbut I think everything is going OkK.

I hope the outcomes are as expected and my breathing improves a lot.