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My Thoughts About Adopting Children

I have some thoughts about adopting children.
Should adoptive parents let the children know that they are adopted and tell them who their parents are? If so, what would the feeling be that the children have towards their biological parents and their adoptive parents? In a word, adopting children would lead to many problems.
I won't let others adopt my children, no matter how many children I have, and how poor I am. Instead, I will try my best to raise them.
If I adopt a child, when they grow up, I will let them know that they are adopted, and tell them who their parents are. I am also glad to see them in contact with their biological parents if they like. I only raise them to help them, not to get something from them.

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My Thoughts About Adopting Children

I have some thoughts about adopting children.

Should adoptive parents let the children know that they are adopted and tell them who their parents are?

If so, what would the feeling be that the children have towards their biological parents and their adoptive parents?

In a word, adopting children would lead to many problems.

I won't let others adopt my children, no matter how many children I have, and how poor I am.

Instead, I will try my best to raise them.

If I adopt a child, when they grow up, I will let them know that they are adopted, and tell them who their parents are.

I am also glad to see them in contact with their biological parents if they like.

I onlywould raise them to help them, not to get something from them.

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Jack

May 9, 2024

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Thank you very much.

My Thoughts About Adopting Children

I have some thoughts about adopting children.

Should adoptive parents let the children know that they are adopted and tell them who their (biological OR real) parents are?

If so, whathow would the feeling be that the children havechild feel towards their biological parents and their adoptive parents?

"How" feels more natural and fitting than "What." It also seems a bit more empathetic.

In a word(In short?), adopting children would lead to many problems.

"In a word" doesn't make much sense in the sentence. Not only does it provide no context to what you have to say next, but it also is quite ambiguous itself

I certainly won't let others adopt my children, no matter how many children I have, and or how poor I am.

"Or" is much more hypothetical than "and"

Instead, I will try my best to raise them.

If I ever adopt a child, when they grow up, I will let them know that they are adopted, and tell them who their parents are. when they grow up,

I am'd also gladbe happy to see them in contact with their biological parents if they would like.

I'd only raise them to help them, not to get something from them.

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Jack

March 28, 2024

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Thank you very much.

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My Thoughts About Adopting Children

I have some thoughts about adopting children.

Should adoptive parents let the children know that they are adopted and tell them who their parents are?

If so, what would the feeling be that the children have towards their biological parents and their adoptive parents be?

In a word, adopting children wcould lead to many problems.

I won't let others adopt my children, no matter how many children I have, and how poor I am.

Instead, I will try my best to raise them.

If I adopt a child, when they grow up, I will let them know that they are adopted, and tell them who their parents are.

I amwould also be glad to seeput them in contact with their biological parents if they like.

I would only raise them to help them, not to get something from them.

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Jack

March 28, 2024

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Thank you very much.

My Thoughts About Adopting Children

I have some thoughts about adopting children.

Should adoptive parents let the children know that they are adopted and tell them who their parents are?

If so, whathow would the feeling be that the children havefeel towards their biological parents and their adoptive parents?

In a wshordt, adopting children would lead to many problems.

I won'tuld never let others adopt my children, no matter how many children I have, and or how poor I am.

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I would never give any of my children up for adoption, no matter...

Instead, I will try my best to raise them.

If I adopt aed children, when they grow up, I willould let them know that they are adopted, and tell them who their biological parents are.

Since you are using "they", I changed child(singular) to children(plural).

I amwould also be glad to see them in contact with their biological parents if they'd like.

I would only raise them to help them, not to get something from them in return.

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Jack

March 27, 2024

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Thank you very much.

My Thoughts About Adopting Children

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I have some thoughts about adopting children.

Should adoptive parents let the children know that they are adopted and tell them who their parents are?

If so, what would the feeling be thatfeelings would the children have towards their biological parents and their adoptive parents?

In a word, adopting children would lead to many problems.

I won't let others adopt my children, no matter how many children I have, and or how poor I am.

Instead, I will try my best to raise them.

If I adopt a child, when they grow up, I will let them know that they are adopted, and tell them who their parents are.

I amwould also be glad to see them in contact with their biological parents if they would like to.

I only raise them to help them, not to get something from them. in return.

Jack's avatar
Jack

March 27, 2024

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Thank you very much.

My Thoughts About Adopting Children

I have some thoughts about adopting children.

Should adoptive parents let the children know that they are adopted and tell them who their parents are?

If so, what would the feeling be thatwould the children have towards their biological parents and their adoptive parents?

In a wshordt, adopting children would lead to many problems.

I wouldn't let others adopt my childregive any of my children up for adoption, no matter how many children I have, andor how poor I am.

Instead, I will try my best to raise them.

If I adopt a child, when they grow up, I will let them know that they are adopted, and tell them who their parents are.

I amwould also glad to see them in contact with their biological parents, if they like.

I only raise them to help them, not to get something from them.

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Jack

March 27, 2024

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Thank you very much.

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I won't let others adopt my children, no matter how many children I have, and how poor I am.


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Should adoptive parents let the children know that they are adopted and tell them who their (biological OR real) parents are?

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If so, what would the feeling be that the children have towards their biological parents and their adoptive parents?


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If I adopt a child, when they grow up, I will let them know that they are adopted, and tell them who their parents are.


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If I adopt a child, when they grow up, I will let them know that they are adopted, and tell them who their parents are.

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Since you are using "they", I changed child(singular) to children(plural).

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