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My Third Car

In 2017, my wife and I moved to another apartment in my city. This apartment was a little far from the place my wife worked in, about 5 kilometers away.

During summer and winter, the weather here was too hot and too cold. Riding an e bike to go to work and go back home was really a sufferance.

My wife told me that she wanted to buy a car for her to go to work. Because the car was only for going to work and going back home, so a small and cheaper car was enough.

After I looked for several small and cheaper cars, I thought the Chery 3 X SUV was suitable for her. This car has several different configurations, and I chose the expensive configuration. Although it was the top configuration, it only cost me a little more than 70,000 RMB.

Somehow, she didn't drive the Chery many times. I guess she may not be confident about driving cars. A few months later, my daughter-in-law started to drive that car going to work and going back home. Her work place was in the countryside, and was very far from the place she lived in.

After I bought the BMW that I mentioned in my second essay, I only drove it a few times before my son took it over. I had to drive the Passat that I mentioned in my first essay again in the past few years.

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My Third Car

In 2017, my wife and I moved to another apartment in my city.

This apartment was a little far from the place where my wife worked in, about 5 kilometers away.

During summer and winter, the weather here wais too hot and too cold.

Riding an e bike to go to work and gocome back home was really a insufferancble.

My wife told me that she wanted to buy a car just for her to go to work.

Because the car was only for going to work and going back home, soand from work, a smaller and cheaper car was enough.

After I looked for several smaller and cheaper cars, I thought that the Chery 3 X SUV was suitable for her.

This car has several different configurations, and I chose the expensive configuratione.

Although it was the top of the line configuration, it only cost me a little more thanover 70,000 RMB.

Somehow, she didn't drive the Chery many timesvery often.

I guess she may not behave been confident about drivingenough to drive the cars.

A few months later, my daughter-in-law started to driveing that car going to work and going back hometo and from work.

Her work place was in the countryside, and which was very far from the place she lived in.

After I bought the BMW that I mentioned in my second essay, I only drove it a few times before my son took it over.

I had to drive the Passat that I mentioned in my first essay again in the past few years.

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Feb. 13, 2023

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In 2017, my wife and I moved to another apartment in my city.

This apartment was a little faurther from the place my wife worked in, about 5 kilometers away.

During summer and winter, the weather here was too hot and winter it was too cold.

Riding an e -bike to go to work and go back home was really a sufferance.a nuisance / annoying / tiring.

My wife told me that she wanted to buy a car for her to go to work.

BecauseAs the car was only for going to work and going back home, soback, a small and cheaper car was enough.

Try not to start a sentence with the words because or and.

After I looked foring at several small and cheaper cars, I thought the Chery 3 X SUV was suitable for her.

This car has several different configurationmodels, and I chose the more expensive configuration.

Although it was the top configurationmodel, it only cost me a little more than 70,000 RMB.

Somehow, she didn't drive the Chery many times.

I guess she may not be confident about driving cars.

A few months later, my daughter-in-law started to drive thate car going to work and going back homeback.

Her work place was in the countryside, and was very far from twhe placre she lived in.

After I bought the BMW that I mentioned in my second essay, I only drove it a few times before my son took it over.

I had to drive the Passat that I mentioned in my first essay again in these past few years.

Jack's avatar
Jack

Feb. 13, 2023

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Thank you very much!

My Third Car


My Tthird Ccar

I would not capitalise all the words

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In 2017, my wife and I moved to another apartment in my city.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This apartment was a little far from the place my wife worked in, about 5 kilometers away.


This apartment was a little faurther from the place my wife worked in, about 5 kilometers away.

This apartment was a little far from the place where my wife worked in, about 5 kilometers away.

During summer and winter, the weather here was too hot and too cold.


During summer and winter, the weather here was too hot and winter it was too cold.

During summer and winter, the weather here wais too hot and too cold.

Riding an e bike to go to work and go back home was really a sufferance.


Riding an e -bike to go to work and go back home was really a sufferance.a nuisance / annoying / tiring.

Riding an e bike to go to work and gocome back home was really a insufferancble.

My wife told me that she wanted to buy a car for her to go to work.


My wife told me that she wanted to buy a car for her to go to work.

My wife told me that she wanted to buy a car just for her to go to work.

Because the car was only for going to work and going back home, so a small and cheaper car was enough.


BecauseAs the car was only for going to work and going back home, soback, a small and cheaper car was enough.

Try not to start a sentence with the words because or and.

Because the car was only for going to work and going back home, soand from work, a smaller and cheaper car was enough.

After I looked for several small and cheaper cars, I thought the Chery 3 X SUV was suitable for her.


After I looked foring at several small and cheaper cars, I thought the Chery 3 X SUV was suitable for her.

After I looked for several smaller and cheaper cars, I thought that the Chery 3 X SUV was suitable for her.

This car has several different configurations, and I chose the expensive configuration.


This car has several different configurationmodels, and I chose the more expensive configuration.

This car has several different configurations, and I chose the expensive configuratione.

Although it was the top configuration, it only cost me a little more than 70,000 RMB.


Although it was the top configurationmodel, it only cost me a little more than 70,000 RMB.

Although it was the top of the line configuration, it only cost me a little more thanover 70,000 RMB.

Somehow, she didn't drive the Chery many times.


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Somehow, she didn't drive the Chery many timesvery often.

I guess she may not be confident about driving cars.


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I guess she may not behave been confident about drivingenough to drive the cars.

A few months later, my daughter-in-law started to drive that car going to work and going back home.


A few months later, my daughter-in-law started to drive thate car going to work and going back homeback.

A few months later, my daughter-in-law started to driveing that car going to work and going back hometo and from work.

Her work place was in the countryside, and was very far from the place she lived in.


Her work place was in the countryside, and was very far from twhe placre she lived in.

Her work place was in the countryside, and which was very far from the place she lived in.

After I bought the BMW that I mentioned in my second essay, I only drove it a few times before my son took it over.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I had to drive the Passat that I mentioned in my first essay again in the past few years.


I had to drive the Passat that I mentioned in my first essay again in these past few years.

I had to drive the Passat that I mentioned in my first essay again in the past few years.

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