May 7, 2025
My Third Apartment
My third apartment was purchased in 2017, during the peak of Chinese real estate prices. That year, Shuangqing Bay Park was constructed in the center of Fuyang's South New District.
My wife and I were seeking a more pleasant living area, as the locations of my previous apartments were less than ideal.
The South New District was meticulously planned with high - standard living quality features, including wide streets, extensive green spaces, rivers, and a variety of trees, flowers, and bushes.
Consequently, this district boasted the highest real estate prices in the entire city. The residential community where my third apartment was located was situated on the northeast side of the park.
The apartments in this community were priced at approximately 12,000 Chinese yuan per square meter, which included the cost of a 13 - square - meter garage.
Purchasing a garage was a prerequisite for apartment buyers. Due to government - imposed price limits on apartments, which were set at 300,000 Chinese yuan, real estate companies maintained their profits by inflating garage prices.
My third apartment, spanning around 120 square meters, cost about 1,450,000 Chinese yuan, making it the most expensive among all my properties.
Since 2017, Chinese real estate prices have been on a rapid decline. Currently, the market value of this apartment has dropped to around 1,000,000 Chinese yuan, resulting in a loss of over 400,000 yuan for me.
I am uncertain about how much more value this apartment will lose in the future.
My Third Apartment
My third apartment was purchased in 2017, during the peak of Chinese real estate prices.
That year, Shuangqing Bay Park was constructed in the center of Fuyang's South New District.
My wife and I were seeking a more pleasant living area, as the locations of my previous apartments were less than ideal.
The South New District was meticulously planned with high - standard living qualityquality of life features, including wide streets, extensive green spaces, rivers, and a variety of trees, flowers, and bushes.
Consequently, this district boasted the highest real estate prices in the entire city.
The residential community where my third apartment was located was situated on the northeast side of the park.
The apartments in this community were priced at approximately 12,000 Chinese yuan per square meter, which included the cost of a 13 - square - meter garage.
Purchasing a garage was a prerequisitemandatory for apartment buyers.
A prerequisite implies that you have to do A before you can do B, but I assume you can't buy the garage without also buying the apartment.
Due to government - -imposed price limits on apartments, which were set at 300,000 Chinese yuan, real estate companies maintained their profits by inflating garage prices.
My third apartment, spanning around 120 square meters, cost about 1,450,000 Chinese yuan, making it the most expensive among all my properties.
Since 2017, Chinese real estate prices have been on a rapid decline.
This is correct. For some reason, I would personally prefer to word it as "have been rapidly declining" or "rapidly declined."
Currently, the market value of this apartment has dropped to around 1,000,000 Chinese yuan, resulting in a loss of over 400,000 yuan for me.
I am uncertain about how much more value this apartment will lose in the future.
Feedback
You use a lot of passive voice sentences ("was purchased", "was situated", etc). That doesn't hurt readability, but a lot of writing style guides will recommend not overusing passive voice.
In the US, we generally would call your properties "condominiums" (or condos for short) because you own them. Apartments are usually rented from a landlord.
May 7, 2025
Thank you very much.
The South New District was meticulously planned with high - standard living quality features, including wide streets, extensive green spaces, rivers, and a variety of trees, flowers, and bushes.
The residential community, where my third apartment was located was situated on the northeast side of the park.
The apartments in this community were priced at approximately 12,000 Chinese yuan per square meter, which included the cost of a 13 - square -d meter garage.
Due to government - imposed price limits on apartments, which were set at 300,000 Chinese yuan, real estate companies maintained their profits by inflating garage prices.
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Keep it up!
May 7, 2025
Thank you very much.
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Purchasing a garage was a prerequisite for apartment buyers. Purchasing a garage was A prerequisite implies that you have to do A before you can do B, but I assume you can't buy the garage without also buying the apartment. |
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My third apartment, spanning around 120 square meters, cost about 1,450,000 Chinese yuan, making it the most expensive among all my properties. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Since 2017, Chinese real estate prices have been on a rapid decline. Since 2017, Chinese real estate prices have been on a rapid decline. This is correct. For some reason, I would personally prefer to word it as "have been rapidly declining" or "rapidly declined." |
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Currently, the market value of this apartment has dropped to around 1,000,000 Chinese yuan, resulting in a loss of over 400,000 yuan for me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I am uncertain about how much more value this apartment will lose in the future. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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