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justice_matters

June 28, 2023

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My terrifying story 3

I do not need any advice, support or judgement of my actions. I am very conscious of my past mistakes. I just want you to check my grammar since I'm planning to send this text to a law enforcement and maybe make this text sound more formal. I appreciate your help.
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If you'd ask me to summarize the period of our frienship to spring from November, I'd describe it like this: we still used to send each other nude pictures and s3xu4l fantasies quite often. However, not all of our conversations were inappropriate, sometimes we could have normal dialogues. Ocassionaly, I listened up to him because he could open to me when he was depressed, mostly because of his love for/to that girl from Germany, Marie. It would hurt me very bad listening about her, but I still kept asking about how we feels. Let's not forget that he wasn't the only one with mental problems, I had frequent breakdowns until the winter, I suppose, so he also had to listen to my problems. I'm almost sure now he didn't care. It was a part of grooming and he just wanted me to keep trusting and sending him pictures. Along with it, I have no uncertainty that he had sort of sadistic desires. Once in autumn of 2022, he got bored from simple nud3 pictures, so that's why he asked me to send me a video in which I had to pop my finger into my bottom hole (idk help it sound more formal), so he could feel better. That's what I did. After sending that video, I admitted it was painfull, and he replied that it was his design (I've heard that this phrase has a meaning like "This is my plan/intention", but I'm not sure if I can use it here). Besides it, during our friendship, he got to know one of my real life friends. Later, he found out how she looks. He was aware how low my self-esteem was in those times, plus all those breakdowns, but it didn't stop him from complimenting her every time I mentioned her, and then telling me how he would use her to satisfy him, and I would just watch (he knew that I was literally obsessed with him). I suppose that you can understand that it made me feel only worse, my mental breakdowns became more frequent and I started comparing myself to that friend of mine, thinking that he doesn't love me because I'm not gorgeous as her. It was very clear that I couldn't react possitively to this, plus he wasn't that brainless, therefore I think that he could have done it to hurt me. Most of his s3xu4al fantasies were quite sadistic. He absolutely loved telling me how he would use many minor girls for satisfying him.

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I do not need any advice, support or judgement of my actions.

I am very conscious of my past mistakes.

I just want you to check my grammar since I'm planning to send this text to a law enforcement and maybe make this text sound more formal.

I'd appreciate your help.

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If you'd ask me to summarize the period of our frien
dship to spring from November, I'd describe it like this: we still used to send each other nude pictures and s3xu4l fantasies quite often.

However, not all of our conversations were inappropriate, sometimes we cwould have normal dialogues.conversations

dialogue sounds literary, conversation sounds more natural here.

Ocassionaly, I listened up to him because he could open up to me when he was depressed, mostly because of his love for/to that girl from Germany, Marie.

It would hurt me very bada lot to listening about her, but I still kept asking about how we feels.

I'm almost sure now he didn't care.

It was a part of grooming and he just wanted me to keep trusting him and sending him pictures.

That's what I did.

Besides it, during our friendship, he got to know one of my real life friends.

Later, he found out how she looks.

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justice_matters

June 29, 2023

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Thanks

My terrifying story 3


I do not need any advice, support or judgement of my actions.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am very conscious of my past mistakes.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I just want you to check my grammar since I'm planning to send this text to a law enforcement and maybe make this text sound more formal.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I appreciate your help.


I'd appreciate your help.

------ If you'd ask me to summarize the period of our frienship to spring from November, I'd describe it like this: we still used to send each other nude pictures and s3xu4l fantasies quite often.


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If you'd ask me to summarize the period of our frien
dship to spring from November, I'd describe it like this: we still used to send each other nude pictures and s3xu4l fantasies quite often.

However, not all of our conversations were inappropriate, sometimes we could have normal dialogues.


However, not all of our conversations were inappropriate, sometimes we cwould have normal dialogues.conversations

dialogue sounds literary, conversation sounds more natural here.

Ocassionaly, I listened up to him because he could open to me when he was depressed, mostly because of his love for/to that girl from Germany, Marie.


Ocassionaly, I listened up to him because he could open up to me when he was depressed, mostly because of his love for/to that girl from Germany, Marie.

It would hurt me very bad listening about her, but I still kept asking about how we feels.


It would hurt me very bada lot to listening about her, but I still kept asking about how we feels.

Let's not forget that he wasn't the only one with mental problems, I had frequent breakdowns until the winter, I suppose, so he also had to listen to my problems.


I'm almost sure now he didn't care.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It was a part of grooming and he just wanted me to keep trusting and sending him pictures.


It was a part of grooming and he just wanted me to keep trusting him and sending him pictures.

Along with it, I have no uncertainty that he had sort of sadistic desires.


Once in autumn of 2022, he got bored from simple nud3 pictures, so that's why he asked me to send me a video in which I had to pop my finger into my bottom hole (idk help it sound more formal), so he could feel better.


That's what I did.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

After sendin this video, I admitted it was painfull, and he replied that it was his design (I've heard that this phrase has a meaning like "This is my plan/intention", but I'm not sure if I can use it here).


Besides it, during our friendship, he got to know one of my real life friends.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Later, he found out how she looks.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

He was aware how low my self-esteem was in those times, plus all those breakdowns, but it didn't stop him from complimenting her every time I mentioned her, and then telling me how he would use her to satisfy him, and I would just watch (he knew that I was literally obsessed with him).


I suppose that you can understand that it made me feel only worse, my mental breakdowns became more frequent and I started comparing myself to that friend of mine, thinking that he doesn't love me because I'm not gorgeous as her.


It was very clear that I couldn't react possitively to this, plus he wasn't that brainless, therefore I think that he could have done it to hurt me.


Most of his s3xu4al fantasies were quite sadistic.


He absolutely loved telling me how he would use many minor girls for satisfying him.


After sending this video, I admitted it was painfull, and he replied that it was his design (I've heard that this phrase has a meaning like "This is my plan/intention", but I'm not sure if I can use it here).


After sending that video, I admitted it was painfull, and he replied that it was his design (I've heard that this phrase has a meaning like "This is my plan/intention", but I'm not sure if I can use it here).


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