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SummerTeaWater

Jan. 28, 2022

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My Teapots

I really like drinking tea every day.

So I have a lot of teapots and shopping them is one of my favorites.

Based on my tea preference, I have four types of teapots.

When I drink green tea, I usually use the kyusu teapot.

The handle of the teapot and its spout are placed an angle of ninety degrees.

For black tea, I use 'tea for one' sets which I bought during traveling in Poland.

It is very unique and beautiful that it can show red tea water clearly.

Oorong tea and pu'er tea are good with the Chinese style teapot.

Because the teapot is created from clay and stone, so it eliminates bad taste and flavor of tea.

The last thing is a Turkish style teapot.

Unlike other tea, I need to brew tea more than 2 hours in boiling water.

Using Turkish teapot, I can make a Turkish black tea more easy.

Like this, I use my various teapots for more aroma and taste.

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My Teapots

So I have a lot of teapots and shopping for them is one of my favorite pastimes.

Based on my teaste preference, I have four types of teapots.

When I drink green tea, I usually use the kyusu teapot.

The handle of the teapot and its spout are placed at an angle of ninety degrees.

For black tea, I use 'tea for one' sets which I bought duringwhen traveling in Poland.

Oorong tea and pu'er tea are good within the Chinese style teapot.

Because the teapot is created from clay and stone, so it eliminates the bad taste and flavor of tea.

The last thing is a Turkish style teapot.

Unlike other tea, I need to brew the tea more than 2 hours in boiling water.

Using the Turkish teapot, I can make a Turkish black tea more easy.

Like this, I use my various teapots for more aroma and taste.

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Very interesting

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So I have a lot of teapots and shopping for them is one of my favorites things to do.

The handle of the teapot and its spout are placed at an angle of ninety degrees.

For black tea, I use 'tea for one' sets which I bought duringwhile traveling in Poland.

It is very unique and beautiful that it can show red tea water clearly.

I'm not sure what you're trying to say here.

Because tThe teapot is created from clay and stone, so it eliminates bad taste and flavor ofgets rid of the bad flavors in the tea.

I think this is what you mean?

Unlike other tea, I need to brew teahe tea for more than 2 hours in boiling water.

Using the Turkish teapot, I can make a Turkish black tea more easily.

Like this,That's how I use my various teapots for more aroma and taste.

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SummerTeaWater

Jan. 28, 2022

402

Thank you.

My Teapots

I really like drinking tea every day.

So I have a lot of teapots and shopping for them is one of my favorite things/activities.

Use "so" to connect this phrase to the previous:

I really like drinking tea every day, so I have a lot of teapots and shopping forthem is one of my favorite things.

Based on my tea preference, I have four types of teapots.

When I drink green tea, I usually use the kyusu teapot.

The handle of the teapot and its spout are placed at an angle of ninety degrees.

For black tea, I use 'tea for one' sets which I bought during traveling ina trip to Poland.

It is very unique and beautiful that it can showand you can clearly see the red tea water clearly.

Oorong tea and pu'er tea are good with the Chinese style teapot.

Because the teapot is created from clay and stone, so it eliminates any bad taste and enhances the flavor of the tea.

The last thingone is a Turkish style teapot.

Unlike other teas, I need to brew teahis tea for more than 2 hours in boiling water.

Using a Turkish teapot, I can make a Turkish black tea more easily.

"easily" (adverb) modifies the verb "make".

Like thisThis way, I use my various teapots for more aroma and taste.

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A few small mistakes, but overall, nice work!

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SummerTeaWater

Jan. 28, 2022

402

Thank you so much.

My Teapots

I really like drinking tea every day.

So I have a lot of teapots and shopping for them is one of my favorites things to do.

Based on my tea preference, I have four types of teapots.

When I drink green tea, I usually use the kyusu teapot.

The handle of the teapot and its spout are placed at an angle of ninety degrees.

For black tea, I use 'tea for one' sets which I bought duringwhile traveling in Poland.

It is a very unique and beautiful that ieapot that can show the red tea water clearly.

Oorong tea and pu'er tea are good with the Chinese style teapot.

Because the teapot is created from clay and stone, so it eliminates the bad taste and flavor ofof the tea.

taste and flavor are the same thing, so you can just use one word or the other, not both

The last thing is a Turkish style teapot.

Unlike other tea, I need to brew this tea more than 2 hours in boiling water.

Using a Turkish teapot, I can make a Turkish black tea more easy.

Like this, I use my various teapots for more aroma and taste.

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You did a good job. I enjoyed reading about your different teapots and the type of tea you can make with them.

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Archiekinz

Jan. 28, 2022

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Interesting Information about tea. I’m not a big tea drinker. The only tea I drink is sweet tea lol. I will have to try others lol.

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SummerTeaWater

Jan. 28, 2022

402

Thank you very much.

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Archiekinz

Jan. 28, 2022

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You’re welcome

My Teapots

I really like drinking tea every day.

So I have a lot of teapots, and shopping for them is one of my favorites things to do.

Based on mythe tea preferenceI want to drink, I have four different types of teapots that I can use.

Added a few more words to sound a bit more natural.

When I drink green tea, I usually use the kyusu teapot.

The handle of the teapot and its spout are placed an angle of ninety degreesat a 90° angle.

Nothing is wrong with your sentence, but in English we usually say something is "at" an angle.

For black tea, I use a 'tea for one' sets which I bought duringwhile traveling in Poland.

It is very unique and beautiful that, and it can show red tea water clearly.

Oorlong tea and pu'er tea are good with the Chinese style teapot.

In English, oolong is generally spelled with a "L" not an "R", though this may depend on the area.

Because the teapot is created from clay and stone, so itit can eliminates any bad taste andor flavor of tea.

The last thingype of teapot I have is a Turkish style teapot.

Unlike other teas, with this pot I need to brew teait for more than 2 hours in boiling water.

Using the Turkish teapot, I can make a Turkish black tea more easily.

Like this, I use my various teapots forIt is nice to use my different teapots to unlock more aroma and taste in my teas.

Re-worded it a bit for more clarity.

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잘 했습니다! 저는 이렇게 많은 종류의 찻주전자가 있는지 몰랐어요! 오늘 이 글에 통해 많은 것을 배웠어요. 감사합니다!

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SummerTeaWater

Jan. 28, 2022

402

고맙습니다! 이번에도 많이 배웠습니다.

My Teapots


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I really like drinking tea every day.


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So I have a lot of teapots and shopping them is one of my favorites.


So I have a lot of teapots, and shopping for them is one of my favorites things to do.

So I have a lot of teapots and shopping for them is one of my favorites things to do.

So I have a lot of teapots and shopping for them is one of my favorite things/activities.

Use "so" to connect this phrase to the previous: I really like drinking tea every day, so I have a lot of teapots and shopping forthem is one of my favorite things.

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So I have a lot of teapots and shopping for them is one of my favorite pastimes.

Based on my tea preference, I have four types of teapots.


Based on mythe tea preferenceI want to drink, I have four different types of teapots that I can use.

Added a few more words to sound a bit more natural.

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Based on my teaste preference, I have four types of teapots.

When I drink green tea, I usually use the kyusu teapot.


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The handle of the teapot and its spout are placed an angle of ninety degrees.


The handle of the teapot and its spout are placed an angle of ninety degreesat a 90° angle.

Nothing is wrong with your sentence, but in English we usually say something is "at" an angle.

The handle of the teapot and its spout are placed at an angle of ninety degrees.

The handle of the teapot and its spout are placed at an angle of ninety degrees.

The handle of the teapot and its spout are placed at an angle of ninety degrees.

The handle of the teapot and its spout are placed at an angle of ninety degrees.

For black tea, I use 'tea for one' sets which I bought during traveling in Poland.


For black tea, I use a 'tea for one' sets which I bought duringwhile traveling in Poland.

For black tea, I use 'tea for one' sets which I bought duringwhile traveling in Poland.

For black tea, I use 'tea for one' sets which I bought during traveling ina trip to Poland.

For black tea, I use 'tea for one' sets which I bought duringwhile traveling in Poland.

For black tea, I use 'tea for one' sets which I bought duringwhen traveling in Poland.

It is very unique and beautiful that it can show red tea water clearly.


It is very unique and beautiful that, and it can show red tea water clearly.

It is a very unique and beautiful that ieapot that can show the red tea water clearly.

It is very unique and beautiful that it can showand you can clearly see the red tea water clearly.

It is very unique and beautiful that it can show red tea water clearly.

I'm not sure what you're trying to say here.

Oorong tea and pu'er tea are good with the Chinese style teapot.


Oorlong tea and pu'er tea are good with the Chinese style teapot.

In English, oolong is generally spelled with a "L" not an "R", though this may depend on the area.

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Oorong tea and pu'er tea are good within the Chinese style teapot.

Because the teapot is created from clay and stone, so it eliminates bad taste and flavor of tea.


Because the teapot is created from clay and stone, so itit can eliminates any bad taste andor flavor of tea.

Because the teapot is created from clay and stone, so it eliminates the bad taste and flavor ofof the tea.

taste and flavor are the same thing, so you can just use one word or the other, not both

Because the teapot is created from clay and stone, so it eliminates any bad taste and enhances the flavor of the tea.

Because tThe teapot is created from clay and stone, so it eliminates bad taste and flavor ofgets rid of the bad flavors in the tea.

I think this is what you mean?

Because the teapot is created from clay and stone, so it eliminates the bad taste and flavor of tea.

The last thing is a Turkish style teapot.


The last thingype of teapot I have is a Turkish style teapot.

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The last thingone is a Turkish style teapot.

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Unlike other tea, I need to brew tea more than 2 hours in boiling water.


Unlike other teas, with this pot I need to brew teait for more than 2 hours in boiling water.

Unlike other tea, I need to brew this tea more than 2 hours in boiling water.

Unlike other teas, I need to brew teahis tea for more than 2 hours in boiling water.

Unlike other tea, I need to brew teahe tea for more than 2 hours in boiling water.

Unlike other tea, I need to brew the tea more than 2 hours in boiling water.

Using Turkish teapot, I can make a Turkish black tea more easy.


Using the Turkish teapot, I can make a Turkish black tea more easily.

Using a Turkish teapot, I can make a Turkish black tea more easy.

Using a Turkish teapot, I can make a Turkish black tea more easily.

"easily" (adverb) modifies the verb "make".

Using the Turkish teapot, I can make a Turkish black tea more easily.

Using the Turkish teapot, I can make a Turkish black tea more easy.

Like this, I use my various teapots for more aroma and taste.


Like this, I use my various teapots forIt is nice to use my different teapots to unlock more aroma and taste in my teas.

Re-worded it a bit for more clarity.

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Like thisThis way, I use my various teapots for more aroma and taste.

Like this,That's how I use my various teapots for more aroma and taste.

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