July 31, 2025
My Sunday
Hello everyone! Today I'll talk about my Sunday
On Sunday, I don't go to school, so I usually wake up late in the morning.
In the afternoon, I always play with my friend or help my parents . Every other Sunday , I víit my uncle and my aunt . When I visit them , my aunt cooks me a deliciuos meal.
In the evening , I watch Tv or do my home work.
Sunday is funny and relaxing
Xin chào mọi người! Hôm nay tôi sẽ kể cho các bạn nghe về ngày chủ nhật của tôi
Vào ngày chủ nhật tôi không đi học, vậy nên tôi thường dạy trễ vào mỗi buổi sáng.
Vào buổi chiều tôi thường chơi với bạn của tôi hoặc giúp bố mẹ tôi. Vào những ngày chủ nhật khác tôi đến thăm bác của tôi . Mỗi khi tôi thăm họ , bác gái nấu cho tôi một bữa ăn ngon .Vào buổi tối Tôi xem tivi hoặc làm bài tập.
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My Sunday
Hello everyone!
Today, I'll talk about my Sunday
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On Sunday, I don't go to school, so I usually wake up late in the morning.
In the afternoon, I always play with my friend or help my parents .
Every other Sunday , I víisit my uncle and my aunt .
When I visit them , my aunt cooks me a deliciuous meal.
In the evening , I watch TvV or do my home work.
Sunday is funny and relaxing
My Sunday
Hello everyone!
Today I'll talkwrite about my Sunday
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On Sunday, I don't go to school,(,) so I(I) usually wake up late in the morning.
NOTE: Recommend deleting the 2nd comma and the final "I" -- better without too many "I"s in one sentence.
MY GUESS: In the afternoon, I always play with my friends or help my parents .
Every other Sunday , I víisit my uncle and (my) aunt .
SUGGESTION: Delete the 2nd "my."
When I visit them , my aunt cooks (me) a deliciuos meal.
SUGGESTION: Delete the word "me."
In the evening , I watch Tv or do my home work.
Sunday is funny and relaxing.
My Sunday
Hello everyone!
Today, I'll talk about my Sunday
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On Sunday, I don't go to school,; so, I usually wake up late in the morning.
In the afternoon, I always play with my friend or help my parents .
Every other Sunday , I víisit my uncle and my aunt .
When I visit them , my aunt cooks me a deliciuous meal.
In the evening , I watch TvV or do my home work.
Sunday is funny and relaxing
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Great job! Just a few corrections!
July 31, 2025
Thank you!!!
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