Margusiki's avatar
Margusiki

Aug. 25, 2023

0
My summer, my dreams

Summer is finishing and I am remembering that I did this summer and that i remember about it. I found a beautiful old movie theatre where I try to go now. At first time I sow there the last Was Anderson’s movie Asteroid City. This movie didn’t become my favourite movie from this director, but I still liked this trip to the cinema. I like to go alone to the movie theatre so that nobody distracts me. This is my date with the movie theatre. I would like to go to the movie theatre more often, but I study a lot now. And also I want to learn the language faster because I would like to watch the film in the original language and to hear the actors' voices


Лето заканчивается и я вспоминаю, что я делала этим летом и чем оно запомнилось. Я нашла красивый старый кинотеатр, куда теперь стараюсь ходить. Первый раз я там смотрела последний фильм Уэса Андерсона - Город астероида. Этот фильм не стал моим любимым у этого режиссера, но мне всё равно понравился этот поход в кинотеатр. Мне нравится ходить в кинотеатр одной, чтобы никто не отвлекал меня. Это моё свидание с кинотеатром. Я хотела бы ходить в кинотеатр чаще, но сейчас я много учусь. A ещё я хочу быстрее выучить язык, потому что я хотела бы смотреть фильмы на языке оригинала, чтобы слышать голос актёров

Corrections

Summer is finishing and I am remembering tcoming to an end, and I am thinking about what I did this summer, and twhat iI remember about it.

AtThe first time I sow there the lastwent, I saw Waes Anderson’s movie "Asteroid City."

This movie didn’t becomewasn't my favourite movie fromby this director, but I still likenjoyed this trip to the cinema.

I like to go alonegoing to the movie theatre alone so that nobody distracts me.

This is my date with the movie theatre.

I'm not quite sure what you mean by this.

I would like to go to the movie theatre more often, but I study a lot nowlately I've been busy studying.

AndI also I want to learn the language faster becauseEnglish more quickly,as I would like to watch the film in the original language and to hear the actors' voices.

Margusiki's avatar
Margusiki

Aug. 27, 2023

0

Thanks a lot

My summer, my dreams

Summer is finishending and I am remembering twhat I did this summer and that i remember about it.have been doing this past few months.

I found a beautiful old movie theatre where I tryich I have been trying to go nowto.

you can use ‘I am trying to go to’ if you are doing that ‘now’, but it depends on the context.

AtThe first time I sowwent there the last, I saw Waes Andersons latest movie Asteroid City.

This movieEven though it didn’t become my favourite movie from this director, but I still likenjoyed thise trip to the cinema.

This is my date with the movie theatre.

This sentence is technically not wrong, but to me it sound quite unnatural since you can’t literally ‘go on a date’ with a movie theatre.

I would like to go to the movie theatre more often, but Irecently I have been studying a lot now.

And also I want to learn the languageEnglish faster because I would like to watch the film in theits original language and to hear the actors' voices.

Margusiki's avatar
Margusiki

Aug. 27, 2023

0

Thanks a lot

My summer, my dreams


My summer, my dreams

Summer is finishing and I am remembering that I did this summer and that i remember about it.


Summer is finishending and I am remembering twhat I did this summer and that i remember about it.have been doing this past few months.

Summer is finishing and I am remembering tcoming to an end, and I am thinking about what I did this summer, and twhat iI remember about it.

I found a beautiful old movie theatre where I try to go now.


I found a beautiful old movie theatre where I tryich I have been trying to go nowto.

you can use ‘I am trying to go to’ if you are doing that ‘now’, but it depends on the context.

At first time I sow there the last Was Anderson’s movie Asteroid City.


AtThe first time I sowwent there the last, I saw Waes Andersons latest movie Asteroid City.

AtThe first time I sow there the lastwent, I saw Waes Anderson’s movie "Asteroid City."

This movie didn’t become my favourite movie from this director, but I still liked this trip to the cinema.


This movieEven though it didn’t become my favourite movie from this director, but I still likenjoyed thise trip to the cinema.

This movie didn’t becomewasn't my favourite movie fromby this director, but I still likenjoyed this trip to the cinema.

I like to go alone to the movie theatre so that nobody distracts me.


I like to go alonegoing to the movie theatre alone so that nobody distracts me.

This is my date with the movie theatre.


This is my date with the movie theatre.

This sentence is technically not wrong, but to me it sound quite unnatural since you can’t literally ‘go on a date’ with a movie theatre.

This is my date with the movie theatre.

I'm not quite sure what you mean by this.

I would like to go to the movie theatre more often, but I study a lot now.


I would like to go to the movie theatre more often, but Irecently I have been studying a lot now.

I would like to go to the movie theatre more often, but I study a lot nowlately I've been busy studying.

And also I want to learn the language faster because I would like to watch the film in the original language and to hear the actors' voices


And also I want to learn the languageEnglish faster because I would like to watch the film in theits original language and to hear the actors' voices.

AndI also I want to learn the language faster becauseEnglish more quickly,as I would like to watch the film in the original language and to hear the actors' voices.

You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.

Go Premium