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kikokun

June 17, 2024

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My Strange Experience

When I was suffering from a cervical sprain, I made sure to receive a special treatment (osteopathy) once a month. During one of those treatments, I had a strange experience.

I was lying on my back on the treatment bed.
I was conscious, or at least I thought I was, but I must have been in a daze and a dragon appeared in front of me. Of course, my eyes were closed.
It had a large face with big eyes. I felt the dragon would take me to the source of my suffering from the cervical injury.
As soon as I sensed I had mounted the dragon's back, I instantly traveled across time and space. It was like something out of a sci-fi movie.

In that moment, an incredibly eerie cross appeared. It was a dark, murky cross. On top of a hill, there was a building like a fortress.
Additionally, I sensed the word "Seljuk," which I had learned about in world history in school.
It was really odd.


頸椎捻挫で苦しんでいる時に月一回は必ず特殊な治療(オステオパシー)を受けていた。その時に奇妙な体験をした。
ベットの上であおむけになって治療を受けていた。その時に意識はちゃんとあったはずなのだが、もうろうとしたのだろうか、前の前に竜が現れた。もちろん目は閉じたままだ。大きな顔に大きな目。その竜がぼくを頸椎損傷で苦しんでいる原因のところに連れて行ってくれると言う。ぼくは竜の背に乗ったかと思うと、瞬時に時空を超え移動した。まるでSF映画の世界だった。
その瞬間、恐ろしいほど不気味な十字架が出てきた。どす黒い十字架だ。そして、丘の上には砦のような建物があった。おまけに、世界史で習ったセルジュクという言葉を感じた。

本当不思議だった。

龍 オステオパシー
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My Strange Experience

When I was suffering from a cervical sprain, I made sure to receive a special treatment (osteopathy) once a month.

During one of those treatments, I had a strange experience.

I was lying on my back on the treatment bed.

I was conscious, or at least I thought I was, but I must have been in a daze ands a dragon appeared in front of me.

Of course, my eyes were closed.

It had a large face with big eyes.

I felt the dragon would take me to the source of my suffering from the cervical injury.

As soon as I sensed I had mounted the dragon's back, I instantly traveled across time and space.

It was like something out of a sci-fifantasy movie.

sci-fi is more like, futuristic technology, space, or something.

In that moment, an incredibly eerie cross appeared.

It was a dark, murky cross.

On top of a hill, there was a building like a fortress.

Additionally, I sensed the word "Seljuk," which I had learned about in world history in school.

It was really odd.

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kikokun

June 18, 2024

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Thank you for teaching the meaningof "sci-fi".

My Strange Experience

When I was suffering from a cervical sprain, I made sure to receive a special treatment (osteopathy) once a month.

During one of those treatments, I had a strange experience.

I was lying on my back on the treatment bed.

I was conscious, or at least I thought I was, but I must have been in a daze and a dragon appeared in front of me.

Of course, my eyes were closed.

It had a large face with big eyes.

I felt the dragon would take me to the sourccause of my sufferpaing from the cervical injury.

As soon as I sensed I had mounted the dragon's back, I instantly traveled across time and space.

It was like something out of a sci-fi movie.

In that moment, an incredibly eerie cross appeared.

It was a dark, murky cross.

On top of a hill, there was a building like a fortress.

Additionally, I sensed the word "Seljuk," which I had learned about in world history in school.

It was really odd.

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Wow, very strange indeed!

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kikokun

June 18, 2024

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Thank you for your corrections. Maybe my previous life would have something to do with the crosade.

When I was suffering from a cervical sprain, I made sure to receive a special treatment (visit my osteopathy) once a month.

During one of thosea treatments, I had a strange experience.

I felt the dragon would take me to the source of my suffering from the cervical injury.

On top of a hill, there was a building like a fortress.

There is a difference between fort and fortress so double check which one you mean.

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Sounds like a bizarre dream. Thank you for sharing.

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kikokun

June 18, 2024

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Thank you for your corrections. Maybe my previous life would have something to do with the crosade.

On top of a hill, there was a building like a fortress.


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I was conscious, or at least I thought I was, but I must have been in a daze and a dragon appeared in front of me.


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It had a large face with big eyes.


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I felt the dragon would take me to the source of my suffering from the cervical injury.


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