July 31, 2020
My Story - My Least Favorite Food
I don't know why, but I don't like coriander. A lot of people tell me it's delicious, but I can't understand its appeal. It smells like a stink bug and feels like grass in my mouth. The only time I'll eat it is if I'm a guest. Luckily it's not common in Japan and easy to avoid.
なぜかわからないけど、パクチーが好きになれない。美味しいとたくさんの人に言われるけど、その魅力が理解できない。カメムシのような臭いがするし、口に入れると草のような感じがする。私がそれを食べるのは招かれているときだけだ。幸いにも日本では一般的ではないので避けやすい。
My Story - My Least Favorite Food
I don't know why, but I don't like coriander.
A lot of people tell me it's delicious, but I can't understand its appeal.
It smells like a stinky bug and feels like grass in my mouth.
A stink bug isn't a valid noun in English. The noun you have used is 'bug'. The adjective 'stinky' describes the bug.
The only time I'll eat it is if I'm a guest.
Luckily, it's not common in Japan and easy to avoid.
Added a comma after 'Luckily'
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Your English is easily understood by any English speaker. There might be an occasional need for clarification - but that's alright.
July 31, 2020
You write well! Please continue!
July 31, 2020
Thank you for your correcting! I will continue to learn English. :)
July 31, 2020
It smells like a stinky bug and feels like grass in my mouth.
A stink bug is a valid noun in English. It refers to a species of insect that is native to places such as Japan, China and Korea. The original sentence is correct.
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The only time I'll eat it is if I'm a guest. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Luckily it's not common in Japan and easy to avoid. Luckily, it's not common in Japan and easy to avoid. Added a comma after 'Luckily' |
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My Story - My Least Favorite Food This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I don't know why, but I don't like coriander. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A lot of people tell me it's delicious, but I can't understand its appeal. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It smells like a stink bug and feels like grass in my mouth. It smells like a stinky bug and feels like grass in my mouth. A stink bug isn't a valid noun in English. The noun you have used is 'bug'. The adjective 'stinky' describes the bug. |
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