July 31, 2020
My Story - My Brother and Sister
I have one brother and one sister. Everyone lives near my parents. My sister is a homemaker and she has a baby. She was a kindergarten teacher before she had a baby. My brother works for a shipping company. He has only one day off a week, so he has a busy life.
I see my sister occasionally with each other's children, but I rarely see my brother.
私には弟が一人、妹が一人います。みんな実家の近くに住んでいます。妹は主婦をしていて、赤ちゃんがいます。妹は子供を産む前は幼稚園の先生をしていました。弟は運送会社で働いています。弟は週に一日しか休みがないので、忙しい毎日を送っているようです。
妹とはお互いの子供を連れてたまに会いますが、弟とはほとんど会いません。
I have one brother and one sister and they both live near my parents.
The next sentence continues the idea of this sentence and this sentence is short, so I think you should combine them using the word "and".
Everyone lives near my parents.
My sister is a homemaker and she has a baby.
She was a kindergarten teacher before she had athe baby.
You can use the definitive article since you are referring to the baby she had.
He has only one day off a week, so he has a busy lifeis quite busy.
Saying he has a "busy life" is okay, but a little unnatural.
I see my sister occasionally with each other's children, but I rarely see my brother.
Who's children? Your sister's children or the children of your other family members?
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My Story - My Brother and Sister |
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I have one brother and one sister. I have one brother and one sister and they both live near my parents. The next sentence continues the idea of this sentence and this sentence is short, so I think you should combine them using the word "and". |
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Everyone lives near my parents. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My sister is a homemaker and she has a baby. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She was a kindergarten teacher before she had a baby. She was a kindergarten teacher before she had You can use the definitive article since you are referring to the baby she had. |
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My brother works for a shipping company. |
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He has only one day off a week, so he has a busy life. He has only one day off a week, so he Saying he has a "busy life" is okay, but a little unnatural. |
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I see my sister occasionally with each other's children, but I rarely see my brother. I see my sister occasionally with each other's children, but I rarely see my brother. Who's children? Your sister's children or the children of your other family members? |
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