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Onodak

July 31, 2020

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I have a wife, a daughter, parents, grandmother, a brother, and a sister.
I live with my wife and daughter. I don't live with my parents. My parents and siblings live near the same city.
My daughter is small, she is 8 months, so I and my wife play with her toys, and give her food. The rest of the time, I spend it watching TV shows and playing video games with my wife. We especially like to watch quiz shows and answer them.


私には妻、娘、両親、祖母、兄、妹がいます。
私は妻と娘と一緒に暮らしています。両親とは一緒に住んでいません。両親と兄弟は同じ市内の近くに住んでいます。
娘は8ヶ月で小さいので、私と妻が娘のおもちゃで遊んだり、ご飯をあげたりしています。それ以外の時間は、妻と一緒にテレビ番組を見たり、テレビゲームをしたりして過ごしています。特にクイズ番組を見て答えるのが好きです。

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My daughter is small, she is 8 months, so I and my wife and I play with her toys, and give her food.

My Story - Members of My Family

I have a wife, a daughter, parents, a grandmother, a brother, and a sister.

I live with my wife and daughter.

I don't live with my parents.

My parents and siblings live near the same city.by. (or: "in a nearby city" or "just outside the city" or something similar)

My daughter is small, she is 8only eight months old, so I and my wife and I play with her toys, and give her foodand feed her.

It's always "my wife and I", "my daughter and I", "my colleague and I" and never "I and my wife", "I and my daughter, etc.

TI spend the rest of themy time, I spend it watching TV shows and playing video games with my wife.

We especially like to watch quiz shows andwhile trying to answer them questions.

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My Story - Members of My Family


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I have a wife, a daughter, parents, grandmother, a brother, and a sister.


I have a wife, a daughter, parents, a grandmother, a brother, and a sister.

I live with my wife and daughter.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I don't live with my parents.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My parents and siblings live near the same city.


My parents and siblings live near the same city.by. (or: "in a nearby city" or "just outside the city" or something similar)

My daughter is small, she is 8 months, so I and my wife play with her toys, and give her food.


My daughter is small, she is 8only eight months old, so I and my wife and I play with her toys, and give her foodand feed her.

It's always "my wife and I", "my daughter and I", "my colleague and I" and never "I and my wife", "I and my daughter, etc.

My daughter is small, she is 8 months, so I and my wife and I play with her toys, and give her food.

The rest of the time, I spend it watching TV shows and playing video games with my wife.


TI spend the rest of themy time, I spend it watching TV shows and playing video games with my wife.

We especially like to watch quiz shows and answer them.


We especially like to watch quiz shows andwhile trying to answer them questions.

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