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buntaro

March 15, 2021

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My son's high school graduation

My son's high school graduation ended last week. Parents were unable to attend the graduation ceremony because of the coronavirus. That was unfortunate.
We ate sushi to celebrate my son's graduation at home. It was delicious! We were able to have a fun time.
Our family usually eats sushi or cake when we have something to celebrate. What do you usually eat at a celebration?

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My son's high school graduation ended last week.

My son graduated high school last week.

Parents were unable to attend the graduation ceremony because of the coronavirus.

ThatWhich was unfortunate.

We ate sushi to celebrate my son's graduation at home.

It was delicious!

We were able to have a fun time.

Our family usually eats sushi or cake when we have something to celebrate.

What do you usually eat at a celebration?

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buntaro

March 17, 2021

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Thank you so much!

My sSon's hHigh sSchool gGraduation

In English titles are always in capitals apart from words like 'the/of/and' :)

My son's high school graduation happended last week.

You can also say 'My son graduated high school last week' :)

Parents were unable to attend the graduation ceremony because of the cCoronavirus.

Coronavirus usually has a capital C :)

That was unfortunate.

We ate sushi to celebrate my son's graduation at home.

It was delicious!

We were able to have a fun time.

Our family usually eats sushi or cake when we have something to celebrate.

What do you usually eat at a celebration?

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Good job! I'm glad you still celebrated and congratulations to your son :)

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buntaro

March 16, 2021

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thank you!

My sSon's hHigh sSchool gGraduation

Capitalize almost all words in titles

My son's high school graduation endedwas last week.

Parents were unable to attend the graduation ceremony because of the coronavirus.

That was unfortunate.

We ate sushi to celebrate my son's graduation at home.

It was delicious!

We were able to have a fun time.

Our family usually eats sushi or cake when we have something to celebrate.

What do you usually eat at a celebration?

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Very nicely done =)

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buntaro

March 16, 2021

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Thank you!

My son's high school graduation


My sSon's hHigh sSchool gGraduation

Capitalize almost all words in titles

My sSon's hHigh sSchool gGraduation

In English titles are always in capitals apart from words like 'the/of/and' :)

My son's high school graduation ended last week.


My son's high school graduation endedwas last week.

My son's high school graduation happended last week.

You can also say 'My son graduated high school last week' :)

My son's high school graduation ended last week.

My son graduated high school last week.

Parents were unable to attend the graduation ceremony because of the coronavirus.


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