Feb. 6, 2020
My Son and a Baby Girl
Today, a school nurse stopped me when I took my son to the daycare center.
She said,
“Your son is really kind! He’s always pays attention to babies, and talking care of them! When a baby girl was crawling toward the wall, he stopped her with his hands softly. It was so adorable!”
I was really happy to hear that, and also happy that she often looks out for him.
I didn’t know how he spent days there because he always told me few things when I asked him about it, especially babies there.
The schools nurse made my day! :)
【息子と女の子の赤ちゃん】
今日、息子を保育所に送った時に、保健室の先生に呼び止められました。
彼女は、
「あなたの息子さん、とても優しいんですよ。いつも赤ちゃんの世話をしてくれるんです。女の子の赤ちゃんが壁に向かってハイハイしていた時、そっと手で赤ちゃんを止めたの。もう、それがたまらなくて！」
と言ってくれました。
それを聞いてうれしくなり、また保健室の先生が息子をよく見てくださっていることにもうれしく思いました。
私は、息子が保育所でどのように過ごしているか知りませんでした。
息子はいつもほとんど話さないのです。特に赤ちゃんのことについては。
保健室の先生のおかげで、いい一日になりました！
“Your son is really kind! He’s always pays attention to babies, and talkingkes care of them! When a baby girl was crawling toward the wall, he stopped her with his hands softly. It was so adorable!”
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I was really happy to hear that, and also happy that she often looks out for him.
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I didn’t know how he spent days there because he alwaysnever told me few thingsmuch about it when I asked him about it, especially about the babies there.
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The schools nurse made my day! :)
"He's" is short for "he is." We don't say "he is always pays attention," so we don't need to say "he's."
The last sentence is correct, but it is a little hard to read. This is a suggestion for a better way to phrase it.
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お息子さんは心が本当に優しそうですね。きょうこさんは上手なお母さんだからと思います。愉快ストーリを申してくれてありがとうございます！
Feb. 12, 2020
ありがとうございます！☺️
優しい子に育ってほしいな、と思います。
私の方が、息子に優しさを教えてもらう毎日です。
“Your son is really kind! He’s always pays attention to babies, and talkingkes care of them! When a baby girl was crawling toward thea wall, he gently stopped her with his hands softly. It was so adorable!”
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The schools nurse made my day! :)
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Sweet story. I just made a few suggestions.
Feb. 6, 2020
Thank you for the correction as always.🙏🏻
Your suggestions are really helpful!
My Son Aand Aa Baby Girl
Today, a school nurse stopped me when I took my son to the daycare center.
a school nurse
or
the school nurse
Generally, American schools have only one nurse if any at all, so we would say "the school nurse".
She said,
“Your son is really kind! He’s always pays attention to babies, and talkingkes care of them! When a baby girl was crawling toward the wall, he stopped her with his hands softly. It was so adorable!”
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I was really happy to hear that, and also happy that she often looks out for him.
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I didn’t know how he spent his days there because he alwaysonly told me a few things when I asked him about it, especially about the babies there.
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The schools nurse made my day! :)
...especially about the babies there.
Perhaps:
He hardly even mentioned the babies.
Or something like that...
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I love that she took a moment to tell you this about your son. :) Hugs.
Feb. 6, 2020
Thank you for the correction.🙏🏻
Yes, I had the same thought as yours!
It was really sweet of her. :)
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“Your son is really kind! He’s always pays attention to babies, and talking care of them! When a baby girl was crawling toward the wall, he stopped her with his hands softly. It was so adorable!” I was really happy to hear that, and also happy that she often looks out for him. I didn’t know how he spent days there because he always told me few things when I asked him about it, especially babies there. The schools nurse made my day! :) “Your son is really kind! He ...especially about the babies there. Perhaps: He hardly even mentioned the babies. Or something like that... “Your son is really kind! He “Your son is really kind! He’s always pays attention to babies, and ta "He's" is short for "he is." We don't say "he is always pays attention," so we don't need to say "he's." The last sentence is correct, but it is a little hard to read. This is a suggestion for a better way to phrase it. |
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